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What's In Your Fridge Right Now?

I have some energy drink in my fridge. Recently I often go to business trip far away. So I need to get nutrition and energy quickly and efficiently.

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I have some energy drink in my fridge.

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What's In Your Fridge Right Now?

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What's In Your Fridge Right Now?

So I need to get nutrition and energy quickly and efficiently.

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What's In Your Fridge Right Now?


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What's Iin Your Fridge Right Now? What's in Your Fridge Right Now?

"in"などのprepositionはあまり頭文字ではありません。

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I have some energy drink in my fridge.


I have some energy drinks in my fridge. I have some energy drinks in my fridge.

If you have more than one drink, indicated by "some" then drinks needs to be plural.

I have some energy drinks in my fridge. I have some energy drinks in my fridge.

Or I have AN energy drink...

I have some energy drinks in my fridge. I have some energy drinks in my fridge.

"some"は複数なので、"drinks"も複数になります。

I have some energy drinks in my fridge. I have some energy drinks in my fridge.

I have some energy drinks in my fridge. I have some energy drinks in my fridge.

I have some energy drinks in my fridge. I have some energy drinks in my fridge.

drink -> drinks: "some" implies a plural

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Recently I often go to business trip far away.


RecentlyThese days I often go to business trip far away. These days I often go to business trip far away.

Recently indicates a single event, "these days" can better communicate its a frequent / ongoing event.

RecentlyAt this time, I often go ton business trips far away. At this time, I often go on business trips far away.

"Recently" only works here if you only went on one business trip "Recently, I went on a business trip far away". Since this seems to be something you do regularly, you need to change it to "At this time", "These days", or change the phrase to say something like "I've recently been travelling a lot for business"

Recently, I often go to've been going on business trips far away so I need to get nutrition and energy quickly and efficiently. Recently, I've been going on business trips far away so I need to get nutrition and energy quickly and efficiently.

米国の英語でこのの方が自然です。

Recently I often go ton business trips far away. I often go on business trips far away.

Recently I often go ton far away business trip far aways. Recently I often go on far away business trips.

Recently I often go to've been going on long business trip far aways. Recently I've been going on long business trips.

I often go -> I have been going: tense change. Recently, I've been going... ◎ I often go on business trips far away ◎ Recently, I often go... X I often go recently... X to -> on: Go *on* business trips, not to "long" business trips implies trips far away.

Recently, I often go tohave been frequently going on business trips that are far away. Recently, I have been frequently going on business trips that are far away.

So I need to get nutrition and energy quickly and efficiently.


So I need to get nutrition anduse the drinks to get energy quickly and efficiently for these business trips. So I use the drinks to get energy quickly and efficiently for these business trips.

Do energy drinks typically have nutrition?

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So I need to get nutrition and energy quickly and efficiently.

上の文に加えました。

So I need to get nutrition and energy quickly and efficiently. I need to get nutrition and energy quickly and efficiently.

So -> []: I correct entries sentence by sentence, and not the entire entry entirely as it would be too complicated. That said, this sentence would work much better if appended to the previous. See the overall feedback.*

So I need to get enough nutrition and energy as quickly and efficiently as possible. So I need to get enough nutrition and energy as quickly and efficiently as possible.

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