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Too Tired to Fall Asleep

Sometimes I feel too tired to sleep. It sounds weird, but I believe it happens to more sensitive people.
When I was in college, I lived in a dorm room with three roommates. I had a close relationship with my roommates; we usually chatted a lot before sleep. I appreciated the relationship, but I always found it hard to fall asleep after a long talk. At that time, I didn't know why. If I was so tired, why couldn't I fall asleep? I understand now that after a long period of activity, I need time to calm my body down.
Since I live alone, it's easier to build my own sleeping routine. I turn on the night light an hour before sleep and listen to a podcast episode I have already finished. A stable sleeping schedule creates a stable mind. It is hard to maintain, but it is worth it.

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Too Tired to Fall Asleep

It sounds weird, but I believe it happens to more sensitive people.

When I was in college, I lived in a dorm room with three roommates.

I had a close relationship with my roommates; we usually chatted a lot before sleep.

I appreciated the relationship, but I always found it hard to fall asleep after a long talk.

If I was so tired, why couldn't I fall asleep?

Since I live alone, it's easier to build my own sleeping routine.

A stable sleeping schedule creates a stable mind.

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abc90377

June 12, 2024

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Too Tired to Fall Asleep

Sometimes I feel too tired to sleep.

If I was so tired, why couldn't I fall asleep?

A stable sleeping schedule creates a stable mind.

It is hard to maintain, but it is worth it.

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abc90377

June 12, 2024

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Too Tired to Fall Asleep

Sometimes I feel too tired to sleep.

It sounds weird, but I believe it happens to more sensitive people.

When I was in college, I lived in a dorm room with three roommates.

I had a close relationship with my roommates; we usually chatted a lot before sleep.

I appreciated the relationship, but I always found it hard to fall asleep after a long talk.

At that time, I didn't know why.

If I was so tired, why couldn't I fall asleep?

I understand now that after a long period of activity, I need time to calm my body down.

Since I live alone, it's easier to build my own sleeping routine.

A stable sleeping schedule creates a stable mind.

It is hard to maintain, but it is worth it.

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abc90377

June 12, 2024

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Sometimes I feel too tired to sleep.

It sounds weird, but I believe it happens to more sensitive people.

When I was in college, I lived in a dorm room with three roommates.

At that time, I didn't know why.

If I was so tired, why couldn't I fall asleep?

It is hard to maintain, but it is worth it.

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abc90377

June 12, 2024

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Since I live alone, it’s easier to build my own sleeping routine.


It sounds weird, but I believe it happens to people who are more sensitive.


At that time, I didn’t know why.


If I was so tired, why couldn’t I fall asleep?


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I appreciated the relationship, but I always found it hard to fall asleep after a long talk.


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