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June 2, 2025

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My first blog📚✍

Hey!
I'm Ney. I'm from Japan.
I've lived in the US for about 8 months, and I've started learning English since I arrived here to communicate with local people.
Actually, I'm really a specking person, so what I can't speak English is annoying for me.😱😱😱
Even thoush I've started to understand and speak English little by little, I don't speak natulal and fruent English yet.
So I start using this site! I want to get you all English power!!
I'm really glad if you all cheack my blog, and give me some advice.✍
And of course, I can teach you correct Japanese too.
Thank you.❤️

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My first blog📚✍

Hey!

I'm Ney.

I'm from Japan.

Thank you.❤️

Thank you.❤️

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Neyney

June 2, 2025

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Hey!


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I'm Ney.


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I'm from Japan.


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I've lived in the US for about 8 months, and I've started learning English since I arrived here to communicate with local people.


I've lived in the US for about 8 months, and I've started learning English since I arrived here to communicate with (the) local people. I've lived in the US for about 8 months, and I've started learning English since I arrived here to communicate with (the) local people.

It might sound a little more natural to place the article "the" before "local people". Alternatively, and more succintly: "...to communicate with the locals."

Actually, I'm really a specking person, so what I can't speak English is annoying for me.😱😱😱 Even thoush I've started to understand and speak English little by little, I don't speak natulal and fruent English yet.


Actually, I'm really a speckingtalkative person, so what, I can't speakay English is annoying for me.😱😱😱 Even thousgh I've started to understand and speak English little by little, I don't speak natulral and frluent English yet. Actually, I'm really a talkative person so, I can't say English is annoying for me.😱😱😱 Even though I've started to understand and speak English little by little, I don't speak natural and fluent English yet.

By specking do you mean talkative? I'm not sure what you mean by specking so sorry :(.

Actually, I'm a really a speckingtalkative person, so what I can't speaknot being able to English is annoying for me.😱😱😱 Even thousgh I've started to understand and speak English little by little, I don't speak natulral and frluent English yet. Actually, I'm a really talkative person, so not being able to English is annoying for me.😱😱😱 Even though I've started to understand and speak English little by little, I don't speak natural and fluent English yet.

(1) talkative: おしゃべり (2) There's a very subtle difference between "I'm really a talkative person" and "I'm a really talkative person". Both are correct, but placing "really" before "a" emphasises the fact that you're a talkative person (as opposed to being any other kind of person), rather than modifying the adjective "talkative" directly. Perhaps it's better not to worry about this for now. In general, place the adjective after "a". In this case,"really talkative" is the adjective, so we write "a really talkative". (3) "not being able to speak English": 英語を話せないこと

Actually, I'm really a specaking person, so wthe fact that I can't speak English is annoying for me.😱😱😱 Even thousgh I've started to understand and speak English little by little, I don't speak natulral and frluent English yet. Actually, I'm really a speaking person, so the fact that I can't speak English is annoying for me.😱😱😱 Even though I've started to understand and speak English little by little, I don't speak natural and fluent English yet.

So I start using this site!


So I started using this site! So I started using this site!

So I started using this site! So I started using this site!

You starting to use this site is something that happened in the past, so the past tense is expected. Alternatively: "So I've started using this site!"

So I've started using this site! So I've started using this site!

I want to get you all English power!!


I want to get you allall the English power!! I want to get all the English power!!

I want to get you allall your English power(s)!! I want to get all your English power(s)!!

I took my best guess at what you meant. In this context specifically, you can also say "powers" instead of "power"; both are okay, though I'm personally more inclined to use "powers".

I want to get you allall your English power!! I want to get all your English power!!

This blog is my first time 📚✍


My first blog📚✍


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I'm really glad if you all cheack my blog, and give me some advice.✍ And of course, I can teach you correct Japanese too.


I'm really glad if you all cheack my blog, and give me some advice.✍ And of course, I can teach you correct Japanese too. I'm really glad if you all check my blog, and give me some advice.✍ And of course, I can teach you correct Japanese too.

I'mll be really glad if you all cheack my blog, and give me some advice.✍ And of course, I can teach you correct Japanese too. I'll be really glad if you all check my blog, and give me some advice.✍ And of course, I can teach you correct Japanese too.

(1) Since "if" expresses a conditional/hypothetical, the use of "will" is expected here. The structure is "If X, (I) will Y." or "(I) will Y if X." (2) If you want to use "I'm" and not "if", you'd write: "I'm really glad that you all checked my blog, and gave me some advice." However, this makes the assumption that the reader has already checked your blog AND given you advice, the latter of which may not necessaily be true, so the sentence with "if" is still more appropriate in my opinion.

I'mll be really glad if you all cheack my blog, and give me some advice.✍ And of course, I can teach you correct Japanese too. I'll be really glad if you all check my blog, and give me some advice.✍ And of course, I can teach you correct Japanese too.

Thank you.❤️


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