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Kinyas and Kayra Part II

I see myself as an immortal. It has been years that I disconnected from time and space. I had fallen in love with a girl. I had to took 6 hour road to see her. One morning, I miss the train. I gave up on love. Only I know what is giving up on oneself. My name is Kaygusuz Abdal. I gave up on God. I gave up on death. Because If I die and the gatekeepers of reward and punishment system are waiting me there, I have to being in big fights. I don't want to die because I am afraid I kill God too. And noone can endure this kind of death except me... I wrote the Well Metaphor in counterpart of Platon's Cave Metaphor: I explained Humans falling after they born climbing the opprtunities passing quickly and with holding onto other people and only do this because they want to reach height of when they were born. Also, I explained the ones putting their hands to their mouth and dedicated to not climb. And I asked, Does the god above or below. I used to play pocker. Now I am playing to god is in below, at the ground of well. My life is on the table with some red game chip.

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Kinyas and Kayra Part II

I see myself as an immortal.

It has been years that I disconnected from time and space.

I had fallen in love with a girl.

I had to took a 6 hour roadtrip to see her.

One morning, I missed the train.

I gave up on love.

Only I know what is giving up on oneself.

My name is Kaygusuz Abdal.

I gave up on God.

I gave up on death.

Because If I die and the gatekeepers of reward and punishment system are waiting me there, I have to beingget in big fights.

I don't want to die because I am afraid I kill God too.

And noone can endure this kind of death except me...

I wrote the Well Metaphor in counterpart of Platon's Cave Metaphor: I explaindescribed Humans falling after they are born, climbing the opportunities passing by quickly, and with holdclinging onto other people and; they only do this because they want to reach height of when they were born.

Also, I explained the ones putting their hands to their mouth and dedicated to not climb.

And I asked, Doeis the gGod above or below.

I used to play pocker.

Now I am playing to god isthe God that ins below, at the ground of well.

My life is on the table with some red game chip.

I gave up on love.


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Only I know what is giving up on oneself.


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My name is Kaygusuz Abdal.


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I gave up on God.


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I gave up on death.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Kinyas and Kayra Part II


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I see myself as an immortal.


I see myself as an immortal.

It has been years that I disconnected from time and space.


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I had fallen in love with a girl.


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I had to took 6 hour road to see her.


I had to took a 6 hour roadtrip to see her.

One morning, I miss the train.


One morning, I missed the train.

Because If I die and the gatekeepers of reward and punishment system are waiting me there, I have to being in big fights.


Because If I die and the gatekeepers of reward and punishment system are waiting me there, I have to beingget in big fights.

I don't want to die because I am afraid I kill God too.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And noone can endure this kind of death except me...


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I wrote the Well Metaphor in counterpart of Platon's Cave Metaphor: I explained Humans falling after they born climbing the opprtunities passing quickly and with holding onto other people and only do this because they want to reach height of when they were born.


I wrote the Well Metaphor in counterpart of Platon's Cave Metaphor: I explaindescribed Humans falling after they are born, climbing the opportunities passing by quickly, and with holdclinging onto other people and; they only do this because they want to reach height of when they were born.

Also, I explained the ones putting their hands to their mouth and dedicated to not climb.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And I asked, Does the god above or below.


And I asked, Doeis the gGod above or below.

I used to play pocker.


I used to play pocker.

Now I am playing to god is in below, at the ground of well.


Now I am playing to god isthe God that ins below, at the ground of well.

My life is on the table with some red game chip.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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