Dec. 19, 2020
December 17
There is a new coronavirus patient one grades ahead of me. The boy didn’t come to school today but we are in the same bubble, so we were forced to go back to our home after having lunch.
1つ上の学年でコロナウイルスの患者がでてしまった。その子は今日学校に来なかったが、同じバブルなので皆強制的にお昼ご飯を食べた後に帰らされた。
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There is a new coronavirus patient one grades ahead of me.
There is a new coronavirus patient one grade ahead of me.
The boy didn’t come to school today, but we are in the same bubble, so we were forced to go back to our home after having lunch. The boy didn’t come to school today, but we are in the same bubble, so we were forced to go back to our home after having lunch.
英語の"comma"は日本語の読点よりよく使われています。
Outside of that, there were no grammatical mistakes. However, instead of "The boy", I would probably use "He". ("The boy" isn't incorrect, but in English you would usually just use a pronoun in this kind of situation).
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I think the second sentence felt a little long. There were not many grammar mistakes, but the overall writing style felt a little unnatural at times (e.g. "the boy" vs "he").
Dec. 20, 2020
The boy didn’t come to school today, but we are in the same bubble, so we were forced to go back to our home after having lunch.
英語の"comma"は日本語の読点よりよく使われています。
Outside of that, there were no grammatical mistakes. However, instead of "The boy", I would probably use "He". ("The boy" isn't incorrect, but in English you would usually just use a pronoun in this kind of situation).
Ok! Thank you! Your Japanese is very natural!
Dec. 20, 2020
Thank you for correcting!
December 17
There is a new coronavirus patient, one grades ahead of me.
There is a new coronavirus patient, one grade ahead of me.
The boy didn’t come to school today but. Because we are in the same bubble, so we were forced to go back to our home after having lunch.
The boy didn’t come to school today. Because we are in the same bubble, we were forced to go back home after having lunch.
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December 17 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There is a new coronavirus patient one grades ahead of me.
There is a new coronavirus patient, one grade
There is a new coronavirus patient one grade |
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The boy didn’t come to school today but we are in the same bubble, so we were forced to go back to our home after having lunch.
The boy didn’t come to school today The boy didn’t come to school today, but we are in the same bubble, so we were forced to go back to our home after having lunch. The boy didn’t come to school today, but we are in the same bubble, so we were forced to go back to our home after having lunch. 英語の"comma"は日本語の読点よりよく使われています。 Outside of that, there were no grammatical mistakes. However, instead of "The boy", I would probably use "He". ("The boy" isn't incorrect, but in English you would usually just use a pronoun in this kind of situation). |
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