yesterday
Starting my self-preparation for TOEFL
Hellо, I am a student from Moscow. This year I will finish my bachelor degree in field of Robotics and Mechatronics and want to continue my study in Europe on master degree. To do this I need to pass TOEFL exam. I have just explored that it will be easier for me to continue learning English if I see the result of my preparation. I hope that langcorrect will help to examine my progress in writing tasks. Thank you in advance for any feedback on this text. Have a nice day!
Starting my self-preparation for TOEFL
Hellо, I am a student from Moscow.
This year I will finish my bachelor's degree in the field of Robotics and Mechatronics and want to continue my study in Europe onfor a master's degree.
To do this I need to pass TOEFL exam.
I have just explodiscovered that it will be easier for me to continue learning English if I see the result of my preparation.
I think this is what you meant.
It sounds like you are saying "I've found that that I'm more motivated to learn english when I can see the results of my preparation"
I hope that langcorrect will help to examine my progress in writing tasks.
Thank you in advance for any feedback on this text.
Have a nice day!
yesterday
Thank You!
Starting my self-preparation for TOEFL
Hellо, I am a student from Moscow.
This year I will finish my bBachelor's degree in the field of Robotics and Mechatronics, and want to continue my studyies in Europe on mfor a Master's degree.
To do this I need to pass the TOEFL exam.
I have just explodiscovered that it will be easier for me to continue learning English if I see the result of my preparation.
I put "discovered" because it's more similar to "explored," but I think the most natural way to say this is "I have just realized"
It's kind of hard to explain why "explored" is wrong, but "explore" focuses more on the process (thinking about or searching for information) than the result (finding the information, coming to a realization). So "explore" is often used with question clauses, ie. "We explored how we could lower production costs." It's also a little corporate/formal sounding.
I hope that lLangcorrect will help to examinme evaluate my progress in writing tasks.
"evaluate" is a more precise word choice, "examine" is much broader and to me, it feels a little odd when used for "progress"
Thank you in advance for any feedback on this text.
Have a nice day!
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Welcome! Your name is eerily similar to mine... although "geezer" means old man (but you sound like a young college student? xD), and "gaezer" is gibberish
yesterday
Hello, thank you for your very detailed feedback. It is fun that our niknames is eerly similar) I heard that geezer means old man, but I just like how it sounds in speach, I am a 4th grade student actually) Nice to meet you!
yesterday
Np! Lol, yeah "geezer" is fun to say. Nice to meet you too. (P.S. 4th grade refers to students in elementary school :P For college we say 4th year, or you could say "I'm a senior in college")
yesterday
Actually since European English is more relevant to you, in Europe apparently they say "Year 4" where in the US we say "4th grade," but I think their college/university terms are the same as ours
Starting my self-preparation for TOEFL
Hellо, I am a student from Moscow.
This year I will finish my bachelor degree in field of Robotics and Mechatronics and want to continue my studyies in Europe on master degree..¶
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want to pursue my masters in Europe
To do this I need to pass the TOEFL exam.
I have just explorrealised that it will be easier for me to continue learning English if I see the result of my preparation.
Not sure what you are trying to say here
I hope that langcorrect will help to examineme to track my progress in writing tasks.
Thank you in advance for any feedback on this text.
Have a nice day!
This year I will finish my bBachelors degree in the field of Robotics and Mechatronics and want to continue my studyies in Europe on mwith a Masters degree.
To do this I need to pass the TOEFL exam.
I have just explorrealized that it will be easier for me to continue learning English, if I see the results of my preparation.
I hope that langcorrect will help to examine my progress in writing tasks.
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