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Reading in English. Extensive vs Intensive Learning

A week ago, I started reading in English. Again. My previous experience had substantial influence not only on my English proficiency, but also on me as a person. However, I decided to seriously adjust my reading style. First of all, I have switched my consuming device from a PC to an E-Reader. Secondly, I implemented the habit of reading into my daily routine. Now I do it every day for approximately one hour before going to sleep. Thirdly, instead of looking up every new word and making an anki-card out of it, as I did earlier, I decided to interrupt my reading flow as rarely as possible.
As far as I know, this type of reading is called extensive learning, and it can also apply for listening. On the other hand, there is so-called intensive learning. It means that one deliberately learns every new word which he encounters. Without any doubt, the second approach is much more powerful in terms of progress and actual learning. However, some individuals argue that it does not bring them enough joy, compared to extensive learning. They believe that the best way to acquire a new language is to immerse oneself in it: either by reading or by listening. Although this idea has merit, I found that combining these two strategies (intensive and extensive learning) makes the most sense for me. For instance, for my German learning I tend to maximize the deliberate learning over the "natural" one in order to get a strong foundation of intermediate speaker. However, when I have some spare time outside, I have no problem with listening to some podcasts without transcription. Even though I don't learn every single unknown word, it helps me to develop my listening skills and just enjoy the content itself.
Anyways, I am really excited to start reading again. My reading list on GoodReads is overwhelmed with literature! A good part of them are non-fiction (e.g. "The Innovators",''Sapiens'',"A Short History of Nearly Everything'', etc.). The language there is contemporary and pretty accessible for my level. However, I also have some huge plans for fiction literature, especially for books which I enjoyed reading in Russian (e.g. "Martin Iden"';"East of Eden", ''1984'', ''Stoner'' etc.).


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Reading in English. Extensive vs Intensive Learning

A week ago, I started reading in English.

Again.

My previous experience had substantial influence not only on my English proficiency, but also on me as a person.

First of all, I have switched my consuming device from a PC to an E-Reader.

Secondly, I implemented the habit of reading into my daily routine.

On the other hand, there is so-called intensive learning.

It means that one deliberately learns every new word which he encounters.

Without any doubt, the second approach is much more powerful in terms of progress and actual learning.

However, some individuals argue that it does not bring them enough joy, compared to extensive learning.

They believe that the best way to acquire a new language is to immerse oneself in it: either by reading or by listening.

Although this idea has merit, I found that combining these two strategies (intensive and extensive learning) makes the most sense for me.

For instance, for my German learning I tend to maximize the deliberate learning over the "natural" one in order to get a strong foundation of intermediate speaker.

Anyways, I am really excited to start reading again.

My reading list on GoodReads is overwhelmed with literature!

"The Innovators",''Sapiens'',"A Short History of Nearly Everything'', etc.).

The language there is contemporary and pretty accessible for my level.

"Martin Iden"';"East of Eden", ''1984'', ''Stoner'' etc.

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A week ago, I started reading in English.

However, I decided to seriously adjust my reading style.

Now I do it every day for approximately one hour before going to sleep.

Thirdly, instead of looking up every new word and making an anki-card out of it, as I did earlier, I decided to interrupt my reading flow as rarely as possible.

Without any doubt, the second approach is much more powerful in terms of progress and actual learning.

Although this idea has merit, I found that combining these two strategies (intensive and extensive learning) makes the most sense for me.

However, when I have some spare time outside, I have no problem with listening to some podcasts without transcription.

The language there is contemporary and pretty accessible for my level.

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It means that one deliberately learns every new word which he encounters.


It means that one deliberately learns every new word which they encounters. It means that one deliberately learns every new word which they encounter.

It means that one deliberately learns every new word which (he encounters / they encounter). It means that one deliberately learns every new word which (he encounters / they encounter).

Singular they vs he as a pronoun for a person of unknown or unspecified gender is a topic that can still spark arguments, but personally I think singular they is more common/natural these days

It means that one deliberately learns/studies every new word which hone encounters. It means that one deliberately learns/studies every new word which one encounters.

If you're trying to be formal, it seems odd to alternate between "one" and "he".

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Without any doubt, the second approach is much more powerful in terms of progress and actual learning.


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However, some individuals argue that it does not bring them enough joy, compared to extensive learning.


However, some individuals argue that it does not bring them enough joy, compared to extensive learning. However, some individuals argue that it does not bring them enough joy compared to extensive learning.

However, some individuals argue that it does not bring them enough joy, when/as compared to extensive learning. However, some individuals argue that it does not bring them enough joy when/as compared to extensive learning.

better flow to use when or as instead of the comma there

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They believe that the best way to acquire a new language is to immerse oneself in it: either by reading or by listening.


They believe that the best way to acquire a new language is to immerse oneself in it: either by reading or by listening. They believe that the best way to acquire a new language is to immerse oneself in it: either by reading or listening.

They believe that the best way to acquire a new language is to (truly/completely) immerse oneself in it: either by reading or by listening. They believe that the best way to acquire a new language is to (truly/completely) immerse oneself in it: either by reading or by listening.

(not a grammar correction, but I think this is the key difference between intensive and extensive, as arguably you also immerse in intensive reading)

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Although this idea has merit, I found that combining these two strategies (intensive and extensive learning) makes the most sense for me.


Although this idea has its merits, I found that combining these two strategies (intensive and extensive learning) makes the most sense for me. Although this idea has its merits, I found that combining these two strategies (intensive and extensive learning) makes the most sense for me.

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Although this idea has merit, I found that combining these two strategies (intensive and extensive learning) makes the most sense for me. Although this idea has merit, I found that combining these two strategies (intensive and extensive learning) makes the most sense for me.

Good use of parentheses to remind an inattentive reader what you mean.

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For instance, for my German learning I tend to maximize the deliberate learning over the "natural" one in order to get a strong foundation of intermediate speaker.


For instance, for my German learning, I tend to maximize the deliberate learning over the "natural" one in order to get a strong foundation of an intermediate speaker. For instance, for my German learning, I tend to maximize the deliberate learning over the "natural" one in order to get a strong foundation of an intermediate speaker.

For instance, for my German learning I tend to maximize the deliberate learning over the "natural" onelearning in order to get a strong foundation ofas an intermediate speaker. For instance, for my German learning I tend to maximize deliberate learning over "natural" learning in order to get a strong foundation as an intermediate speaker.

For instance, for my German learning I tend to maximize theime spent on deliberate learning over the "natural" onestyle, in order to get athe strong foundation of a intermediate speaker. For instance, for my German learning I tend to maximize time spent on deliberate learning over the "natural" style, in order to get the strong foundation of a intermediate speaker.

or "I tend to prioritize deliberate learning" or "a strong intermediate speaking foundation"

For instance, for my German learning I tend to maximize the deliberate learning part over the "natural" one in order to get a strong foundation ofor an intermediate speaker. For instance, for my German learning I tend to maximize the deliberate learning part over the "natural" one in order to get a strong foundation for an intermediate speaker.

The end of the sentence is a little confusing. I took a guess at how it should be completed

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However, when I have some spare time outside, I have no problem with listening to some podcasts without transcription.


However, when I have some spare time outside, I have no problem with listening to some podcasts without transcriptions. However, when I have some spare time outside, I have no problem with listening to some podcasts without transcriptions.

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However, when I have some spare time outside, I don't have noany problem with listening to some podcasts without transcriptions. However, when I have some spare time outside, I don't have any problem with listening to some podcasts without transcriptions.

Even though I don't learn every single unknown word, it helps me to develop my listening skills and just enjoy the content itself.


Even though, I don't learn every single unknown word, it helps me to develop my listening skills and just enjoy the content itself. Even though, I don't learn every single unknown word, it helps me to develop my listening skills and just enjoy the content itself.

Even though I don't learn every single unknown word, it helps me to develop my listening skills and to just enjoy the content itself. Even though I don't learn every single unknown word, it helps me to develop my listening skills and to just enjoy the content itself.

Even though I don't learnook up every single unknown word, it helps me to develop my listening skills and just enjoy the content itself. Even though I don't look up every single unknown word, it helps me to develop my listening skills and just enjoy the content itself.

Anyways, I am really excited to start reading again.


Anyways, I am really excited to start reading again. Anyway, I am really excited to start reading again.

"Anyways" is very casual, even for spoken English.

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My reading list on GoodReads is overwhelmed with literature!


My reading list on GoodReads is overwhelmed with literature! My reading list on GoodReads is overwhelmed with literature!

You could also say "overflowing"

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A good part of them are non-fiction (e.g.


A good part of them areit is non-fiction (e.g. A good part of it is non-fiction (e.g.

You're talking about a single list - although it is itself a collection, as long as the topic is the list itself, you would use singular pronouns like it. You could use "them" if the previous sentence had been something like "The books on my reading list are an overwhelming amount of literature", as then the topic would be the books (plural) that make up the list.

A goodreat part of them are non-fiction (e.g. A great part of them are non-fiction (e.g.

good is nice great not only can be nice, but also can be a large amount of.

The language there is contemporary and pretty accessible for my level.


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However, I also have some huge plans for fiction literature, especially for books which I enjoyed reading in Russian (e.g.


However, I also have some huge plans for fiction literature(books), especially for books which I enjoyed reading in Russian (e.g. However, I also have some huge plans for fiction (books), especially for books which I enjoyed reading in Russian (e.g.

People wouldn't really say "fiction literature". Part of it is that "literature" is already implied here, and part of it is "fiction literature" sounds very close to "literary fiction", which despite the generic name, is actually a specific genre of fiction.

However, I also have some hugebig plans for fiction literaturestories, especially for books which I enjoyed reading in Russian (e.g. However, I also have some big plans for fiction stories, especially for books I enjoyed reading in Russian (e.g.

"Martin Iden"';"East of Eden", ''1984'', ''Stoner'' etc.


"Martin Iden"';, "East of Eden", ''1984'', ''Stoner'' etc. "Martin Iden"', "East of Eden", ''1984'', ''Stoner'' etc.

"Martin Iden"';, "East of Eden", ''1984'', ''Stoner'' etc. "Martin Iden", "East of Eden", ''1984'', ''Stoner'' etc.

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"The Innovators",''Sapiens'',"A Short History of Nearly Everything'', etc.).


"The Innovators",' 'Sapiens'', "A Short History of Nearly Everything'', etc.). "The Innovators",' 'Sapiens'', "A Short History of Nearly Everything'', etc.)

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Reading in English. Extensive vs Intensive Learning


Reading in English.: Extensive vs Intensive Learning Reading in English: Extensive vs Intensive Learning

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A week ago, I started reading in English.


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Again.


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However, I decided to seriously adjust my reading style.


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However, I decided to seriously adjust my reading style seriously. However, I decided to adjust my reading style seriously.

We often put the adverb at the last.

First of all, I have switched my consuming device from a PC to an E-Reader.


First of all, I have switched my consumreading device from a PC to an E-Reader. First of all, I have switched my reading device from a PC to an E-Reader.

First of all, I have switched my consuming devicthe device I use from a PC to an E-Reader. First of all, I have switched the device I use from a PC to an E-Reader.

"consuming device" sounds wrong. I've not corrected it, but I think I'm more used to seeing e-reader with a lowercase e.

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Secondly, I implemented the habit of reading into my daily routine.


Secondly, I implemented the habit of reading into my daily routine. Secondly, I implemented the habit of reading into my daily routine.

I would say "embedded the habit of reading..." or "implemented/established a daily reading habit". What you have written is correct though.

Secondly, I implemenntegrated the habit of reading into my daily routine. Secondly, I integrated the habit of reading into my daily routine.

'implemented' sounds like you are implementing a plan or design. Since you're just adding something here I'd use integrating instead. But what you said is not wrong

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Now I do it every day for approximately one hour before going to sleep.


Now, I do it every day for approximately one hour before going to sleep. Now, I do it every day for approximately one hour before going to sleep.

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Now I do it every day for approximately one(an) hour before going to sleep. Now I do it every day for approximately one(an) hour before going to sleep.

an hour sounds more native but one is also correct

As far as I know, this type of reading is called extensive learning, and it can also apply for listening.


As far as I know, this type of reading is called extensive learning, and it can also apply forto listening. As far as I know, this type of reading is called extensive learning, and it can also apply to listening.

As far as I know, this type of reading is called extensive learning, and it can also be apply foried to listening. As far as I know, this type of reading is called extensive learning, and it can also be applied to listening.

My previous experience had substantial influence not only on my English proficiency, but also on me as a person.


My previous experience had a substantial influence not only on my English proficiency, but also on me as a person. My previous experience had a substantial influence not only on my English proficiency, but also on me as a person.

My previous experience had a substantial influencempact not only on my English proficiency, but also on me as a person. My previous experience had a substantial impact not only on my English proficiency, but also on me as a person.

I think "impact" sounds better here. You could also say "was highly influential not only..."

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Thirdly, instead of looking up every new word and making an anki-card out of it, as I did earlier, I decided to interrupt my reading flow as rarely as possible.


Thirdly, instead of looking up every new word and making an anki-card out of it, as I did earlier, I decided to interrupt my reading flow as rarely as possible. Thirdly, instead of looking up every new word and making an anki-card out of it, as I did earlier, I decided to interrupt my reading flow as rarely as possible.

Thirdly, instead of looking up every new word and making an anki- card out of it, as I did earlier, I decided to interrupt my reading flow as rarelylittle as possible. Thirdly, instead of looking up every new word and making an anki card out of it, as I did earlier, I decided to interrupt my reading flow as little as possible.

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Thirdly, instead of looking up every new word and makinge an anki-card out of it, as I did earlier, I decided to interrupt my reading flow as rarely as possible. Thirdly, instead of looking up every new word and make an anki-card out of it, as I did earlier, I decided to interrupt my reading flow as rarely as possible.

On the other hand, there is so-called intensive learning.


On the other handAlternatively, there is so-called intensive learning. Alternatively, there is so-called intensive learning.

"On the other hand" doesn't feel right here. This might just be me being fussy.

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