My dDay My Day

My dDay My Day

You don't need to capitalize the "d" here, but usually we do for titles.

Today, I went to onea restaurant,i. It served traditional dish that ies such as grilled beef and rice. ,I was satisfied with the food a. Also, I'm looking for a Bbusiness English course because I need to improve in this particular area. Today, I went to a restaurant. It served traditional dishes such as grilled beef and rice. I was satisfied with the food. Also, I'm looking for a business English course because I need to improve in this.

Today I went to onea restaurant,i. It served a traditional dish that isof grilled beef and rice. ,I was satisfied with the food a. Also, I'm looking for a Bbusiness English course because I need to improve in this particular area. Today I went to a restaurant. It served a traditional dish of grilled beef and rice. I was satisfied with the food. Also, I'm looking for a business English course because I need to improve in this particular area.

Today I went to onea restaurant,i that served a traditional dish withat is grilled beef and rice. ,I was satisfied with the food. I’m also Im looking for a Bbusiness English course because I need to improve in this particular area. Today I went to a restaurant that served a traditional dish with grilled beef and rice. I was satisfied with the food. I’m also looking for a business English course because I need to improve in this particular area.

Using „with“ after „traditional dish“ is a better way to say what the dish has in it. You could also use the phrase „a traditional grilled beef and rice dish“ to specify what kind of dish it is. Since the part of the sentence about being satisfied with the food and looking for a course aren’t related, it‘d be better to separate it into two sentences. Using the word „also“ after the pronoun and verb sounds more correct to me, but you could also start the sentence with „Also, I‘m…“ and it would still be correct.

besidesOther than that, my day was a little bit boring; ,,I took a shower and I read a book about Marvel cóomics . Other than that, my day was a little bit boring; I took a shower and I read a book about Marvel comics.

besidesAnyway, my day was a little bit boring. ,,I took a shower , and I read a book about Marvel cóomics . Anyway, my day was a little bit boring. I took a shower, and I read a book about Marvel comics.

If you read an actual Marvel comic book, you could say "I read a Marvel comic."

bBesides that, my day was a little bit boring. ,,I took a shower and I read a book about Marvel cóomics . Besides that, my day was a little bit boring. I took a shower and I read a book about Marvel comics .

When using „besides“ to say „other than“, it needs to answer the question „besides what?“. For example, if this was the only sentence you had, you would say „Besides going to a restaurant, my day was a little bit boring.“

Tomorrow, I will make a briefwrite a summary of the book because I don't want to lose my practice omy written English. Tomorrow, I will write a summary of the book because I want to practice my written English.

Tomorrow I will make a briefwrite a summary of the book because I don't want to lose my progress in practice oning English. Tomorrow I will write a summary of the book because I don't want to lose my progress in practicing English.

Tomorrow I will make a briefwrite a summary of the book because I don'’t want to lose my practice oin English. Tomorrow I will write a summary of the book because I don’t want to lose practice in English.

A „brief“ is usually a summary in a business/professional setting, so just „summary“ would make more sense in this scenario. To be even more specific, I’d replace „make“ with „write“. Though I think „losing practice“ in something is correct to say, it might sound more natural to say that you simply „don’t want to stop practicing English“ or „want to keep practicing so your English doesn’t get worse“, though that one‘s pretty wordy.