April 7, 2023
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I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you find in a textbook, please correct me so that I can sound like a native🙇♂️
It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!
A: Do you know "Kingdom"?
B: No.
A: This!
B: I've never seen or heard of that.
A: Yeah, it's extremely popular in Japan, but it's rare to find someone from overseas who has read of it. Try reading it when you have the time!
You may not like the pictures at first, but after reading about 10 volumes, you just get hooked ... maybe.
But I wouldn't recommend the anime seriously. I think season 3 is still better, but 1 and 2 are pretty bad. The movements are kind of weird and its character design aren't cool. I think they ruined the original.
B: Haha really. What's it about, btw?
A: It's a story set in the Spring and Autumn period in China when China was divided into seven countries, about first Qin Emperor and the main character and the others unified China through war.
B: Sounds interesting!
A: Very interesting! It's a historical work, so to a certain extent, you can know what's going to happen, if you look it up. Without looking it up, you know that the First Emperor will unify China, and the author has already draw the main character becoming a general at the beginning of the manga. But even when you read the manga knowing what happened, it still sustains interest. There are many deeply moving and heartfelt moments. I don't know why it's only popular in Japan. I can understand if they think it's not for them after reading it, but I can't understand people who think they're not interested in it before reading it. Deciding on impressions is, y'know, like, discrimination.
B: I see, haha.
A: It's like assuming someone isn't interesting without even talking to them. I think you should try to read the manga at least once. I guess that's how the seeds of discrimination grow. You should see and hear everything yourself and form your own opinion after checking something out. This is important. Reading this manga is the first step toward eliminating discrimination. So you sould read it! haha
Kingdom 2
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you would find in a textbook, p. Please correct me so that I can sound like a native. 🙇♂️
It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!
A: Do you know "Kingdom"?
B: No.
A: TIt's this!
B: I've never seen nor heard of that.
A: Yeah, it's extremely popular in Japan, but it's rare to find someone from overseas who has rheard of it.
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A: Yeah, it's extremely popular in Japan, but it's rare to find someone from overseas who has read it.
Try reading it when you have the time!
You may not like the pictures at first, but, after reading about 10 volumes, you just get hooked ... maybe.
But I wouldn't recommend the anime seriously.
I think season 3 is still better, but 1 and 2 are pretty bad.
The movements are kind of weird and its character design areisn't cool.
"design" is singular.
I think they ruined the original.
B: Haha, really.
What's it about, btw?
A: It's a story set in the Spring and Autumn period in China when China was divided into seven countries, about the first Qin Emperor andwho's the main character and the others who unified China through war.
B: Sounds interesting!
A: VIt's very interesting!
It's a historical work, so, to a certain extent, you can'll know what's going to happen,(,) if you look it up.
Without looking it up, you know that the First Emperor will unify China, and the author has already drawn the main character becoming a general at the beginning of the manga.
But even when you read the manga knowing what happened, it's still sustainsvery interesting.
There are many deeply moving and heartfelt moments.
I don't know why it's only popular in Japan.
I can understand if they think it's not for them after reading it, but I can't understand people who think they're not interested in it before reading it.
Deciding on impressions is, y'know, like,(,) discrimination.
B: I see, haha.
A: It's like assuming someone isn't interesting without even talking to them.
I think you should try to read the manga at least once.
I guess that's how the seeds of discrimination grow.
You should see and hear everything yourself and form your own opinion after checking something out.
This is important.
Reading this manga is the first step toward eliminating discrimination.
So you should read it!
haha
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April 10, 2023
ありがとうございました！！🙇♂️
Kingdom 2
I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you'd find in a textbook, so please correct me so that I can sound like a native🙇♂️
It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!
A: Do you know "Kingdom"?
B: No.
A: This!
B: I've never seen or heard of that.
A: Yeah, it's extremely popular in Japan, but it's rare to find someone from overseas who has read of it.
Try reading it when you have the time!
You may not like the pictures at first, but after reading about 10 volumes, you just'll get hooked ... maybe.
But I wouldn't recommend the anime seriously.
I think season 3 is still better, but 1 and 2 are pretty bad.
The movements are kind of weird, and itsthe character designs aren't cool.
I think they ruined the original.
B: Haha really.?
What's it about, btw?
A: It's a story set in the Sspring and Aautumn period in China when China was divided into seven countries, about firstwhen the Qin Emperor and, the main character, and othe others first unified China through war.
B: Sounds interesting!
A: Very interesting!
It's abased on historical workevents, so to a certain extent, you can know what's going to happen, if you look it up.
Without looking it up, you know that the First Emperor will unify China, and the author has already drawn the main character becoming a general at the beginning of the manga.
But even when you read the manga knowing what happened, it still sustremains interesting.
There are many deeply moving and heartfelt moments.
I don't know why it's only popular in Japan.
I can understand if they think it's not for them after reading it, but I can't understand people who think they're not wouldn't be interested in it before reading it.
Deciding on impressions is, y'know, like, discrimination.
Deciding without knowing anything is, y'know, kinda like discrimination.
B: I see, haha.
A: It's like assuming someone isn't interesting without even talking to them.
I think you should try to read the manga at least once.
I guess that's how the seeds of discrimination grow.
You should see and hear everything yourself and form your own opinion after checking something out.
This is important.
Reading this manga is the first step toward eliminating discrimination.
So you should read it!
haha
April 10, 2023
Thank you so much!!🙇♂️
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