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Jelly_Wilde

April 10, 2025

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Hello everyone, I am Jelly from China. This is my first time to post on Langcorrect, wishing I can improve my English creative skill in here. I had passed CET-6, but my spoken English and writen skills are still poor, so I want to make some change!
I am a master student now, and I will graduate in June in this year! It's such a diffcult time of this three years to me, but fourtunately, I have got a good result of my graduate thesis! Congradulation to myself! I plan to go to work after graduation. Wish there is no big problem in the future! And wish you guys have a good day!


大家好,我是Jelly, 来自中国,这是我第一次在Langcorrect网站上发帖子,希望能通过在这里的记录提高我的英语输出能力。我虽然通过了CET-6考试,但英语口语表达和写作能力很差,所以想要做出改变!
我是一名硕士研究生,今年6月份就毕业了!对我来说,这三年的硕士学习生活很难熬,但索性我的论文盲审通过了!好耶!毕业后准备参加工作,希望未来顺利!也祝大家生活幸福。

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First post on Langcorrect

Hello everyone, I am Jelly from China.

I plan to go to work after graduation.

I plan to go to work after graduation.

First post on Langcorrect

Hello everyone, I am Jelly from China.

Hello everyone, I am Jelly from China.


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Hello everyone,. I am Jelly from China. Hello everyone. I am Jelly from China.

Hello everyone, I am Jelly from China. Hello everyone, I am Jelly from China.

Hello, and it's a pleasure to meet you!

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Congradulation to myself!


Congradtulations to myself! Congratulations to myself!

Congradtulations to myself! Congratulations to myself!

Congradtulation to myself! Congratulation to myself!

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Congradtulations to myself! Congratulations to myself!

Congradtulations to myself! Congratulations to myself!

yes, congratulations! A masters thesis is quite the achievement!

Congradtulations to myself! Congratulations to myself!

I plan to go to work after graduation.


I plan to go to work after graduation. I plan to work after graduation.

I plan to go tostart working after graduation. I plan to start working after graduation.

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I plan to go to work after graduation. I plan to work after graduation.

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This is my first time to post on Langcorrect, wishing I can improve my English creative skill in here.


This is my first time to posting on Langcorrect,. I wishing I can to improve my English creative skill in English here. This is my first time posting on Langcorrect. I wish to improve my skill in English here.

This is my first time to post on Langcorrect, wishhoping I can improve my English creative skills in here. This is my first time to post on Langcorrect, hoping I can improve my English skills in here.

This is my first time to posting on Langcorrect, wishingi hope I can improve my English creative skill in here. / I wish to improve This is my first time posting on Langcorrect, i hope I can improve my creative skill here. / I wish to improve

"wishing" usually needs to be clearly connected to a subject. I'm wishing to improve my English. Wishing you all the best!

This is my first time to posting on Langcorrect, I'm wishing that I can improve my English creative skill ins here. This is my first time posting on Langcorrect, I'm wishing that I can improve my English creative skills here.

This is my first time to posting on Langcorrect, wishing I can. I hope that I improve my English creative writing skill ins here. This is my first time posting on Langcorrect. I hope that I improve my English creative writing skills here.

This is my first time to post on Langcorrect, wishingand I hope I can improve my English creativewriting skill ins here. This is my first time to post on Langcorrect, and I hope I can improve my English writing skills here.

"creative skills" sounds very general. This phrase would be more fitting in a context describing multiple skills, like drawing, writing, and painting. However, since you distinguished English as the skill you want to improve and Langcorrect is a writing based website, "writing skills" sounds most natural.

This is my first time to posting on Langcorrect,. I wishing I can to improve my English creativeomposition skill ins here. This is my first time posting on Langcorrect. I wish to improve my English composition skills here.

I had passed CET-6, but my spoken English and writen skills are still poor, so I want to make some change!


I hadve passed CET-6, but my spoken English speaking and writening skills are still poor, so I want to make some change that! I have passed CET-6, but my English speaking and writing skills are still poor, so I want to change that!

Some of the word you used like “spoken” and “written”, are usually used in sentences written about something that happened in the past. The word “make” doesn’t have to be used if a sentence can be understood without using it.

I had passed the CET-6, but my spoken English and writen skills are still poor, so I want to make some change! I had passed the CET-6, but my spoken English and writen skills are still poor, so I want to make some change!

I hadve passed CET-6, but my spoken English and writening skills are still poor, so I want to make sa change!/ Some change!s I have passed CET-6, but my spoken English and writing skills are still poor, so I want to make a change!/ Some changes

A change- one. Article a is for singular most of the time. Spoken English is correct. Spoken-adjective here, not a verb Written is an adjective as well. BUT is used when we describe where something is written, like: “The name was written on the paper.” “It’s written on the desk.” When talking about speech "it was SAID (not spoken) during the meeting" can be equivalent

I had passed CET-6, but my spoken English and writening skills are still poor, so I want to make some change! I passed CET-6, but my spoken English and writing skills are still poor, so I want to make some change!

writing vs. written (written is past tense, writing skills is for general writing)

I had passed CET-6, but my spoken English and written skills are still poor, so. I want to make some changeprogress! I passed CET-6, but my spoken English and written skills are still poor. I want to make some progress!

I hadve passed the CET-6, but my spoken English and writening skills are still poor, so I want to make some change! I have passed the CET-6 but my spoken English and writing skills are still poor, so I want to make some change!

The difference between "had passed" and "have passed" is subtle and complicated.

I had passed CET-6, but my spoken English and writening skills are still poor, so I want to make some changes! I had passed CET-6, but my spoken English and writing skills are still poor, so I want to make some changes!

I am a master student now, and I will graduate in June in this year!


I am a master student now, and I will graduate in June in this year! I am a master student now, and I will graduate in June this year!

I am currently a master's student now, and I will graduate inthis June in this year! I am currently a master's student now, and I will graduate this June!

I am a master student now, and I will graduate in June in this year! I am a master student now, and I will graduate in June this year!

You already said 'in' before June, so it's unnecessary here.

I am a masters student now, and I will graduate in June inof this year! I am a masters student now and I will graduate in June of this year!

I am a masters student now, and I will graduate in June inof this year! I am a masters student now, and I will graduate in June of this year!

Congratulations!

I am a mMaster's student now, and I will graduate in June in this year! I am a Master's student now, and I will graduate in June in this year!

It's such a diffcult time of this three years to me, but fourtunately, I have got a good result of my graduate thesis!


It's such has been a diffcult time of this three years tofor me, but fourtunately, I have got a good result ofn my graduate thesis! It has been a diffcult three years for me, but fourtunately I got a good result on my graduate thesis!

It's These three years was such a difficult time of this three years tofor me, but fourtunately, I have got a good result of my graduate thesis! These three years was such a difficult time for me, but fortunately, I have got a good result of my graduate thesis!

It's suchbeen a difficult time of this three years to me, but fourtunately, I have got a good result ofn my graduate thesis! It's been a difficult three years to me, but fortunately, I got a good result on my graduate thesis!

Congratulations!! :) Some small spelling errors, but overall good.

It's been such a difficult time of this three years to me, but fourtunately , I have gotreceived a good result ofor my graduate thesis! It's been such a difficult time, but fortunately , I have received a good result for my graduate thesis!

It's These past three years have been such a difficult time of this three years tofor me, but fourtunately, I have gotreceived a good result ofn my graduate thesis! These past three years have been such a difficult time for me, but fortunately I received a good result on my graduate thesis!

It's was such a difficult time of thisthese past three years tofor me, but fourtunately, I have got a good result ofor my graduate thesis! It's was such a difficult time these past three years for me, but fortunately, I got a good result for my graduate thesis!

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Wish there is no big problem in the future!


Wishing there is noare no more big problems in the future! Wishing there are no more big problems in the future!

Wish there is nowill not be any big problems in the future! Wish there will not be any big problems in the future!

Will be, cuz we are talking about the future Is mostly for present

WishI hope that there is no big problem in the future! I hope that there is no big problem in the future!

Hope would be a better word than wish.

WishI hope that there isare no big problems in the future! I hope that there are no big problems in the future!

WishI hope there isare no big problems in the future! I hope there are no big problems in the future!

If you are referring to the Langcorrect community, you could also say, "I hope everything goes well for everyone"

WishHope there isare no big problems in the future! Hope there are no big problems in the future!

And wish you guys have a good day!


And wishi hope you guys have a good day! And i hope you guys have a good day!

And wish you guys have a good day! And wish you guys have a good day!

And I wish you guys have a good day! And I wish you guys have a good day!

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AndI wish you guys have a good day! I wish you guys a good day!

And wish you guys have a good day! And wish you guys a good day!

It'd be natural to connect these last two sentences: I hope there are no big problems in the future and I wish you guys/all a good day!

And wishing you guys have a good day! And wishing you guys a good day!

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