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What part of your daily routine do you wish you could change
I often use smartphone before I go to sleep. Although, I want to quit this, I have no time to enjoy social networking services like X or Instagram but at night. People often say that social network could be bad for our mental health. Do you think should I quit? Actually, the number of my followers is very few, so it won’t be a problem even if I stop using those apps.
What part of your daily routine do you wish you could change
I often use smartphone before I go to sleep.
Although, I want to quit this, I have no time to enjoy social networking servicesmedia like X or Instagram buexcept at night.
People often say that social networkmedia could be bad for our mental health.
Do you think I should I quit?
Actually, the number of my followers is very fewi have very few followers, so it won’t be a problem even if I stop using those apps.
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your writing is great for a2 with minor errors. i just make it more efficient and natural!
What part of your daily routine do you wish you could change
I often use my smartphone before I go to sleep.
Although, I want to quit this habit, I have no time during the day to enjoy social networking services like X or Instagram but at night.
Adding in "habit" just clears up what you are referring to.
"during the day" = the day-light/when the sun is up. This is used more often that the opposite (but at night).
People often say that social network could be bad for our mental health.
Do you think should I quit?
ActuallyTo be honest, the number of my followers is very fewsmall, so it won’t be a problem even if I stop using those apps.
"Actually" and "to be honest" mean the same thing here, but the second sounds more natural.
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I quit using social media about a year ago. I find it frees up a lot of time and allows me to enjoy other hobbies. I recommend it!
Nice work!
Although, I want to quitstop doing this, I only have no time at night to enjoy social networking services like X or Instagram but at night.
phrasing to make it more natural and taking away the first comma
Actually, the number of my followers is very fewI have very few followers, so it won’t be a problem even if I stop using those apps.
more natural
I often use my smartphone before I go to sleep.
People often say that social networkmedia could be bad for our mental health.
Do you think I should I quit?
Actually, the number of my followers isare very few, so it won’t be a problem even if I stop using those apps.
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