A vVaccine for cCancer A Vaccine for Cancer

Title capitalization rules

The cCancer is a very dangerous disease whoich/that killeds millions of people every year. Cancer is a very dangerous disease which/that kills millions of people every year.

Speaking in general = cancer (no "the") "Who" is reserved for people No reason to use past tense here (kills)

The cCancer is a very dangerous disease whothat killeds millions of people every year. Cancer is a very dangerous disease that kills millions of people every year.

Since cancer is a category, you wouldn't use The. Who doesn't work because it's not a person. Tensing for kill and million to present since you specify every year.

Our immune system sometimes can't be able to recognize it and can thinks therse are good/healthy celluls. Our immune system sometimes can't recognize it and thinks these are good/healthy cells.

"Can" already has "able to" built into it. I can = I am able to

Our immune system sometimes can't be able to recognize it and can thinks therey are good celluls. Our immune system sometimes can't recognize it and thinks they are good cells.

Cut out some unnecessary words and corrected there to they.

The cCancer spreads in the body thanksdue to cancerous celluls which grow upin size. Cancer spreads in the body due to cancerous cells which grow in size.

I would use "thanks to" for more positive subjects, but it should also be avoided in scientific texts. Children "grow up" (as they age), but things just getting larger in size simply "grow"

The cancer then spreads in the body thanks to cancerous celluls which grow up. The cancer then spreads in the body.

Can cut it down to just this and have the same meaning.

The cCancer is sayingignalling to our body, "Everything is good, there's nothing to look at there," and the immune system is blind to recogniseing it. Cancer is signalling to our body, "Everything is good, there's nothing to look at here," and the immune system is blind to recognising it.

Cancer is not actually speaking, and "signalling" is the biological term described for cell communication

The cancer is saying to our body "Everything is good, there's nothing to look at there" and the immune system is blind to recognise it. The cancer is saying to our body "Everything is good, there's nothing to look at here" and the immune system is blind to it.

Minor cleanup. To to indicate direction of verb and here instead of there.

There's a treatment against thate disease whoich/that already exists, but it can have bad effects for our body and can hurt uharmful side effects. There's a treatment against the disease which/that already exists, but it can have harmful side effects.

"Side effects" is how we describe the non-desirable effects caused by a treatment.

There's a treatment against thate disease whothat already exists, but it can have badnegative effects for our body and can hurt us. There's treatment against the disease that already exists, but it can have negative effects for our body and can hurt us.

Bad is ok, but negative works better here.

However, diseases like the flu or smallpox have been tpreavented by vaccines. However, diseases like the flu or smallpox have been prevented by vaccines.

Vaccines are generally preventative medicines, and are so for both the flu and smallpox (e.g., they are not effective as cures for these examples)

The scientists's purposegoal is to train our system immuneimmune system to recognise thoese anomalies in our bodies and to fight against ithem. The scientists's goal is to train our immune system to recognise these anomalies in our bodies and to fight against them.

The scientistsvaccine's purpose is to train our system immuneimmune system to recognise those anomalies in our bodies and to fight against it. The vaccine's purpose is to train our immune system to recognise those anomalies in our bodies and to fight against it.

Think you mean vaccine here. Word order correction.

Personally, I think there will be a vaccine in athe near future. Personally, I think there will be a vaccine in the near future.

Please tell me how you found my eEnglish and feel free to give me advices! Please tell me how you found my English and feel free to give me advice!

Please tell me how you found my english and feel free to give me advices! Please tell me how you found my english and feel free to give me advice!