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About advertisement

The advertisement is an inherent part of economy and our life. Originally, the aim of every advertisement was to announce people about the product or service the company sells, or, in case of political advertisement, the subject of advertising could be political party, politician, or even a political doctrine. But in reality, the advertisement becomes more than just announcement. In fact, this is a tool for consciousness manipulation and for creation of collective opinion, and may be considered as a kind of propaganda. We face with advertisement every day of our life, and of course, it has great impact on it. Whatever we watch or listen around us, we found ourselves thinking about some advertised product, since advertisement companies do everything to catch our attention. This happens because every event and every activity of our life is commercialized, and if they not directly relate to gaining profit, they could use sponsor’s money, and again you hear sponsor advertisement in this case. If you see or hear an advertisement once, then probably your mind could ignore it, but if you see or hear the same advertisement again and again, it comes to your subconscious, and you start to carry it inside yourself, even if you think you still ignore it. This is exactly the technique that all advertisement companies use – just to repeat the same message many times, and this will force you to believe that it is true. As the result, you start to make hasty purchases, or become a fan of some “cult” product, or turn to some useless service. If that happen then that means, that advertisement companies achieved their goals and made you spend money for their product, but when you come to your senses you ask yourself: “Why did I buy it? I don’t really need it”. But to that moment it is too late, and you realize that the question “why” should been asked when you heard the advertisement about that for the first time.

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About advertisement

Originally, the aim of every advertisement was to announce people about the product or service the company sells, or, in case of political advertisement, the subject of advertising could be political party, politician, or even a political doctrine.

In fact, this is a tool for consciousness manipulation and for creation of collective opinion, and may be considered as a kind of propaganda.

This is exactly the technique that all advertisement companies use – just to repeat the same message many times, and this will force you to believe that it is true.

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The advertisement is an inherent part of economy and our life.


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Originally, the aim of every advertisement was to announce people about the product or service the company sells, or, in case of political advertisement, the subject of advertising could be political party, politician, or even a political doctrine.


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But in reality, the advertisement becomes more than just announcement.


But in reality, the advertisement becomes more than just an announcement. But in reality, the advertisement becomes more than just an announcement.

In fact, this is a tool for consciousness manipulation and for creation of collective opinion, and may be considered as a kind of propaganda.


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We face with advertisement every day of our life, and of course, it has great impact on it.


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Whatever we watch or listen around us, we found ourselves thinking about some advertised product, since advertisement companies do everything to catch our attention.


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This happens because every event and every activity of our life is commercialized, and if they not directly relate to gaining profit, they could use sponsor’s money, and again you hear sponsor advertisement in this case.


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If you see or hear an advertisement once, then probably your mind could ignore it, but if you see or hear the same advertisement again and again, it comes to your subconscious, and you start to carry it inside yourself, even if you think you still ignore it.


If you see or hear an advertisement once, then probably, your mind couldmight ignore it, but if you see or hear the same advertisement again and again, it comes to your subconscious, and y. You start to carry it around inside of yourself, even if you think you still’ll be able to ignore it. If you see an advertisement, your mind might ignore it, but if you see the same advertisement again and again, it comes to your subconscious. You start to carry it around inside of yourself, even if you think you’ll be able to ignore it.

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This is exactly the technique that all advertisement companies use – just to repeat the same message many times, and this will force you to believe that it is true.


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As the result, you start to make hasty purchases, or become a fan of some “cult” product, or turn to some useless service.


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The usage of ‘some’ makes the whole paragraph seem too informal. In general, making sentences too long makes it harder to read them.

If that happen then that means, that advertisement companies achieved their goals and made you spend money for their product, but when you come to your senses you ask yourself: “Why did I buy it?


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I don’t really need it”.


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But to that moment it is too late, and you realize that the question “why” should been asked when you heard the advertisement about that for the first time.


But to that moment it is too late, andbecause you realize that the question “why”‘Why?’ should been asked when you heard the advertisement about that for the first time. But that moment it is too late, because you realize that the question ‘Why?’ should been asked when you heard the advertisement for the first time.

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