Dec. 1, 2020
Flowers
I bought a bouquet a week ago. I put it in a vase on a table. The bouquet included five kinds of flowers. Two of them have faded and I got rid of them, but the rest of them are still beautiful. I realized that flowers make me feel refreshed. I cut the stems underwater and change the water to keep flowers fresh for longer. According to a website, flower food will help cut flowers keep healthy. I'll use it next time.
一週間前に花束を買いました。 テーブルの上の花瓶に飾りました。 花束には5種類の花が含まれていました。 そのうちの2つは萎れたので、私はそれらを取り除きました。しかし残りの花は今もきれいに咲いています。 花は私を癒してくれると実感しました。 花をより長く新鮮に保つために、毎日茎を水中で切り、水を変えます。ネットによると、栄養剤は切り花を長持ちさせてくれるそうです。今度はそれを使ってみようと思います。
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A week ago, I bought a bouquet a week agond put it in a vase on my table.
A week ago, I bought a bouquet and put it in a vase on my table.
These sentences are both very short, I would join them.
I put it in a vase on a table.
Two of them have faded and I got rid ofso I threw them out, but the rest of them are still beautiful.
Two of them have faded so I threw them out, but the rest are still beautiful.
I've realized that flowers makehelp me feel refreshed.
I've realized that flowers help me feel refreshed.
You may also say "relaxed" instead of "refreshed", though I'm not sure what precise emotion you are trying to convey. Either work.
I cut the stems underwater and change out the water to keep the flowers fresh for longer.
I cut the stems and change out the water to keep the flowers fresh for longer.
I'll usetry using it next time.
I'll try using it next time.
Feedback
Overall your original passage is grammatically correct, my changes only make it sound a little more natural.
According to a website, flower food will help keep cut flowers keep healthy.
According to a website, flower food will help keep cut flowers healthy.
This is more of a suggestion than a correction. This way, the sentence sounds a little more natural.
Feedback
Well written!
Dec. 1, 2020
Thank you for the correction. :D
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Flowers |
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I bought a bouquet a week ago.
A week ago, I bought a bouquet a These sentences are both very short, I would join them. |
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I put it in a vase on a table.
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The bouquet included five kinds of flowers. |
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Two of them have faded and I got rid of them, but the rest of them are still doing well. |
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I realized that flowers make me feel refreshed.
I've realized that flowers You may also say "relaxed" instead of "refreshed", though I'm not sure what precise emotion you are trying to convey. Either work. |
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I cut the stems underwater and change the water to keep flowers fresh for longer.
I cut the stems |
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According to a website, flower food will help cut flowers keep healthy.
According to a website, flower food will help keep cut flowers This is more of a suggestion than a correction. This way, the sentence sounds a little more natural. |
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I'll use it next time.
I'll |
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Two of them have faded and I got rid of them, but the rest of them are still beautiful.
Two of them have faded |
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