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Flan_girl

Nov. 19, 2020

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I'm so happy I found LangCorrect. I feel everyone here is so kind and helpful (at least I haven't encountered anyone rude yet). I really appreciate every correction and comment. It means a lot to me that strangers who don't even know me take time out of their lives to read what I write and help me to learn from my mistakes. I'm quite a perfectionist, so I hate making mistakes. However, I'm starting to realize that mistakes are an important and necessary part of the learning process.
I also enjoy correcting other people's writing, as it makes me feel helpful.
I hope someday I make a friend here. It would be so interesting and fun to talk to someone who lives in other country and speaks another language.
Do you feel the same?

Corrections

I hope someday II can make a friend here someday.

The word "can" with the word "make," emphasizes that this is something that may happen in the future. It also sounds more natural for the time-related word (i.e. someday) to appear at the end of the sentence. I'm not sure what the grammatical rule for this, but another alternative to the helpful edit above.

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Flan_girl

Nov. 21, 2020

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Thank you!

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I'm so happy I found LangCorrect.

I feel everyone here is so kind and helpful (at least I haven't encountered anyone rude yet).

I really appreciate every correction and comment.

It means a lot to me that strangers who don't even know me take time out of their lives to read what I write and help me to learn from my mistakes.

I'm quite a perfectionist, so I hate making mistakes.

However, I'm starting to realize that mistakes are an important and necessary part of the learning process.

I also enjoy correcting other people's writing, as it makes me feel helpful.

I hope someday I make a friend here one day.

I don't know why, but it is more natural to me when written this way.

It would be so interesting and fun to talk to someone who lives in another country and speaks another language.

Do you feel the same way?

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Nearly perfect! Your writing was very smooth and natural.

I feel the same way about making mistakes. At first, fear of making mistakes made me avoid writing or speaking. I think that writing regularly on LangCorrect has helped me change my perspective on making mistakes. I'm excited to read more of what you write 😊

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Flan_girl

Nov. 20, 2020

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Aww thank you so much! :)

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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm so happy I found LangCorrect.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I feel everyone here is so kind and helpful (at least I haven't encountered anyone rude yet).


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I really appreciate every correction and comment.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It means a lot to me that strangers who don't even know me take time out of their lives to read what I write and help me to learn from my mistakes.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm quite a perfectionist, so I hate making mistakes.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

However, I'm starting to realize that mistakes are an important and necessary part of the learning process.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I also enjoy correcting other people's writing, as it makes me feel helpful.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I hope someday I make a friend here.


I hope someday I make a friend here one day.

I don't know why, but it is more natural to me when written this way.

I hope someday II can make a friend here someday.

The word "can" with the word "make," emphasizes that this is something that may happen in the future. It also sounds more natural for the time-related word (i.e. someday) to appear at the end of the sentence. I'm not sure what the grammatical rule for this, but another alternative to the helpful edit above.

It would be so interesting and fun to talk to someone who lives in other country and speaks another language.


It would be so interesting and fun to talk to someone who lives in another country and speaks another language.

Do you feel the same?


Do you feel the same way?

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