May 14, 2025
Korean history
A few years ago, I watched a documentary about the history of Korea. I'm genuinely interested in history, but the Cold War always catches my interest. The documentary was talking about the Korean War, which was one of the several proxy wars. The narrators goal to reach out to as many people as possible became clear in the interesting way of portraying the history. It helped me understand the reasons and outcomes of the war and depicted different point of views to help the target audience to dive deep into the events. I recommend the documentary to everyone out there, as there are many takeaways that we can apply on our own lives.
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What documentary programme or film have you particularly enjoyed?
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Why did you like it? What did you learn from it?
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Korean history
A few years ago, I watched a documentary about the history of Korea.
I'm genuinely interested in history, but the Cold War always catches my interest.
The documentary was talking about the Korean War, which was one of the several proxy wars.
The narrator’s goal is to reach out to as many people as possible became clear in the interesting way ofhe portrayinged the history.
It helped me understand the reasons and outcomes of the war and depicted the different point of views to help the target audience to dive deep into the events.
I recommend the documentary to everyone out there, as there are many takeaways that we can apply on our own lives.
The narrator’s goal to reach out to as many people as possible became clear in the interesting way ofthey portrayinged the history.
“ ‘s ” is used to show the narrator's possession of the goal.
“…the interesting way of portraying the history.” needs a subject to make the sentence sound right.
It helped me understand the reasons and outcomes of the war and. It also depicted different points of views to help the target audience to dive deep into the events.
It seems like the sentence needs to broken into to two since the sentence seems to distinguish between “me” and the target audience.
I recommend the documentary to everyone out there, as there are many takeaways that we can apply oin our own lives.
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A few years ago, I watched a documentary about the history of Korea. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'm genuinely interested in history, but the Cold War always catches my interest. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The documentary was talking about the Korean War, which was one of the several proxy wars. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The narrators goal to reach out to as many people as possible became clear in the interesting way of portraying the history. The narrator’s goal to reach “ ‘s ” is used to show the narrator's possession of the goal. “…the interesting way of portraying the history.” needs a subject to make the sentence sound right. The narrator’s goal is to reach out to as many people as possible became clear in the interesting way |
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It helped me understand the reasons and outcomes of the war and depicted different point of views to help the target audience to dive deep into the events. It helped me understand the reasons and outcomes of the war It seems like the sentence needs to broken into to two since the sentence seems to distinguish between “me” and the target audience. It helped me understand the reasons and outcomes of the war and depicted the different point of views to help the target audience to dive deep into the events. |
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I recommend the documentary to everyone out there, as there are many takeaways that we can apply on our own lives. I recommend the documentary to everyone out there, as there are many takeaways that we can apply I recommend the documentary to everyone out there |
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