Oct. 3, 2023
youth issues. part one
In my humble opinion, everyone should share their thoughts. Human being is a social creature. People just must offer our support for each other If we need it. Unfortunately, my peers don’t get it. They were brought up to be selfish. They don’t care about anybody, especially their parents. They really wish to be independent from folks (I mean folks in the sense of parents. Is this correct?). Someone is ready to run away as soon as they can. I engaged why youth don’t respect anybody. Actually, I can’t understand this point of view. My parents have been the biggest authority for me for all my life. They tried to bring me up with love. They used to build closer relationships with me. My dear dad always said that our relationships were regulated by God.
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Youth Issues: Part One
Human being is are social creatures.
Human beings are social creatures.
People just must offer our support for each other Iif we need it.
People must offer our support for each other if we need it.
They really wish to be independent from their folks (I mean folks ing the sense ofir parents).
They really wish to be independent from their folks (meaning their parents).
"Their folks" is an old slang way of saying "parents" so it would work here.
Is this correct?).
Correction above so this is not needed :)
Someone isThey are ready to run away as soon as they can.
They are ready to run away as soon as they can.
I engaged whythink this is why the youth don’t respect anybody.
I think this is why the youth don’t respect anybody.
I'm not sure your meaning here, so sorry if this is not correct!
My parents have been the biggest authority forinfluence on me for all my life.
My parents have been the biggest influence on me for all my life.
Authority is okay, but kind of has a negative feeling here. I would say influence is more neutral/positive.
They ustried to build a closer relationships with me.
They tried to build a closer relationship with me.
Oct. 5, 2023
They ustried to build a closer relationships with me.
Thank you so much for your corrections. Could you please tell me why I can't use the "used to" form in this case?
Oct. 5, 2023
Thank you so much for your corrections. Could you please tell me why I can't use the "used to" form in this case?
Sure! This one is a little hard to explain but I will try.
"Used to" would mean that they were successful in doing something. For example, I used to play baseball --> I could play baseball in the past. In your story, they are trying to build a relationship with you, but it was not good/not successful, so used to by itself doesn't work.
You could say "They used to try to build a closer relationship with me" too. Then you can still use used to, but adding "try" makes the meaning clear.
Hope that helps!
In my humble opinion, everyone should be able to share their thoughts. In my humble opinion, everyone should be able to share their thoughts.
Human being is are social creatures.
Human beings are social creatures.
People just mshould just offer our support for each other If we need it.
People should just offer support for each other If we need it.
unfortunately, this sentence makes no sense. Perhaps you should rather write, "People should be there for each other."
They were broughtare raised to be selfish. / They have grown up to be selfish.
They are raised to be selfish. / They have grown up to be selfish.
They really wish to be independent from folks (I mean folks in the sense oftheir parents.
They really wish to be independent from their parents
it's way better if you just write "their parents"
Someone isThey are ready to run away as soon as they can.
They are ready to run away as soon as they can.
it just doesn't make sense to say "someone" here. It makes the reader wonder who you are referring to.
I engaged why youthresearched about why teenagers/young people don’t respect anybody.
I researched about why teenagers/young people don’t respect anybody.
By "engage" do you mean "research"?
My parents have been the biggest authority for me for all my life.
My parents have been the biggest authority for me all my life.
They tried to bring me upraise me with love.
They tried to raise me with love.
They used to buildt closer relationships with me.
They built close relationships with me.
Oct. 5, 2023
I engaged why youthresearched about why teenagers/young people don’t respect anybody.
By "engage" do you mean "research"?
Thank you so much for your correction. I just used this word incorrectly. I meant that I was interested in the problem.
Oct. 5, 2023
They tried to bring me upraise me with love.
Could you please tell me why I can't use the bring someone up in this case?
Oct. 5, 2023
Could you please tell me why I can't use the bring someone up in this case?
you can probably say both but "raise me" sounds way more natural.
Oct. 5, 2023
Thank you so much for your correction. I just used this word incorrectly. I meant that I was interested in the problem.
in this case, you'd have to say, "I was curious about why teenagers/young people don't respect anybody". Being engaged in something is a way stronger phrase than just being interested in something
yYouth iIssues. p, Part oOne
Youth Issues, Part One
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In my humble opinion, everyone should share their thoughts.
HA human being is a social creature.
A human being is a social creature.
People just mustshould offer our support forto each other If wewhen it is need ited.
People should offer support to each other when it is needed.
Unfortunately, my peers don’t get it.
They were brought up to be selfish.
They don’t care about anybody, especially their parents.
They really wish to be independent from their folks (I mean folks in the sense of parents. They really wish to be independent from their folks (I mean folks in the sense of parents.
You have to say "their folks". Saying just "folks" refers to people in general.
Is this correct?).
Someone is ready to run away as soon as they can.
I engagedam not sure why youth don’t respect anybody.
I am not sure why youth don’t respect anybody.
Actually, I can’t understand this point of view.
My parents have been the biggest authority for me for all my life.
They tried to bring me up with love.
They used to build closer relationships with me.
My dear dad always said that our relationships were regulated by God.
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Human being is a social creature.
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They really wish to be independent from folks (I mean folks in the sense of parents. They really wish to be independent from their folks (I mean folks in the sense of parents. They really wish to be independent from their folks (I mean folks in the sense of parents. You have to say "their folks". Saying just "folks" refers to people in general.
They really wish to be independent from it's way better if you just write "their parents"
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Is this correct?). This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Correction above so this is not needed :) |
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Someone is ready to run away as soon as they can. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
it just doesn't make sense to say "someone" here. It makes the reader wonder who you are referring to.
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I engaged why youth don’t respect anybody.
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My parents have been the biggest authority for me for all my life. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
My parents have been the biggest authority for me
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