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I had a school field trip today. I went to the olace where you can see that diffeence of the ancient building structure of three era .I enjoyed this trip.The houses 's way out was so small even houses are big and I thought it is similar to Japanese ancient houses but the dislike thing was where was put shells that was eaten . howaber, January and February was raining a lot, so that grounds has puddle and mud.It was slippery and every students got muds on their shoes and socks , including me.I slept in a bus on both ways . I always sleep in a bus when I have a trip. One of my friends saied they went hiking last year. She saied a mountain was not flat and it was hard to climb . she jumped in a huge puddle, not on purpose and she got mud around on her knees.
Field Trip
I had a school field trip today.
I went to the oa place where you can see thate structural difference of thes between ancient building structure ofs from three era s.
I enjoyed this trip.
The houses 's way out was so small even houses are big andre were big and small homes, which in some way I thought it iswere similar to Japanese ancient housmes, but the dislike thing was where was put shells that was eaten thing I didn't like was where shells which had been eaten were put.
Sorry, I'm actually not sure what you mean by this sentence. I just tried to make the sentence more understandable, but I think perhaps the meaning has been lost in translation here.
hHowabever, January and February was raining a lot, so that grounds has puddle and muit was raining a lot January and February, so that there was a lot of mud and quite a few puddles covering the ground.
It was slippery and every students got muds on their shoes and socks , including me.
I slept ion athe bus on bothe ways there and back.
I always sleep ion a bus when I have a trip.
One of my friends saied they went hiking last year.
She saied a the mountain was not flat and it was hard to climb .
sShe jumped in a huge puddle, not on purpose and she got mud around on by accident and got mud all over (and around) her knees.
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Good job! I think you mostly managed to convey the key elements of your field trip. Sounds like you had a good time as well :)
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I had a school field trip today. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I went to the olace where you can see that diffeence of the ancient building structure of three era . I went to |
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I enjoyed this trip. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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howaber, January and February was raining a lot, so that grounds has puddle and mud.
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It was slippery and every students got muds on their shoes and socks , including me. It was slippery and every student |
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I slept in a bus on both ways . I slept |
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I always sleep in a bus when I have a trip. I always sleep |
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One of my friends saied they went hiking last year. One of my friends sai |
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She saied a mountain was not flat and it was hard to climb . She sai |
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she jumped in a huge puddle, not on purpose and she got mud around on her knees.
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The houses 's way out was so small even houses are big and I thought it is similar to Japanese ancient houses but the dislike thing was where was put shells that was eaten . The Sorry, I'm actually not sure what you mean by this sentence. I just tried to make the sentence more understandable, but I think perhaps the meaning has been lost in translation here. |
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