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khn08

Jan. 2, 2024

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To be honest, I just searched "useful websites for practicing wiriting" and clicked on the first article. I've never used a website of this kind, and have never entertained the idea of trying it out, until now. You see, I really have to improve my English this month, because in February I'm gonna have a very important interview. There is a camp held every year in America for teenagers around the world, and to actually get into it, you have to pass many rounds of interviews to be selected. I only found out about this last week, and while I'm fully aware that my language skills are lacking, especially my speaking, I still think that it'll be a good experience, even if I won't be chosen. After all, I can try again next year.

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To be honest, I just searched "useful websites for practicing wiriting" and clicked on the first article.

I've never used a website oflike this kind, and have never entertained the idea of trying it out, until now.

You see, I really have to improve my English this month, because in February I'm gonna have a very important interview.

There is a camp held every year in America for teenagers around the world, and to actually get into it, you have to pass many rounds of interviews to be selected.

I only found out about this last week, and while I'm fully aware that my language skills are lacking, especially my speaking, I still think that it'll be a good experience, even if I won't be'm not chosen.

This is a future event but it's common to use the present tense hypothetically.

After all, I can try again next year.

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Good luck! And welcome!

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khn08

Jan. 4, 2024

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Thanks a lot!

To be honest, I just searched for "useful websites for practicing wiriting" and clicked on the first articlwebsite.

I've never used a website oflike this kind, and have never entertained the idea ofthought about trying it out,one until now.

I'm assuming you're talking about this being the first time you've used a foreign language journaling site? An alternative to "I've never used a website like this" would be "I've never used a website where (you describe how exactly the site is different than things you've used before)"

You see, I really have toIt's imperative that I improve my English this month, because in February I'm gonnawill have a very important interview.

Gonna is acceptable in spoken, casual conversation but not in formal English.

There is a camp held every yearyearly summer camp opportunity in America for teenagers all around the world, and to actually get into it. To be selected, you have to pass many rounds of interviews to be selected.

I only found out about this last week, and w. While I'm fully aware that my language skills are lacking, especially my speakingwith respect to my speaking proficiency, I still think that it'll be a good experience, even if I won't be whether or not I'm chosen.

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Good luck on the interview! Just a small tip- when sending formal emails or generally writing for other professional occasions, it's better to avoid contractions (ex. something like "I'm" should be written as "I am"). It's fine for this journal, but I wanted to tell you this especially since you said that you would need to improve your formal English.

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khn08

Jan. 4, 2024

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Thank you!

To be honest, I just searched "useful websites for practicing wiriting" and clicked on the first article.

Probably just a typo, but I've marked it for completeness.

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Your writing is really really good! Best of luck getting into the camp.

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khn08

Jan. 4, 2024

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Thank you!!

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To be honest, I just searched "useful websites for practicing wiriting" and clicked on the first article.


To be honest, I just searched "useful websites for practicing wiriting" and clicked on the first article.

Probably just a typo, but I've marked it for completeness.

To be honest, I just searched for "useful websites for practicing wiriting" and clicked on the first articlwebsite.

To be honest, I just searched "useful websites for practicing wiriting" and clicked on the first article.

I've never used a website of this kind, and have never entertained the idea of trying it out, until now.


I've never used a website oflike this kind, and have never entertained the idea ofthought about trying it out,one until now.

I'm assuming you're talking about this being the first time you've used a foreign language journaling site? An alternative to "I've never used a website like this" would be "I've never used a website where (you describe how exactly the site is different than things you've used before)"

I've never used a website oflike this kind, and have never entertained the idea of trying it out, until now.

You see, I really have to improve my English this month, because in February I'm gonna have a very important interview.


You see, I really have toIt's imperative that I improve my English this month, because in February I'm gonnawill have a very important interview.

Gonna is acceptable in spoken, casual conversation but not in formal English.

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There is a camp held every year in America for teenagers around the world, and to actually get into it, you have to pass many rounds of interviews to be selected.


There is a camp held every yearyearly summer camp opportunity in America for teenagers all around the world, and to actually get into it. To be selected, you have to pass many rounds of interviews to be selected.

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I only found out about this last week, and while I'm fully aware that my language skills are lacking, especially my speaking, I still think that it'll be a good experience, even if I won't be chosen.


I only found out about this last week, and w. While I'm fully aware that my language skills are lacking, especially my speakingwith respect to my speaking proficiency, I still think that it'll be a good experience, even if I won't be whether or not I'm chosen.

I only found out about this last week, and while I'm fully aware that my language skills are lacking, especially my speaking, I still think that it'll be a good experience, even if I won't be'm not chosen.

This is a future event but it's common to use the present tense hypothetically.

After all, I can try again next year.


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