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SummerTeaWater

Oct. 15, 2021

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Hotter In summer by global warming

In Korea, the weather in Summer is hotter and hotter these days.

When I was young, the average temperature in Summer was early 30 degrees Celsius.

So it was able to hold on.

But these days, the average temperature is more than 35 degrees Celsius.

The hottest day in this year was 42 degree Celsius.

It was the hottest record in Korea.

I think, it is caused by the global warming effect.

If we do not stop the global warming, we will face hotter weather that we can’t make through the unbearable heat.

So we need to keep considering the global warming to protect our environment.

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But these days, the average temperature is more than 35 degrees Celsius.

The hottest day in this year was 42 degree Celsius.

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SummerTeaWater

Oct. 16, 2021

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Hotter In summer by global warming


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I'm not really sure why I think so, but the original title sounds strange to a native speaker. I think usually if you use a noun as the title, you cannot go wrong.

Hotter and hotter


Average early 30 degree Celsius


So it was able to hold on.


So itI was able to hold on.stand this temperature I was able to stand this temperature

But these days, average temperature is more than 35 degree celsius


The hottest day this year was 42 degree Celsius.


It was the hottest record in korea.


Global warming effect.


If we do not stop the global warming, we will face more hotter weather that we can’t make through the unbearable hot.


So we need to keep considering the global warming to protect our environment


In Korea, the weather in Summer is hotter and hotter these days.


In Korea, the weather in Summer is becoming hotter and hotter these days. In Korea, the weather in Summer is becoming hotter and hotter these days.

When I was young, the average temperature in Summer was early 30 degrees Celsius.


When I was young, the average temperature in Summer was early 30 degreesin the low 30s, Celsius. When I was young, the average temperature in Summer was in the low 30s, Celsius.

This way of writing it is a little more informal. If we were speaking we would not say "Celsius" unless we have to clarify.

But these days, the average temperature is more than 35 degrees Celsius.


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The hottest day in this year was 42 degree Celsius.


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It was the hottest record in Korea.


ItThis was the hottest recordday in Korea on record. This was the hottest day in Korea on record.

On record since forever? If you want to specify, you can add "since..." and then the time.

I think, it is caused by the global warming effect.


I think, it is caused by the global warming effect. I think it is caused by global warming.

If we do not stop the global warming, we will face hotter weather that we can’t make through the unbearable heat.


If we do not stop the global warming, we will face hotter weatherthe weather will become so hot that we can’t make through the unbearable heat. If we do not stop global warming, the weather will become so hot that we can’t make through the unbearable heat.

So we need to keep considering the global warming to protect our environment.


SoTherefor, we need to keep considering thworking to reduce global warming toand protect our environment. Therefor, we need to keep working to reduce global warming and protect our environment.

I think this is what you mean by "considering" ~ when you use considering here it makes it sound more like we are pondering it, this way makes it more clear.

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