Feb. 3, 2026
What part of your daily routine do you wish you could change
I often use smartphone before I go to sleep. Although, I want to quit this, I have no time to enjoy social networking services like X or Instagram but at night. People often say that social network could be bad for our mental health. Do you think should I quit? Actually, the number of my followers is very few, so it won’t be a problem even if I stop using those apps.
I often use my smartphone before I go to sleep.
Although, I want to quit this, I have no time to enjoy social networking services like X or Instagram buexcept at night.
Alternatively you can say ". . . I want to quit this habit"
People often say that social network couldmedia can be bad for our mental health.
I tend to hear and use "social media" more often than "social networking" and "SNS" in America at least
Do you think should I quit?
Actually, the number of my followers is very fewI have very few followers, so it won’'t be a problem even if I stop using those apps.
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Good job!
I'll be honest, I've even thought of trying to stop staring at my phone screen in bed before I go to sleep. There's plenty of research that states that you should avoid "blue light" (light from electronic devices) at least 1 hour before going to bed, but I just can't help but scroll through Reddit, X, and Discord.
Feb. 4, 2026
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I can write sentences if I take the time, but they often end up being strangely long and unnatural.
I think I get so excited about being able to come up with and write English sentences that I unconsciously try to write long ones. I'm not good at writing long sentences in Japanese either.
I'm looking at my hobbies, espresso and oil painting. It's fun!
What part of your daily routine do you wish you could change
I often use smartphone before I go to sleep.
Although, I want to quit this, I have no time during the day to enjoy social networking services like X or Instagram buexcept at night.
People often say that social network could be bad for our mental health.
Do you think should I quit?
Actually, the number of my followers is very few, so it won’t be a problem even if I stop using those apps.
Feedback
I came looking for pieces of advice and found only one 😅🥲. I am thinking of stopping too but it's the one of the things that keeps me updated on things going on real life, since I don't read the news.
If using it makes you feel down or depressed, you should stop.
Nice write up btw.
Feb. 4, 2026
Thank you so much for your careful corrections. I'm glad that it turned out well. On X and Instagram, you can mainly find posts about my hobbies, espresso and oil painting. It's fun!
Feb. 5, 2026
You're welcome :)
Can you share your account name, if you don't mind?
Feb. 8, 2026
This is my account.
X: @tomosh55
Instagram: tomo.art28
I don't post often, and it's not particularly interesting, so don't worry too much about it.
Although, I want to quit thisat, I have no time to enjoy social networking services like X or Instagram buexcept at night.
People often say that social networks could be bad for our mental health.
Do you think I should I quit?
Actually, the number of my followers is very felow, so it won’t be a problem even if I stop using those apps.
Feb. 3, 2026
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I can write sentences if I take my time, but they often end up being strangely long and unnatural.
I think I get so excited about being able to come up with and write English sentences that I unconsciously try to write longer ones. I'm not good at writing long sentences in Japanese either.
What part of your daily routine do you wish you could change
I often use smartphone before I go to sleep.
Although, I want to quit this, I have no time to enjoy social networking servicesmedia like X or Instagram buexcept at night.
People often say that social networkmedia could be bad for our mental health.
Do you think I should I quit?
Actually, the number of my followers is very fewi have very few followers, so it won’t be a problem even if I stop using those apps.
Feedback
your writing is great for a2 with minor errors. i just make it more efficient and natural!
Feb. 3, 2026
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I can write sentences if I take my time, but they often end up being strangely long and unnatural.
I think I get so excited about being able to come up with and write English sentences that I unconsciously try to write longer ones. I'm not good at writing long sentences in Japanese either.
What part of your daily routine do you wish you could change
I often use my smartphone before I go to sleep.
Although, I want to quit this habit, I have no time during the day to enjoy social networking services like X or Instagram but at night.
Adding in "habit" just clears up what you are referring to.
"during the day" = the day-light/when the sun is up. This is used more often that the opposite (but at night).
People often say that social network could be bad for our mental health.
Do you think should I quit?
ActuallyTo be honest, the number of my followers is very fewsmall, so it won’t be a problem even if I stop using those apps.
"Actually" and "to be honest" mean the same thing here, but the second sounds more natural.
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I quit using social media about a year ago. I find it frees up a lot of time and allows me to enjoy other hobbies. I recommend it!
Nice work!
Feb. 3, 2026
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I can write sentences if I take my time, but they often end up being strangely long and unnatural.
I think I get so excited about being able to come up with and write English sentences that I unconsciously try to write longer ones. I'm not good at writing long sentences in Japanese either.
Although, I want to quitstop doing this, I only have no time at night to enjoy social networking services like X or Instagram but at night.
phrasing to make it more natural and taking away the first comma
Actually, the number of my followers is very fewI have very few followers, so it won’t be a problem even if I stop using those apps.
more natural
Feb. 3, 2026
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I can write sentences if I take my time, but they often end up being strangely long and unnatural.
I think I get so excited about being able to come up with and write English sentences that I unconsciously try to write longer ones. I'm not good at writing long sentences in Japanese either.
I often use my smartphone before I go to sleep.
People often say that social networkmedia could be bad for our mental health.
Do you think I should I quit?
Actually, the number of my followers isare very few, so it won’t be a problem even if I stop using those apps.
Feb. 3, 2026
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I can write sentences if I take my time, but they often end up being strangely long and unnatural.
I think I get so excited about being able to come up with and write English sentences that I unconsciously try to write longer ones. I'm not good at writing long sentences in Japanese either.
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