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An Apple a Day Keeps the Doctor Away
If you eat healthy food especially apples every day, you'll stay healthy and the doctor doesn't need to see you.
I usually eat an apple for breakfast and then go for a walk.
What a lovely day!
It's fresh breezy, a little bit nippy.
I lived with my parents deep in the mountains.
Someone keeps horses here.
I'm walking past a meadow and you can see a horse poo.
I picked up a horse paddy and took it to the farm.
Horse poo is an excellent fertilizer.
一天一个苹果，医生远离我
如果每天吃健康的食物，尤其苹果，你就会保持健康，医生也就无需来看你了。
我早餐吃一个苹果，然后去散步。
多么美好的一天啊！
天气微风拂面，带着一丝寒意。
我与父母住在深山之中。
有人在这里养马。
走过一片草地，你可以看到一坨马粪。
我捡起马粪，带去农场。
马粪是非常好的肥料。
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An Apple a Day Keeps the Doctor Away
If you eat healthy food especially apples every day, you'll stay healthy and the doctor doeswon't need to see you.
If you eat healthy food especially apples every day, you'll stay healthy and the doctor won't need to see you.
Just to stay in the future tense
I usually eat an apple for breakfast and then go for a walk.
What a lovely day! What a lovely day!
This exclamation mostly works for describing a specific day (eg. "We hiked, we had a picnic, then we went for a swim in the river." "Wow, what a lovely day!")
In the previous sentence you talk about something you do all the time/often, so it wouldn't fit this "ongoing action" context. I would suggest:
- It's always a lovely time
- I always enjoy days like these
- This is always a nice way to start my day
Or something along those lines
IAt the moment it's fresh, breezy, and a little bit nippy.
At the moment it's fresh, breezy, and a little bit nippy.
Or: "today" instead of "at the moment"
I lived with my parents deep in the mountains.
Someone keeps horses here.
I'mToday I was walking past a meadow and you can seeI saw a horse poo.
Today I was walking past a meadow and I saw a horse poo.
Your next sentence is in past tense, so I changed this one to match it. Otherwise you could write it as: "When you walk past the meadows, you can see horse manure."
You can also use "manure" for farm animal poo, especially when it's used as a fertiliser
I picked up a horsmanure paddtty and took it back to the farm.
I picked up a manure patty and took it back to the farm.
Paddy = a nickname for Patrick OR a type of field used to grow rice OR a slang word for Irish person
Patty = usually means a disc shaped food, like a hamburger meat patty. Horse patty may sound like a hamburger patty made of horse meat. I think manure patty would work though.
Cowpat = disc of round poo from a cow
Horse poo is an excellent fertilizer.
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An Apple a Day Keeps the Doctor Away This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If you eat healthy food especially apples every day, you'll stay healthy and the doctor doesn't need to see you.
If you eat healthy food especially apples every day, you'll stay healthy and the doctor Just to stay in the future tense |
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I usually eat an apple for breakfast and then go for a walk. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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What a lovely day! What a lovely day! What a lovely day! This exclamation mostly works for describing a specific day (eg. "We hiked, we had a picnic, then we went for a swim in the river." "Wow, what a lovely day!") In the previous sentence you talk about something you do all the time/often, so it wouldn't fit this "ongoing action" context. I would suggest: - It's always a lovely time - I always enjoy days like these - This is always a nice way to start my day Or something along those lines |
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It's fresh breezy, a little bit nippy.
Or: "today" instead of "at the moment" |
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I lived with my parents deep in the mountains. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Someone keeps horses here. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'm walking past a meadow and you can see a horse poo.
Your next sentence is in past tense, so I changed this one to match it. Otherwise you could write it as: "When you walk past the meadows, you can see horse manure." You can also use "manure" for farm animal poo, especially when it's used as a fertiliser |
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I picked up a horse paddy and took it to the farm.
I picked up a Paddy = a nickname for Patrick OR a type of field used to grow rice OR a slang word for Irish person Patty = usually means a disc shaped food, like a hamburger meat patty. Horse patty may sound like a hamburger patty made of horse meat. I think manure patty would work though. Cowpat = disc of round poo from a cow |
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Horse poo is an excellent fertilizer. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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