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SummerTeaWater

April 12, 2022

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Lack Physical Strength

As the weather gets hotter, I feel that I lack physical strength.

These days, I doze off because I am tired at work.

Some say it's because of spring fever.

Anyway, I should recover my strength by eating healthy food.

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Lacking Physical Strength

These days, I I often doze off at work because I am tired at work.

There's nothing wrong with the original sentence. But I would keep in mind we don't say "these days" as often as you would say 요즘 in Korean.

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SummerTeaWater

April 13, 2022

402

Thank you!

Lacking Physical Strength

As the weather gets hotter, I feel that I lack physical strength.

These days, I doze off because I am tired at work.

Some say it's because of spring fever.

Anyway, I should recover my strength by eating healthy food.

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SummerTeaWater

April 13, 2022

402

Thank you!

Lacking Physical Strength

or "lack of physical strength"

As the weather gets hotter, I feel that I lack physical strength.

These days, I doze off because I am tired at work.

Some say it's because of spring fever.

Anyway, I should recover my strength by eating healthy food.

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Perfect writing! I hope you feel better soon :)

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SummerTeaWater

April 13, 2022

402

Thank you very much.

I Lack Physical Strength

Because you are the subject, it is better to include a subject pronoun ("I") in the title. Otherwise, the topic is a little unclear.

As the weather gets hotter, I feel that I lack physical strength.

These days, I doze off at work because I am tired at work.

Some say it's because of spring fever.

Anyway, I should recover my strength by eating healthy food.

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I hope you feel more energetic soon!

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SummerTeaWater

April 13, 2022

402

Thank you very much.

Lack Physical Strength


I Lack Physical Strength

Because you are the subject, it is better to include a subject pronoun ("I") in the title. Otherwise, the topic is a little unclear.

Lacking Physical Strength

or "lack of physical strength"

Lacking Physical Strength

Lacking Physical Strength

As the weather gets hotter, I feel that I lack physical strength.


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These days, I doze off because I am tired at work.


These days, I doze off at work because I am tired at work.

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These days, I I often doze off at work because I am tired at work.

There's nothing wrong with the original sentence. But I would keep in mind we don't say "these days" as often as you would say 요즘 in Korean.

Some say it's because of spring fever.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Anyway, I should recover my strength by eating healthy food.


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