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A New Flower on My Balcony

It's quite late, and I just want to show you guys a new type of flower in my balcony garden.

Here it is: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/Z4-6uzdL31Y, a special morning glory.

I nurtured it from the size of a thumb to a blooming flower.

It's very fulfilling!

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A New Flower on My Balcony


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It's quite late, and I just want to show you guys a new type of flower in my balcony garden.


It's quite late, and I just want to show you guys a new type of flower in my balcony garden. It's quite late and I just want to show you guys a new type of flower in my balcony garden.

It's quite late, and I justbut I still want to show you guys a new type of flower in my balcony garden. It's quite late, but I still want to show you guys a new type of flower in my balcony garden.

I assume you wanted to tie together it being late and it being unusual that you're posting at this time so I adjusted it to 'but' for a contrast and 'still' to express that!

Here it is: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/Z4-6uzdL31Y, a special morning glory.


I nurtured it from the size of a thumb to a blooming flower.


It's very fulfilling!


It' was very fulfilling! It was very fulfilling!

It's hard to explain but using 'it's' here makes me think of 'it is' or the plural. It's technically right, I just changed it to what feels more natural.

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