Feb. 16, 2021
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Katie Se7en has explained the implicit meaning of her latest track, “Krinne Circle.”
The Japanese DJ took to Instagram early this morning to explain her motives behind producing “Krinne Circle,'' referring to the ongoing pandemic. “Krinne Circle” was released via Mixmag Asia on Feb. 3.
“This song came about as a response to the current global situation,” Katie Se7en said in the post. “What can I do as an artist? I thought of a song of cleansing, and found the sound of Krin log drum (Ghana’s traditional instrument).”
She concluded by saying, “I bet people beat logs since beginning of our time for all kinds of rituals and ceremonies. In my imagination, we sat around a fire in a cleansing ritual and beat the drum in frenzy groove to drive out bad things in air!”
So, now you know what she tried to express in her track. Listen to the trippy techno house track, “Krinne Circle,” while keeping her words in mind!
The Japanese DJ took to Instagram early this morning to explain her motives behind producing “Krinne Circle,'' which referringed to the ongoing pandemic.
Your sentence isn't clear on the subject of "referring". I.e. it could mean that in her explaining she referred to the pandemic, versus the song itself referring to the pandemic. Adding "which" clarifies that it was the idea immediately before the "which" that does the referring.
So, now you know what she tried to express in her track.
You can omit this sentence without losing any of the substance of your essay.
Listen to the trippy techno house track, “Krinne Circle,” while keeping her words in mind!
having the commas is correct, but you can do without them
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Katie Se7en has explained the implicit meaning of her latest track, “Krinne Circle.” |
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The Japanese DJ took to Instagram early this morning to explain her motives behind producing “Krinne Circle,'' referring to the ongoing pandemic. The Japanese DJ took to Instagram early this morning to explain her motives behind producing “Krinne Circle,'' which referr Your sentence isn't clear on the subject of "referring". I.e. it could mean that in her explaining she referred to the pandemic, versus the song itself referring to the pandemic. Adding "which" clarifies that it was the idea immediately before the "which" that does the referring. |
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“Krinne Circle” was released via Mixmag Asia on Feb. 3. |
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“This song came about as a response to the current global situation,” Katie Se7en said in the post. |
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“What can I do as an artist? |
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I thought of a song of cleansing, and found the sound of Krin log drum (Ghana’s traditional instrument).” |
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She concluded by saying, “I bet people beat logs since beginning of our time for all kinds of rituals and ceremonies. |
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In my imagination, we sat around a fire in a cleansing ritual and beat the drum in frenzy groove to drive out bad things in air!” |
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So, now you know what she tried to express in her track. So, now you know what she tried to express in her track. You can omit this sentence without losing any of the substance of your essay. |
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Listen to the trippy techno house track, “Krinne Circle,” while keeping her words in mind! Listen to the trippy techno house track having the commas is correct, but you can do without them |
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