Today is good for me because iI am feeling peacefuly. Today is good for me because I am feeling peaceful.

Today is good for me because iI am feeling peacefuly. Today is good for me because I am feeling peaceful.

"peacefully" (also note there are two "l"s) is an adverb, so it's applied to actions. You're talking about yourself, so you want the adjective "peaceful" instead.

Today is good for me because iI am feeling peacefuly. Today is good for me because I am feeling peaceful.

Sometimes a phone call or a voice can brighten wholup an entire life. Sometimes a phone call or a voice can brighten up an entire life.

Sometimes a phone call or a voice can brighten your whole life. Sometimes a phone call or a voice can brighten your whole life.

Sometimes a phone call or a voice can brighten your whole life. Sometimes a phone call or a voice can brighten your whole life.

EIs everything is okay? Is everything okay?

EIs everything is okay? Is everything okay?

EIs everything is okay? Is everything okay?

I don't know who you are but I hope you are finealright. I don't know who you are but I hope you are alright.

I don't know who you are, but I hope you are fine. I don't know who you are, but I hope you are fine.

We need to be fine last timesalright in the end. We need to be alright in the end.

We need to befeel fine last times. We need to feel fine.

Not sure what "last times" was meant to mean here.

We need to befeel fine last timesin the end. We need to feel fine in the end.

It was delicious and then, I drank water, tea, and coffee. It was delicious and then, I drank water, tea and coffee.

It was delicious and then, I drank water, tea, and coffee. It was delicious and then, I drank water, tea, and coffee.

It was delicious, and then, I drank water, tea, and coffee. It was delicious, and then I drank water, tea, and coffee.

Ahahah lots of drink because it's stil too hot still. Ahahah lots of drink because it's stil too hot.

Ahahah, lots of drinks because it's too hot still. Ahaha, lots of drinks because it's too hot still.

Ahahah, lots of drinking because it's still too hot still. Ahahah, lots of drinking because it's still too hot.

I want it to rain. I want it to rain.

I want it to rain. I want it to rain.

"I want to rain" on its own implies you want cause rain or be the rain. If you just want rain to happen, you need to introduce "it" to the sentence.

I want it to rain. I want it to rain.

I want it to be cold everywhere anymoregain. I want it to be cold everywhere again.

I want to be cold everywhere anymore. I want to be cold everywhere.

I want it to be cold everywhere anymorenow. I want it to be cold everywhere now.

Is it possible onduring the summer? Is it possible during the summer?

Is it possible onduring summer? Is it possible during summer?

Is it possible onduring summer? Is it possible during summer?