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A & B Talk64

I want to speak English naturally, not like from a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!! Or you can change whatever you want!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreigners.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


A: Hey, what's wrong?
B: I might have dropped my wallet somewhere.
A: Okay. First, calm down and look in your pants, bag, and pockets again.
B: Okay.
Nothing.
A: What about your hip pocket or shirt pocket? Or the side pocket of your bag?
B: Nothing.
A: Then try to remember how far back you carried your wallet. If you can't remember, think about when you left home today.
B: Well, I had it until the train, so maybe I dropped it on the train.
A: Okay, I'll call the station clerk now and tell me what station you got on and what line you were on and to what destination. If you remember, please tell me the time.
B: Well, wait a minute, I got on at station D, and I don't know the rest of the names.
A: What station were you trying to get to?
B: Tokyo station.
A: About what time did you get on the train?
B: Around 2:00 p.m.
A: Wait a minute. So this is the way to go? (shows the app)
B: Ummm, no, it's not.
A: Then this one?
B: Oh, maybe this one. A: Okay.
A: Okay. I'll call the station, just wait a minute, and give me your phone number so that the station staff can call you on your cell phone if they find it.
B: Ok. 000.
A: Okay.
The station staff will look for it and call you on your cell phone if they find it. They may find it today, or someone may deliver it to the station later. I don't know when they will call, but if they do, please pick up the phone.
B: Okay. That was really helpful. Thank you very much.
A: You dropped your wallet, do you have any money?
B: I put some coins in my pocket, so I have some.
A: Will you be able to go home?
B: Yeah, I think so.
A: Take this just in case.
B: No, no, no, no, I can't take it, it's that much money.
A: Not that much money. A: It's not a lot of money, but it will get you some sightseeing, right? Since you came all the way to Japan, you can go sightseeing with this.
B: Oh my gosh. Are you sure?
A: Sure.
B: Thank you very much. I will definitely repay you someday. Please give me your phone number.
A: No, thanks. Well, if you find the wallet, donate some money somewhere. I'd like it to go for animals that are on the verge of being killed. Anyway, nice trip now! Take care!
B: Oh my god. I give you my deepest gratitude of thanks.Thank you very much.
A: I bet. Bye!
B: I hope to see you again!
A: You too!

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A & B Talk64

I want to speak English naturally, not like from a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!

Or you can change whatever you want!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

A: Hey, what's wrong?

B: Okay.

Nothing.

A: What about your hip pocket or shirt pocket?

Or the side pocket of your bag?

B: Nothing.

If you can't remember, think about when you left home today.

B: Well, I had it until the train, so maybe I dropped it on the train.

B: Tokyo station.

A: About what time did you get on the train?

B: Around 2:00 p.m.

A: Wait a minute.

So this is the way to go?

(shows the app)

B: Ummm, no, it's not.

A: Then this one?

B: Oh, maybe this one.

A: Okay.

A: Okay.

I'll call the station, just wait a minute, and give me your phone number so that the station staff can call you on your cell phone if they find it.

B: Ok. 000.

A: Okay.

I don't know when they will call, but if they do, please pick up the phone.

B: Okay.

That was really helpful.

Thank you very much.

A: You dropped your wallet, do you have any money?

B: I put some coins in my pocket, so I have some.

A: Will you be able to go home?

B: Yeah, I think so.

A: Take this just in case.

B: Oh my gosh.

Are you sure?

A: Sure.

B: Thank you very much.

I will definitely repay you someday.

A: No, thanks.

Well, if you find the wallet, donate some money somewhere.

Anyway, nice trip now!

Take care!

B: Oh my god.

A: I bet.

Bye!

B: I hope to see you again!

A: You too!

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Anyway, nice trip now!


Anyway, have a nice trip now! Anyway, have a nice trip now!

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Take care!


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B: Oh my god.


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I give you my deepest gratitude of thanks.Thank you very much.


I give you my deepest gratitude of thanks.Thank you very much. I give you my deepest gratitude of thanks.Thank you very much.

This works, but it might be too formal. Just saying "thank you very much" is fine in this situation.

I give you my deepest gratitude ofand thanks.Thank you very much. I give you my deepest gratitude and thanks.Thank you very much.

A: I bet.


A: I betYou're very welcome. A: You're very welcome.

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Bye!


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B: I hope to see you again!


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A: You too!


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A & B Talk64


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I want to speak English naturally, not like from a textbook!


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๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


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I want to speak like a native!!


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Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ


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Could you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?


CWould you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences? Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in my sentences?

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!!


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Or you can change whatever you want!


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I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!


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๐Ÿ™


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Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreigners.


Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to foreignEnglish speakers. Also, I'd like to get your advice on how to talk to English speakers.

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I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


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A: Hey, what's wrong?


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B: I might have dropped my wallet somewhere.


B: I might ha've dropped my wallet somewhere. B: I might've dropped my wallet somewhere.

Contractions are used a lot in the US.

A: Okay.


A: Okayh, no. A: Oh, no.

This is a more natural response in the US.

First, calm down and look in your pants, bag, and pockets again.


First, calm down and look in your pants, bag, and pockets again. First, look in your pants, bag, and pockets again.

Sometimes when we tell someone to calm down, they get more nervous.

B: Okay.


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Nothing.


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A: What about your hip pocket or shirt pocket?


A: What about your hip pocket or shirt pocket? A: What about your hip or shirt pocket?

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Or the side pocket of your bag?


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B: Nothing.


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A: Then try to remember how far back you carried your wallet.


A: Then try to remember how far back you carried your wallewhen you last had it. A: Then try to remember when you last had it.

A: Then try to remember how far back you carriethe last time you had your wallet. A: Then try to remember the last time you had your wallet.

This sounds more natural in the US.

If you can't remember, think about when you left home today.


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B: Well, I had it until the train, so maybe I dropped it on the train.


B: Well, I had it until I was on the train, so maybe I dropped it on the trainthere. B: Well, I had it until I was on the train, so maybe I dropped it there.

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A: Okay, I'll call the station clerk now and tell me what station you got on and what line you were on and to what destination.


A: Okay, I'll call the station clerk now and t. Tell me what station you got on and, what line you were on, and to what destinationwhere you were going. A: Okay, I'll call the station clerk now. Tell me what station you got on, what line you were on, and where you were going.

A: Okay, I'll call the station clerk now andso tell me what station you got on at and what line you were on and to what destinationwhich station you got off at. A: Okay, I'll call the station clerk now so tell me what station you got on at and what line you were on and which station you got off at.

There's some bad grammar here but this sounds more natural in the US.

If you remember, please tell me the time.


If you remember, please tell me the time, too. If you remember, please tell me the time, too.

IAlso, if you remember, please tell me thewhat time. Also, if you remember, please tell me what time.

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Well, wait a minute, I got on at station D, and I don't know the rest of the names.


B: Well, wait a minute, I got on at station D, and I don't knowremember the rest of the namestations. B: Well, wait a minute, I got on at station D, and I don't remember the rest of the stations.

US alternative

A: What station were you trying to get to?


A: Whatich station were you trying to get to? A: Which station were you trying to get to?

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B: Tokyo station.


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A: About what time did you get on the train?


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B: Around 2:00 p.m.


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A: Wait a minute.


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So this is the way to go?


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(shows the app)


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B: Ummm, no, it's not.


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A: Then this one?


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B: Oh, maybe this one.


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A: Okay.


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A: Okay.


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I'll call the station, just wait a minute, and give me your phone number so that the station staff can call you on your cell phone if they find it.


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B: Ok. 000.


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A: Okay.


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The station staff will look for it and call you on your cell phone if they find it.


The station staff will look for it and call you on your cell phone if they find it. The station staff will look for it and call you if they find it.

This sounds more natural in the US.

They may find it today, or someone may deliver it to the station later.


They may find it today, or someone may deliverreturn it to the station later. They may find it today, or someone may return it to the station later.

US alternative

I don't know when they will call, but if they do, please pick up the phone.


I don't know when they wi'll call, but if they do, please pick up the phone. I don't know when they'll call, but if they do, please pick up the phone.

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B: Okay.


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That was really helpful.


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Thank you very much.


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A: You dropped your wallet, do you have any money?


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B: I put some coins in my pocket, so I have some.


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A: Will you be able to go home?


A: Will you be able to goet home? A: Will you be able to get home?

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B: Yeah, I think so.


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A: Take this just in case.


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B: No, no, no, no, I can't take it, it's that much money.


B: No, no, no, no, I can't take it, ithat's thatoo much money. B: No, no, no, no, I can't take it, that's too much money.

B: No, no, no, no, I can't take it, it's thatoo much money. B: No, no, no, no, I can't take it, it's too much money.

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: Not that much money.


A: NIt's not that much money. A: It's not that much.

A: NIt's not that much money. A: It's not that much money.

This is okay, too.

A: It's not a lot of money, but it will get you some sightseeing, right?


A: It's not a lot of money, but it wi'll glet you do some sightseeing, right? A: It's not a lot, but it'll let you do some sightseeing, right?

A: It's not a lot of money, but it wi'll get you some more sightseeing, right? A: It's not a lot of money, but it'll get you some more sightseeing, right?

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Since you came all the way to Japan, you can go sightseeing with this.


Since you came all the way to Japan, you canshould go sightseeing with this. Since you came all the way to Japan, you should go sightseeing with this.

Since you came all the way to Japan, you can godo more sightseeing with this. Since you came all the way to Japan, you can do more sightseeing with this.

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B: Oh my gosh.


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Are you sure?


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A: Sure.


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B: Thank you very much.


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I will definitely repay you someday.


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Please give me your phone number.


Please give mMay I have your phone number.? May I have your phone number?

This sounds more natural in the US.

A: No, thanks.


A: No, thanksit's alright. A: No, it's alright.

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Well, if you find the wallet, donate some money somewhere.


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I'd like it to go for animals that are on the verge of being killed.


I'd like it to go for animals that are on the verge of begoing killedextinct. I'd like it to go for animals that are on the verge of going extinct.

I'd like it to go forto animals that are on the verge of being killedextinct. I'd like it to go to animals that are on the verge of being extinct.

I think this is what you mean but I'm not sure.

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