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Homework: My Struggle

When I was 12 years old, I used to play too much videogames.

Now I only play videogames that help me to be a better person and of course, I have control of my time playing them.

I will learn more about games and use their benefitits to improve some areas of my life.

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Homework: My Struggle

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Homework: My Struggle

I will learn more about games and use their benefitits to improve some areas of my life.

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Homework: My Struggle

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Homework: My Struggle


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When I was 12 years old, I used to play too much videogames.


When I was 12 years old, I used to play too muchany video games. / I played video games. too much. When I was 12 years old, I used to play too many video games. / I played video games too much.

When I was 12 years old, I used to play too muchany videogames. When I was 12 years old, I used to play too many videogames.

When I was 12 years old, I used to play too muchany videogames. When I was 12 years old, I used to play too many videogames.

When I was 12 years old, I used to play too muchany video games. When I was 12 years old, I used to play too many video games.

Now I only play videogames that help me to be a better person and of course, I have control of my time playing them.


Now I only play videogames that help me to be a better person and of course, that make me feel that I have control of my time when playing them. Now I only play videogames that help me to be a better person and of course, that make me feel that I have control of my time when playing them.

“I have control…” it is an unnatural thing to put like this, we never “have” control, we’ll usually justify it as just being a feeling of control, if that makes sense “Talking to you makes me feel like I have control of my future.” “I have to take control or else.” “I feel like I don’t have control.”

Now, I only play videogames that help me to be a better person and of course, I have control of my time playing them. Now, I only play videogames that help me to be a better person and of course, I have control of my time playing them.

Now I only play videogames that help me to be a better person and, of course, I have better control of my time playing them. Now I only play videogames that help me to be a better person and, of course, I have better control of my time playing them.

Now I only play video games that help me to be a better person and of course, I have control ofver my time when playing them. Now I only play video games that help me to be a better person and of course, I have control over my time when playing them.

I will learn more about games and use their benefitits to improve some areas of my life.


I will learn more about games and use their benefitits to improve some areas of my life. I will learn more about games and use their benefits to improve some areas of my life.

I will learn more about games and use their benefitits to improve some areas of my life. I will learn more about games and use their benefits to improve some areas of my life.

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I will learn more about games and use their benefitits to improve some areas of my life. I will learn more about games and use their benefits to improve some areas of my life.

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