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Tammy

yesterday

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Plum Blossom

I'm on my way to see plum blossoms.

The destination is in Shaoxin, Zhejiang Province.

I'll try to capture some spring views for you.

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The destination is in Shaoxin, Zhejiang Province.

You could delete "in." It depends if you are going to a place inside of Shaoxin, or if you are going to Shaoxin.

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Tammy

today

7

Thank you!

Have a nice day!

Plum Blossoms

I'm on my way to see the plum blossoms.

Either way is fine. Just an alternative option.

The destination is in Shaoxin, Zhejiang Province.

I'll try to capture some spring views for you.

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Looks good! Hope you have fun seeing the blossoms!

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Tammy

today

7

Thank you!

Have a nice day!

Plum Blossoms

I'm on my way to see the plum blossoms in Shaoxin, Zhejiang Province.

Your original is fine, too.

The destination is in Shaoxin, Zhejiang Province.

I'll try to capture some spring views for you.

Feedback

Nice use of “capture” and “views” in the last sentence!

I hope you have a nice trip. :-)

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Tammy

today

7

谢谢!我学到你们教我的用法嘛。

Have a nice day!

Plum Blossom

I'm on my way to see plum blossoms in Shaoxin, Zhejiang Province.

你也可能把两个句子连一起

The destination is in Shaoxin, Zhejiang Province.

I'll try to capture some spring views for you. all

如果你写”you“,好像你只跟一个人说话。我在想你是要说“你们”?你们是像“you (plural)” 可是放个“all”更有详细的

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Tammy

yesterday

7

好勒,懂了!

谢谢你!

Plum Blossoms

I'm on my way to see plum blossoms.

You could also say "some plum blossoms"

The destination is in Shaoxin, Zhejiang Province.

I'll try to capture some spring views for you.

Feedback

Excellent! It sounds like a nice day, as well :)

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Tammy

today

7

Thank you!

Have a nice day!

Plum Blossom

I'm on my way to see plum blossoms.

The destination is in Shaoxin, Zhejiang Province.

I'll try to capture some spring views for you.

Feedback

Great writing! I've not seen plum blossoms before, but looking them up right now they look very beautiful.

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Tammy

today

7

Thank you!

Here are the plum blossoms I saw yesterday: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/wwG4RMN3byw

Hope you like them as well.

Have a nice day!

Plum Blossom


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Plum Blossoms

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Plum Blossoms

Plum Blossoms

I'm on my way to see plum blossoms.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm on my way to see plum blossoms.

You could also say "some plum blossoms"

I'm on my way to see plum blossoms in Shaoxin, Zhejiang Province.

你也可能把两个句子连一起

I'm on my way to see the plum blossoms in Shaoxin, Zhejiang Province.

Your original is fine, too.

I'm on my way to see the plum blossoms.

Either way is fine. Just an alternative option.

The destination is in Shaoxin, Zhejiang Province.


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The destination is in Shaoxin, Zhejiang Province.

You could delete "in." It depends if you are going to a place inside of Shaoxin, or if you are going to Shaoxin.

I'll try to capture some spring views for you.


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I'll try to capture some spring views for you. all

如果你写”you“,好像你只跟一个人说话。我在想你是要说“你们”?你们是像“you (plural)” 可是放个“all”更有详细的

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