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Journal 10/18/20

Yesterday evening, I slept with a driver in the same room. He smokes and the whole room was filled with smoke. I feel very uncomfortable with it. I cannot even breathe, but I am embarrassed to tell him and I can only endure it. I will sleep in a single room tonight and I hope I can have a good sleep.

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Journal 10/18/20


Yesterday evening, I slept with a driver in the same room.


Yesterday evening, I slept with a driver in the same roomLast night, I shared a room with a driver. Last night, I shared a room with a driver.

"slept with" makes it seem like you shared a bed with him.

Yesterday evening, I slept with a driver in the same room as a driver. Yesterday evening, I slept in the same room as a driver.

He smokes and the whole room was filled with smoke.


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I feel very uncomfortable with it.


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I cannot even breathe, but I am embarrassed to tell him and I can only endure it.


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You can also say "I'm" instead of "I am".

I will sleep in a single room tonight and I hope I can have a good sleep.


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I will sleep in a single room tonight and I hope that I can have a good sleep well. I will sleep in a single room tonight and I hope that I can sleep well.

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