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jhon_ee09

June 23, 2025

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Lamb hamburger

I would like to try a lamb hamburger, because I heard lamb tastes gamey, and I have never tried gamey flavors. I'm not sure if I'm gonna like this flavour, but I'm curious.

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Lamb hHamburger

I would like to try a lamb hamburger, because I heard lamb tastes gamey, and I have never tried gamey flavors.

I would like to try a lamb hamburger. I've heard that lamb tastes gamey, and I've never tried anything that tastes gamey.

I'm not sure if I'm gonna like this flavour, but I'm curious.

I'm not sure if I'm gonna like it, but I'm curious.

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Gonna is very slangy, but I left it since it seems like you are trying to write very casually. You would never use gonna in a professional setting.

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sfalcheck

June 23, 2025

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Good job!

I'm not sure if I'm gonna like thise flavour, but I'm curious.

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Good job!

I haven't eaten a lamb burger yet, but I've had lamb shanks before and they're delicious. I think you'll enjoy a lamb burger.

I woul'd like to try a lamb hamburger, because I've heard lamb tastes gamey, and I ha've never tried gamey flavors.

I'd is an informal contradiction for "I would", and most people use it, and "I'm" similarly means "I am".

I'm not sure if I'm gonna like ithis flavour, but I'm curious.

Lamb hHamburger

I would like to try a lamb hamburger, because I've heard lamb tastes gamey, and I have never tried gamey flavors.

I'm not sure if I'm gonna like this flavour, but I'm curious.

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Very good!

I would like to try a lamb hamburger, because I heard lamb tastes gamey, and I have never tried gamey flavors.

“because I heard lamp tastes gamey” is a dependent clause, so it doesn’t require a comma before it.

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Great job! :D

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yellowman

June 23, 2025

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I think commas can sometimes come before "because" clauses and dependent clauses more broadly; for example, the following sentence could be correct :

The dog didn't want to eat, because he wanted to play instead.

But it might be misleading if it were to say:

The dog didn't want to eat because he wanted to play instead.

The first sentence means that the dog definitely didn't want to eat, because of a specific reason. The second sentence could either mean that or it could mean that the dog wanted to eat, but not because of that reason.

Or:

I have never been to Timbuktu, which is where she was born.

the comma is fine there

I was curious about this and found this link: https://style.mla.org/commas-with-because/

Anyway, I think the corrected sentence would be:

I would like to try a lamb hamburger because I heard lamb tastes gamey and I have never tried gamey flavors.

The "because" part introduces two reasons. Another case where both versions show different meanings:

"I won the prize because I worked hard and I had some luck." vs. "I won the prize because I worked hard, and I had some luck."

Lamb hamburger


Lamb hHamburger

Lamb hHamburger

I would like to try a lamb hamburger, because I heard lamb tastes gamey, and I have never tried gamey flavors.


I would like to try a lamb hamburger, because I heard lamb tastes gamey, and I have never tried gamey flavors.

“because I heard lamp tastes gamey” is a dependent clause, so it doesn’t require a comma before it.

I would like to try a lamb hamburger, because I've heard lamb tastes gamey, and I have never tried gamey flavors.

I woul'd like to try a lamb hamburger, because I've heard lamb tastes gamey, and I ha've never tried gamey flavors.

I'd is an informal contradiction for "I would", and most people use it, and "I'm" similarly means "I am".

I would like to try a lamb hamburger, because I heard lamb tastes gamey, and I have never tried gamey flavors.

I would like to try a lamb hamburger. I've heard that lamb tastes gamey, and I've never tried anything that tastes gamey.

I'm not sure if I'm gonna like this flavour, but I'm curious.


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I'm not sure if I'm gonna like ithis flavour, but I'm curious.

I'm not sure if I'm gonna like thise flavour, but I'm curious.

I'm not sure if I'm gonna like this flavour, but I'm curious.

I'm not sure if I'm gonna like it, but I'm curious.

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