Keralam adipwoli aanu¶
Kerala valare vellamthil niraye nadhikal undu' . ¶
Kerala valare pasham undu' ¶
Enikku' snehikkunu' Kerala ¶
Enikku' ishtamane ch¶
Njan Keralathiney snehikunnu.¶
Enikku Chaayayum kapKaapiyum ishtamaanu.¶
Nanni

-it's better to write and say 'is' (aanu) and whatever the adjective is in the same word without space in between
-instead of saying there is vellam (water) in kerala let's switch it up by saying there is lots of nadhikal(rivers)
-im unsure what you meant with the third sentence
- nailed the ending sentence!

Keralam adipoli aane.¶
Kerala valarethil orepadu vellam undu' ¶
Kerala valare pasham undu' ¶
Enikku'¶
Njaan Keralathe snehikkunu' Kerala ¶
Enikku' ishtamane chayayum kappiyum ¶
Nanni

Kerala valare pasham undu' i don't know what you meant here, if it's pazham(banana) the sentence goes like this - Keralathil orepadu pazham undu'. 'valare' is mostly used in the sentences like 'I love tea a lot' or 'I like Kerala a lot' means 'Enikke chaya valare ishtamane' and 'Njaan keralathe valare ishtapedunnu'

Keralathil adipoli aanu¶
Kerala valarethil othiri vellam undu' ¶
Kerala valare pasham undu' ¶
Enikku'¶
Njan keralathe snehikkunnu' Kerala ¶
Enikku' ‘ishtam aneu chaya um kappi yum ¶
Nanni

Keep going
You can do it 😊

Keralam adipoliyanu

Keralam adipoli yanu¶
Keralathil valare vellam undu' ¶
Kerala valare pasham undu' ¶
Enikku' snehikkunu' Kerala ¶
Enikku' ishtamane(what do you mean by pasham?)¶
Njan Keralathe snehikkunnu¶
Enikku' chayum kappium ishtamanu¶
Nanni

Kerala adipoliyannu.

Kerala valathil kure vellam undu'.

Kerala valare pasham undu'

Keralathil Kure pushpangal undu

Enikku' snehikkunu' Kerala

Enikk ishtamaane keralam

Enikku' ishtamane chayum kappium

Enikku chayayum ,kappiyum ishtamaane