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Life is Like a Roller Coaster
No one lives a trouble free life.
Don't be anxious, don't feel lost, and don't give up.
Life is like a roller coaster with its ups and downs.
Not long ago, I had a stable salary, and it's like reaching the peak of the roller coaster.
Not long ago, everything went smoothly, work went well, and family was healthy.
At those times, we were like riding the coaster upward, climbing bit by bit with light in our eyes and hope in our hearts, thinking the good days would last forever.
But life never stays easy all the time, maybe a sudden accident.
I didn't quit my job, but I had to take a rest for over three months because my company was laying off staff.
That is to say, I have lost a stable income right now.
I accept all the ups and downs.
I live with my parents deep in the mountains.
We work on the farm, eating our own vegetables.
Every time I read the Bible, I pray to God.
According to the Bible, God sent a crow to bring food to Elijah.
We don't have to worry about tomorrow.
沒有人能过上毫无烦恼的生活。
别焦虑，别迷失方向，也别放弃。
生活就像过山车一样，有起有落。
不久前，我的收入还算稳定，就好比坐过山车到达了最高点。
不久前，一切都很顺利，工作进展顺利，家人健康。
那些时候，我们就像坐过山车一样一点一点往上爬，每前进一小步，眼中就充满光明，心中便充满希望，以为美好的日子会永远持续下去。
但生活从来不会一直一帆风顺，也许会突然遭遇意外。
我沒有辞职，但因为公司裁员，我不得不休息超过三个月。
也就是说，我现在失去了稳定的收入。
我接受所有的起起落落。我与父母住在深山之中。
我们在农场劳作，还自己种植蔬菜吃。
每次读圣经，我都向上帝祈祷。
根据圣经记载，神安排乌鸦给以利亞送食物。
我们不必为明天而忧虑。
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Life is Like a Roller Coaster
No one lives a trouble free life.
Don't be anxious, don't feel lost, and don't give up.
Life is like a roller coaster with its ups and downs.
Not long ago, I had a stable salary, and it's like reaching the peak of the roller coaster.
Not long ago, everything went smoothly, work went well, and my family was healthy. Not long ago, everything went smoothly, work went well, and my family was healthy.
AtIn those times, it was like we were like riding the coaster upward, climbing bit by bit with light in our eyes and hope in our hearts, thinking the good days would last forever.
In those times, it was like we were riding the coaster upward, climbing bit by bit with light in our eyes and hope in our hearts, thinking the good days would last forever.
At that time OR In those times
But life never stays easy all the time,. There may be a sudden accident.
But life never stays easy all the time. There may be a sudden accident.
I think this would work better as 2 sentences.
More natural: A sudden accident could happen at any time OR There could be a sudden accident at any time.
I didn't quit my job, but I had to take a rest for over three months because my company was laying off staff. I didn't quit my job, but I had to take a rest for over three months because my company was laying off staff.
This works, but I think "take a break" would sound a bit more natural.
That is to say, I have lost a stable income right now.
I accept all the ups and downs.
I live with my parents deep in the mountains.
We work on the farm, eating our own vegetables.
Every time I read the Bible, I pray to God.
According to the Bible, God sent a crow to bring food to Elijah.
We don't have to worry about tomorrow.
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A very wise perspective. Excellent writing as always :)
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No one lives a trouble free life. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Don't be ancious, don't be lost, and don't give up. |
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Life is like a roller coaster with its ups and downs. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Not long ago, I had a stable salary, and it's like reaching the peak of the roller coaster. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Not long ago, everything went smoothly, work went well, and family was healthy. Not long ago, everything went smoothly, work went well, and my family was healthy. Not long ago, everything went smoothly, work went well, and my family was healthy. |
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At those times, we were like riding the coaster upward, climbing bit by bit with light in our eyes and hope in our hearts, thinking the good days would last forever.
At that time OR In those times |
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But life never stays easy all the time, maybe a sudden accident.
But life never stays easy all the time I think this would work better as 2 sentences. More natural: A sudden accident could happen at any time OR There could be a sudden accident at any time. |
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I didn't quit my job, but I had to take a rest for over three months because my company was laying off staff. I didn't quit my job, but I had to take a rest for over three months because my company was laying off staff. I didn't quit my job, but I had to take a rest for over three months because my company was laying off staff. This works, but I think "take a break" would sound a bit more natural. |
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That is to say, I have lost a stable income right now. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I accept all the ups and downs. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I live with my parents deep in the mountains. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We work on the farm, eating our own vegetables. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Don't be anxious, don't feel lost, and don't give up. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Every time I read the Bible, I pray to God. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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According to the Bible, God sent a crow to bring food to Elijah. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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