Aug. 4, 2024
A Practice of the Word "Aware" (83)
I'd like to understand the word "aware" and I made a short story using it.
When a boy was 5 years old, his father yelled at him so much.
The boy was too young to understand why he got yelled at, but he just cried.
Since then he has been scared of his father.
Now he has turned 10 years old and he is still always aware of his father's mood. (by his facial expressions)
Does this use sounds okay? or are there any better expressions in this situation?
Aware という言葉を理解したいのでその言葉を使って短い話を作りました。
ある男の子が5歳の時お父さんにひどく怒られました。
男の子は小さすぎてなぜ怒られたかわかりませんでした。
それ以来彼は、ずっとお父さんが怖いです。
今彼は、10歳になりましたが、今だにお父さんの顔色を意識して生活しています。（顔色をうかがって生活しています）
この使い方は大丈夫ですか？他にこのシチュエーションでいい表現はありますか？
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I'd like to understand the word "aware" and I made a short story using it.
When Once there was a boy who was 5 years old, and his father yelled at him so mucha lot.
Once there was a boy who was 5 years old, and his father yelled at him a lot.
The boy was too young to understand why he got yelled at, butso he just cried.
The boy was too young to understand why he got yelled at, so he just cried.
Since then he has been scared of his father.
Now he has turned 10 years old and he is still always aware of his father's mood.
(by his facial expressions) Does this use sounds okay?
or are there any better expressions in this situation?
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You've got the meaning down! "Aware of his father's mood" is okay but in this case "wary of his father's mood" might work better since it is a bit more negative.
Aug. 4, 2024
Thank you so much for your corrections! Thank you for the new word "wary"
A Practice of the Word "Aware"
Practice of the Word "Aware"
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Practicing the Word "Aware"
I'd like to understand the word "aware" and I made a short story using it.
When a boy was 5 years old, his father yelled at him so much. When a boy was 5 years old, his father yelled at him so much.
Or "his father yelled at him a lot."
The boy was too young to understand why he got yelled at, butso he just cried.
The boy was too young to understand why he got yelled at, so he just cried.
Since then he has been scared of his father.
Now he has turned 10 years old and he is still always aware of his father's mood.
(by his facial expressions)
Does this usage sounds okay?
(by his facial expressions)
Does this usage sound okay?
or are there any better expressions in this situation?
Feedback
"Aware" in your sentence sounds good to me. There are some other words/expressions you also could use instead of "aware" in your sentence (like "mindful of" and "conscious of"). But these words basically just have the same meaning as "aware."
Aug. 4, 2024
Thank you so much for your corrections! It's confusing for me to use the three words "mindful, conscious and aware", but at least I understand that they have a similar meaning. I'll try to use them(^^)
I'd like to understand the word "aware" and I made a short story using it. I'd like to understand the word "aware" and I made a short story using it.
The boy was too young to understand why he got yelled at, butso he just cried.
The boy was too young to understand why he got yelled at, so he just cried.
Now he has turned 10 years old and he is still always awareconscious of his father's mood.
Now he has turned 10 years old and he is still always conscious of his father's mood.
(by his facial expressions)
Does this usage sounds okay?
(by his facial expressions)
Does this usage sound okay?
Yes.
Aug. 4, 2024
Thank you so much for your corrections!
When a boy was 5 years old, his father yelled at him so mucha lot.
When a boy was 5 years old, his father yelled at him a lot.
The boy was too young to understand why he got yelled at, butso he just cried.
The boy was too young to understand why he got yelled at, so he just cried.
(by his facial expressions)
Does this use sounds okay?
(by his facial expressions)
Does this use sound okay?
Feedback
I think "aware" fits very well here. Nicely done!
Aug. 4, 2024
Thank you so much for your corrections!
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(by his facial expressions) Does this use sounds okay?
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I'd like to understand the word "aware" and I made a short story using it. I'd like to understand the word "aware" and I made a short story using it. I'd like to understand the word "aware" and I made a short story using it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When a boy was 5 years old, his father yelled at him so much.
When a boy was 5 years old, his father yelled at him When a boy was 5 years old, his father yelled at him so much. When a boy was 5 years old, his father yelled at him so much. Or "his father yelled at him a lot." |
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The boy was too young to understand why he got yelled at, but he just cried.
The boy was too young to understand why he got yelled at,
The boy was too young to understand why he got yelled at,
The boy was too young to understand why he got yelled at,
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Now he has turned 10 years old and he is still always aware of his father's mood.
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