Dec. 10, 2024
Kotatsu (106)
Do you know what kotatsu is?
It's a short table with a heater.
In Japan, a lot of people use it during winter.
You usually put a few pieces of blanket over your kotatsu to keep inside warm.
It's really cozy and toasty.
However, once you sit under your kotatsu, you will never want to get out because it's too comfortable.
That's a problem, so I haven't used it for a long time.
Kotatsu makes people lazy.
Last year, I bought a kotatsu for my cats.
It's very small because it's for cats, so it's easy to move when I clean the room. ( This sentence has too much "It's". How should I change it to sound more natural?)
My cats really like lying under it.
こたつって何だか知っていますか？
低いテーブルで中にヒーターが付いています。
日本では、冬になると、多くの人がこたつを使います。
たいてい2～3枚の毛布を上にかけて中の温かさをキープします。
それは、ほんわかあったかくてほんとに心地いいです。
でも、一度こたつに座るとあまりに気持ちよすぎて出られなくなります。
それが問題で、私は、長い間使っていません。
こたつは人をダメにします。（この表現よく言います笑）
去年、私は、猫のためにこたつを買いました。
それは、猫用なのでとても小さいから、部屋を掃除するとき簡単に移動することができます。
猫たちはこの中に寝転がるのが大好きです。
Kotatsu
Do you know what a kotatsu is?
It's a short table with a heater.
In Japan, a lot of people use it during winter.
You usually put a few pieces of blanket over your kotatsu to keep inside warm.
It's really cozy and toasty.
However, once you sit under your kotatsu, you will never want to get out because it's too comfortable.
That's a problem, so I haven't used it for a long time.
Kotatsus makes people lazy.
Last year, I bought a kotatsu for my cats.
It's very small because it's for cats, so it's easy to move when I clean the room.
I think it's OK that you have "it's" three times in the sentence.
What you wrote looks fine to me, but you could also write it like this: Because it's for cats, it's very small and easy to move when I clean the room.
( This sentence has too muchany "It's".
How should I change it to make it sound more natural?)
My cats really like lying under it.
Feedback
I used to have a kotatsu that my friends gave to me for free. But when I moved, I couldn't take it with me because it was too big, so I gave it away. I want to get a kotatsu again sometime. 😆
Dec. 13, 2024
No, you might not want to get a kotatsu or else you will be lazy, but I know how you feel😄Thank you for your corrections!
Kotatsu
Do you know what kotatsu is?
It's a short table with a heater.
In Japan, a lot of people use it during winter.
You usually put a few pieces of blanket over your kotatsu to keep the inside warm.
It's really cozy and toasty.
However, once you sit under your kotatsu, you will never want to get out because it's too comfortable.
That's a problem, so I haven't used it for a long time.
Kotatsu makes people lazy.
Last year, I bought a kotatsu for my cats.
It's very small because it's for cats, so it's easy to move when I clean the room.
( This sentence has too muchany "It's".
I actually don't think it's too many. I guess you could just replace "it" with the actual name. Something like "Since the kotatsu is for cats, it's small and easy to move when I clean the room."
How should I change it to sound more natural?)
My cats really like lying under it.
Feedback
I remember an episode of gintama where they were talking about never getting out of the kotatsu. It sounds really nice. I want one
Dec. 11, 2024
Thank you so much for your corrections! That's really true! I understand how they feel😅
Dec. 11, 2024
"Since the kotatsu is for cats, it's small and easy to move when I clean the room." ←Thank you for the sentence!
Dec. 12, 2024
No prob!
Do you know what kotatsu is?
It's a short table with a heater.
In Japan, a lot of people use it during winter.
You usually put a few pieces of blanket over your kotatsu to keep inside warm.
It's really cozy and toasty.
However, once you sit under your kotatsu, you will never want to get out because it's too comfortable.
That's a problem, so I haven't used it for a long time.
Kotatsu makes people lazy.
Last year, I bought a kotatsu for my cats.
It's very small because it's for cats, somaking it's easy to move when I clean the room.¶
Here is a different variation;
Since it's for my cats, it's very small and easy to move when I clean the room
( This sentence has too much "It's".
Haha, you are right. Don't beat yourself up though
How should I change it to sound more natural?)
My cats really like lying under it.
Feedback
Good job :)
Dec. 10, 2024
Thank you so much for your corrections!
Dec. 11, 2024
You're welcome.
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