March 26, 2023
Látogatás
Tegnap, az öregotthonba jártunk, hogy az anyám nagybátyjat meglátogassuk. Kilencvennyolc van, és még mindig világosan gondol. Neki nincs az egészég problemájai. Azoban, a felesége, ami csak kiscit fiatalabb, mint ő, az észt elveszíte. Tegnap, minket nem megfelismerte. Ránk nem emlékezte többé. Az anyám unokatestvére (az nagybácsi leánya) is ott volt. Mikor gyerekek voltak, anyám és unokatestvére egymást gyakran láttak, de most, nem így van. Mind nagyon kedves, és szeretek öket látogatni.
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Yesterday, we went to the retirement home to visit my mother's uncle. He's 98 and can still think straight. He doesn't have any health problem. However, her wife, who's just a bit younger than him, has lost her mind. Yesterday, she didn't recognize us. She didn't remember us anymore. My mother's cousin (the uncle's daughter) was also there. When my mother and her cousin were kids, they would see each other very often, but it's not the case anymore. They're all very sweet and I enjoy paying them a visit.
Látogatás
Tegnap, az öregotthonban jártunk, hogy az anyám nagybátyjat meglátogassuk.
Kilencvennyolc vanéves, és még mindig világosan gondolkodik.
"Kilencvennyolc éves van" = "He is 98" no such phrase in Hungarian
"Kilencvennyolc éves" = "He is 98 years old", this is the phrase used in Hungarian describing a person's age
Neki nincs azenek egészségügyi probleémájai.
Azoban, a felesége, amki csak kiscsit fiatalabb, mint ő, az éeszét elveszítette.
"észt elveszíte" is a bit 19th century poetic usage of words
Tegnap, minket nem megfelismerte.nem ismert meg / ismert fel minket.
"meg" and "fel" are both phrasal verbs so they cant be used on one word
Ránk nem emlékeztett többé.
Az anyám unokatestvére (az nagybácsi leánya) is ott volt.
"leánya" is also correct, but this word is mostly used by the elderly
Mikor gyerekek voltak, anyám és az unokatestvére egymást gyakran láttalálkoztak, de most, nem így van.
"see each other" is like "to meet" so találkoztak maybe better
MŐk mind nagyon kedvesek, és szeretekm öket látogatni.
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Yesterday, we went to the retirement home to visit my mother's uncle.
He's 98 and can still think straight.
He doesn't have any health problem.
However, her wife, who's just a bit younger than him, has lost her mind.
Yesterday, she didn't recognize us.
She didn't remember us anymore.
My mother's cousin (the uncle's daughter) was also there.
When my mother and her cousin were kids, they would see each other very often, but it's not the case anymore.
They're all very sweet and I enjoy paying them a visit.
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in speech you would be perfectly understandable, but i had to correct some writing mistakes :)
keep going!
March 26, 2023
And I realize most of them were careless mistakes I could've avoided. Thanks a lot for your help!
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Tegnap, az öregotthonba jártunk, hogy az anyám nagybátyjat meglátogassuk. Tegnap, az öregotthonban jártunk, hogy az anyám nagybátyjat meglátogassuk. |
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Kilencvennyolc van, és még mindig világosan gondol. Kilencvennyolc "Kilencvennyolc éves van" = "He is 98" no such phrase in Hungarian "Kilencvennyolc éves" = "He is 98 years old", this is the phrase used in Hungarian describing a person's age |
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Neki nincs az egészég problemájai. Neki nincs |
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Azoban, a felesége, ami csak kiscit fiatalabb, mint ő, az észt elveszíte. Azoban "észt elveszíte" is a bit 19th century poetic usage of words |
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Tegnap, minket nem megfelismerte. Tegnap, "meg" and "fel" are both phrasal verbs so they cant be used on one word |
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Ránk nem emlékezte többé. Ránk nem emlékez |
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Az anyám unokatestvére (az nagybácsi leánya) is ott volt. Az anyám unokatestvére (a "leánya" is also correct, but this word is mostly used by the elderly |
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Mikor gyerekek voltak, anyám és unokatestvére egymást gyakran láttak, de most, nem így van. Mikor gyerekek voltak, anyám és az unokatestvére "see each other" is like "to meet" so találkoztak maybe better |
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Mind nagyon kedves, és szeretek öket látogatni.
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Yesterday, we went to the retirement home to visit my mother's uncle. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He's 98 and can still think straight. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He doesn't have any health problem. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, her wife, who's just a bit younger than him, has lost her mind. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yesterday, she didn't recognize us. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She didn't remember us anymore. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My mother's cousin (the uncle's daughter) was also there. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When my mother and her cousin were kids, they would see each other very often, but it's not the case anymore. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They're all very sweet and I enjoy paying them a visit. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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