June 3, 2026
I have double lessons called "core"on every Wednesday.
The subject that I do during core time is random and it can change depending on the teacher. I had my music teacher today. During resent music lessons, I worked on making a plan of teaching how to play the piano to grade 2. I made presentations and more.
I taught a grade 2 student how to play the piano. I've got nervous but I like to think that I could well.
After we finished teaching, the teacher allowed us to play something that we wanted to do. We voted for what we want to do, and it decided to go outside. Some peopel played football or valleyball. I read a book and wrote refrections of my lesson on the assignment that I would have to submite next week.
Piano tTeaching
Piano Teaching
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Every Wednesday, I have double lessons called "core"on every Wednesday.
Every Wednesday, I have double lessons called "core".
Changed sentence structure for simplification :)
The subject that I do during core time is random and it can change depending on the teacher. The subject that I do during core time is random and it can change depending on the teacher.
Suggestion: instead of random, you could use the word ‘variable’. :) variable = it varies = it changes
I had my music teacher today. I had my music teacher today.
Suggestion: Today, I had my music teacher.
This is how we tend to structure these sorts of sentences in English.
During rescent music lessons, I worked on making a plan tof teaching how to play the piano to grade 2 students.
During recent music lessons, I worked on making a plan to teach the piano to grade 2 students.
You can just say “how to teach the piano to …”. Same applies to other instruments, like “I taught the guitar to my students” or “I’m planning to teach the saxophone to…”
Today, I taught a grade 2 student how to play the piano. Today, I taught a grade 2 student how to play the piano.
I've got was nervous but I like to think that I couldid well.
I was nervous but I like to think that I did well.
After we finished teaching, the teacher allowed us to play something thatdo whatever we wanted to do.
After we finished teaching, the teacher allowed us to do whatever we wanted.
We voted for what we want to do, and it decided to go outside.
We voted to go outside.
I’m cutting down on your sentences to add clarity :)
Some peopele played football or vaolleyball.
Some people played football or volleyball.
I read a book and wrote refrlections ofn my lesson, and on the assignment that I would haveill need to submite next week.
I read a book and wrote reflections on my lesson, and on the assignment that I will need to submit next week.
Feedback
Well done! :)
Piano tTeaching
Piano Teaching
I have double lessons called "core"on every Wednesday.
I have double lessons called "core" every Wednesday.
The subject that I do during core time is random and it can change depending on the teacher.
I had my music teacher today.
During rescent music lessons, I've worked on making a plan of teaching how to play the piano to grade 2.
During recent music lessons, I've worked on making a plan of teaching how to play the piano to grade 2.
I made presentations and more.
I taught a grade 2 student how to play the piano.
I've got nervous but I'd like to think that I couldid well.
I got nervous but I'd like to think that I did well.
I'm correcting with the assumption this sentence is about this specific time teaching and not in general when you teach.
After we finished teaching, the teacher allowed us to play something that we wanted to do.
After we finished teaching, the teacher allowed us to play something that we wanted.
We voted for what we wanted to do, and itwe decided to go outside.
We voted for what we wanted to do, and we decided to go outside.
Some peopele played football or vaolleyball.
Some people played football or volleyball.
I read a book and wrote refrlections ofn my lesson onfor the assignment that I would have to submite next week.
I read a book and wrote reflections on my lesson for the assignment that I would have to submit next week.
Feedback
Good job teaching!
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Piano |
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I have double lessons called "core"on every Wednesday.
I have double lessons called "core"
Every Wednesday, I have double lessons called "core" Changed sentence structure for simplification :)
Every Wednesday I have double lessons called "core" |
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The subject that I do during core time is random and it can change depending on the teacher. This sentence has been marked as perfect! The subject that I do during core time is random and it can change depending on the teacher. The subject that I do during core time is random and it can change depending on the teacher. Suggestion: instead of random, you could use the word ‘variable’. :) variable = it varies = it changes This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I had my music teacher today. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I had my music teacher today. I had my music teacher today. Suggestion: Today, I had my music teacher. This is how we tend to structure these sorts of sentences in English. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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During resent music lessons, I worked on making a plan of teaching how to play the piano to grade 2.
During re
During re You can just say “how to teach the piano to …”. Same applies to other instruments, like “I taught the guitar to my students” or “I’m planning to teach the saxophone to…”
During re I frequently hear my friends that are teachers refer to the material they have prepared for their students as their "lesson plan". |
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I made presentations and more. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I made presentations and more. I made presentations and more. Sentence is correct, but could sound a little more natural w/ (with) something like: "My lesson plan included presentations and more." |
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I taught a grade 2 student how to play the piano. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Today, I taught a grade 2 student how to play the piano. Today, I taught a grade 2 student how to play the piano. I taught a grade 2 student how to play the piano. I taught a grade 2 student how to play the piano. Sentence is correct, but the reader could use a little more context here. It appears that you taught the grade 2 student during one of your "core" lessons? You could add "After preparing my plan, my teacher watched as I taught a grade 2 student how to play the piano." |
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I've got nervous but I like to think that I could well.
I I'm correcting with the assumption this sentence is about this specific time teaching and not in general when you teach.
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I've got nervous, but I like to think that I |
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After we finished teaching, the teacher allowed us to play something that we wanted to do.
After we finished teaching, the teacher allowed us to play something that we wanted
After we finished teaching, the teacher allowed us to
After we finished teaching, the teacher |
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We voted for what we want to do, and it decided to go outside.
We voted for what we wanted to do, and
We voted I’m cutting down on your sentences to add clarity :)
We voted for what we want to do, and |
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Some peopel played football or valleyball.
Some peop
Some peop
Some peop |
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I read a book and wrote refrections of my lesson on the assignment that I would have to submite next week.
I read a book and wrote ref
I read a book and wrote ref
I decided to read a book and then wrote ref |
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