I won’uldn't be such devote tooeither. I wouldn't be such devote either.

wouldn't is for "what if" and won't is for "real". "either" because not-only in the previous sentence.

I won’t be such devote too.

I also won’t be sucho devoted too it. I also won’t be so devoted to it.

But hHe told me asomething very strange answer about Kung-fu. He told me something very strange about Kung-fu.

But hHe told me a very strange answerstory about Kungfu. He told me a very strange story about Kungfu.

the word "but" cancels a previous thought, which I don't think you did, so I deleted it.

But he toldgave me a very strange answer about Kungfu. But he gave me a very strange answer about Kungfu.

I have a really amazing coworker. I have a really amazing coworker.

People commonly use “real” as an adverb, but it’s a bit more proper to use “really”.

I have a realn amazing co-worker. I have an amazing co-worker.

When he getbecomes interesting oed in a new interest. When he becomes interested in a new interest.

We say "becomes interested" to show "starting a new interest".

When he gets interesting on a new interestin something new, he becomes addicted and puts all his money and time into mastering that thing. When he gets interesting in something new, he becomes addicted and puts all his money and time into mastering that thing.

What you wrote is not a complete sentence; I combined it with the following sentence you wrote.

When he getbecomes interesting oed in a new interest.subject, When he becomes interested in a new subject,

this is not a complete sentence, so I've combined it with the next one.

He will become so addictive and put all his money and time to master such interest.

He will become sos addictived and puts all his money and time into master suching that interest. He becomes addicted and puts all his money and time into mastering that interest.

He becomes. He puts. Addictive is describing like a drug. Addicted is how you describe a person. Use "into" instead of "to".

H... he will become so addictive andthat he'll put all his money and time into master such interesit. ... he will become so addictive that he'll put all his money and time into it.

FTake bicycles, for example. Take bicycles, for example.

Again, this needs to be combined with the next line.

For example, For example,

Bicycle.

Bicycle.

Not necessary

He got 6 bicycles, and each one thewas price wasd above US$10,000. He got 6 bicycles, and each one was priced above US$10,000.

He go...he bought 6 bicycles and, each one the price was above USf which cost over $10,000. ...he bought 6 bicycles, each of which cost over $10,000.

At the same hHe won a lot of trophies, too. He won a lot of trophies, too.

At the same hHe won a lot of trophies too. He won a lot of trophies too.

Not clear if the trophies are related to bike riding or from something else.

Tropical fishes. Tropical fish.

adjective for tropic is "tropical" and it's one fish, three fish, ten million fish.

THe is also interested in tropical fishes. He is also interested in tropical fish.

THe is also interested in tropical fishes. He is also interested in tropical fish.

Only tThe fish tank was alreadyalone cost above US$10,000. The fish tank alone cost above US$10,000.

Only tThe fish tank was already above USalone cost more than $10,000. The fish tank alone cost more than $10,000.

Not only I don’t't I have that kind of money. Not only don't I have that kind of money.

when you say "not only...." then it's "don't I have". This is difficult.

Not only I don’t have that kind of money, but I would never be so devoted, either. I don’t have that kind of money, but I would never be so devoted, either.

Not only I don’do I not have that kind of money., but Not only do I not have that kind of money, but

I combined this with the next sentence.

Not only I don’t I have that kind of money. Not only don’t I have that kind of money.

You were really close here! When you use this construction, you switch the subject and the verb.

InThrough Kung-fu, he learned how to manage his life. Through Kung-fu, he learned how to manage his life.

InFrom Kungfu, he learned how to manage his life. From Kungfu, he learned how to manage his life.

I "throught" Kungfu is teach you how to punch someone beautifully. I "thought" Kungfu is teach you how to punch someone beautifully.

Looks like a typo error?

I throught that Kung-fu is teaches you how to punch someone in a beautifull way. I thought that Kung-fu teaches you how to punch someone in a beautiful way.

And here I throught that Kungfu isonly teaches you how to punch someone beautimasterfully. And here I thought that Kungfu only teaches you how to punch someone masterfully.

I throughink Kungfu is teaches you how to punch someone beautifully. I think Kungfu teaches you how to punch someone beautifully.