Oct. 2, 2020
I still want to talk about my weakness. I think I am not good at dealing with relationships with my leaders. I don't know what I should talk about with them and I just wait for their directions. Do what they let me do and don't do what they didn't let me do. Besides these, I also can not feel the joys of being a leader and I think being a leader is indeed boring and annoying. In a word, being an ordinary staff member is more relaxing than being a leader. Meanwhile, if my colleague gets promoted, I usually don't actively get in touch with them because I think they already have a higher position than me. If I continue to get in touch with them, it would not seem proper. Plus, when I attend a meeting, I always like to sit in a corner and I also avoid meeting leaders. If I can not avoid them, I just smile or slightly nod my head as a greeting. All in all, I always avoid showing up on the stage. I just want to be an audience sitting in the back row. Sometimes I think I must have an illness called social phobia or autism.
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I still want to talk about my weakness.
I want to talk about my weakness.
I think I am not good at dealing with relationships with my leaderbosses.
I think I am not good at dealing with relationships with my bosses.
I don't know what I should talk about with them, and I just wait for their directions. I don't know what I should talk about with them, and I just wait for their directions.
DI only do what they let me do and don't do what they didon't let me do.
I only do what they let me do and don't do what they don't let me do.
Or: "I only do what they allow me to." (Much more concise, but gets the same idea across.)
Besides these, I also can not feel the joys of being a leader, and I think being a leader is indeed boring and annoying.
I also cannot feel the joys of being a leader, and I think being a leader is boring and annoying.
In a word, being an ordinary staff member is more relaxing than being a leader.
Meanwhile, if mya colleague gets promoted, I usually don't actively get in touch with them because I think they already have a higher position than me.
Meanwhile, if a colleague gets promoted, I usually don't actively get in touch with them because I think they already have a higher position than me.
If I continue to get in touch with them, it would not seem proper.
Plus, when I attend a meeting, I always like to sit in a corner, and I also avoid meeting leaders. Plus, when I attend a meeting, I always like to sit in a corner, and I also avoid meeting leaders.
If I can not avoid them, I just smile or slightly nod my head as a greeting.
If I cannot avoid them, I just smile or slightly nod my head as a greeting.
All in all, I always avoid showing up on thetanding on stage.
All in all, I always avoid standing on stage.
I just want to be an audience member sitting in the back row. I just want to be an audience member sitting in the back row.
Sometimes I think I must have an illness called social phobia or autism.
Sometimes I think I must have social phobia or autism.
"social phobia" and "autism" are two different conditions, but the sentence as you wrote it could be read as saying that they were two different ways of saying the same thing.
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Good job! Two tips are to reduce your usage of "I think" and "just." As another corrector pointed out, I think "boss," "superior," or "manager" all get the tone across better than "leader."
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I stillonce again want to talk about my weakness.
I once again want to talk about my weakness.
I think I am not good at dealing with relationships with my leadermy boss.
I think I am not good at dealing with my boss.
"leader" is a positive word. In this context neutral words "boss", "manager" or "superior" are more appropriate
I don't know what I should talk about with them and I just wait for their directions.
Do what they let me do and don't do what they didon't let me do.
Do what they let me do and don't do what they don't let me do.
Besides these, I also can not feel the joys of being a leader andboss. I think being a leaderboss is indeed boring and annoying.
Besides, I also cannot feel the joy of being a boss. I think being a boss is indeed boring and annoying.
In a wshordt, being an ordinary staff member is more relaxing than being a leader.
In short, being an ordinary staff member is more relaxing.
Meanwhile, if my colleagues gets promoted, I usually don't actively get in touch with them because I think they already have a higher position than me.
Meanwhile, if my colleagues get promoted, I usually don't actively get in touch with them because they already have a higher position than me.
If I continue to get in touch with them, it would not seem proper.
Plus, when I attend a meeting, I always like to sit in a corner and I also avoid meeting leademy superiors.
Plus, when I attend a meeting, I always like to sit in a corner and I also avoid meeting my superiors.
If I can not avoid them, I just smile or slightly nod my head as a greeting.
If I cannot avoid them, I just smile or slightly nod my head as a greeting.
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All in all, I always avoid showing up on the stage.
All in all, I always avoid showing up on stage.
I just want to be an audience sittingsit in the back row.
I just want to sit in the back row.
Sometimes I think I must have an illness called social phobia or autism.
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I think I am not good at dealing with relationships with my leaders.
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I don't know what I should talk about with them and I just wait for their directions. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I don't know what I should talk about with them, and I just wait for their directions. I don't know what I should talk about with them, and I just wait for their directions. |
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Do what they let me do and don't do what they didn't let me do.
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Besides these, I also can not feel the joys of being a leader and I think being a leader is indeed boring and annoying.
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Meanwhile, if my colleague gets promoted, I usually don't actively get in touch with them because I think they already have a higher position than me.
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Plus, when I attend a meeting, I always like to sit in a corner and I also avoid meeting leaders.
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I just want to be an audience sitting in the back row.
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Sometimes I think I must have an illness called social phobia or autism. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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