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Hi. I am come back. Do you know? I am the kind of person that when started something tried to keep last all it can. This applies to everything in my life, meats, series, coffee, relationships, projects. But to begin with I have to admitted that it could be a course, let´ see. The most clearly example is the bad habit that if I started a series I had to finished it. In this point, all you will ask me, why is this so bad?, and I answer don't you see it? Is a compulsive think and behaviour. I put in this way: Will you see until the end a series that you don´t like? because is bored, slow, without context, but actors, so much CGI?. Well that happen to me many times, I started a serie, I spend all the time to see it until the end an many times I only turn off the app and said: Wow let me back my precious time that I dedicated you ST of the... sorry I let myself go.

However, now let see it from another way, coffee, cursed? it's bad to finish a cup o coffee? the answer is in a way, yes. Could you imagine that you go to visit a friend, crush, family... o are you in a interview for a job?. The other person smiles you, and being kindness said: Do you like a cup of coffee?... You don´t think about it even I can say that you have a automatic reply... that yes go out of your soul. And then, you look that cup of coffee, the smoke, is hot, the smell... you take the first taste and keeping your smile for culture return the cup to the table... what do you think is bad in that moment?... well I´ll tell you... the another person don´t know the perfection of coffee and that horrible demon with a smile add it suggar... what the hell? suggar in a coffee?... that have to be a capital sin... and here is where I can show all you the maldition... I have to continue gulping until the last drop and then all of you only could ask why if don´t you like it? the reason is simple... because I started so I finish it. But it is not so bad in that topic I learn another automatic reply... Yes, please but without nothing ( usable in many ways of my life), an example of resilience hahaha.

Fiuuu... I have to stopped here... the relationship is a history that I will tell you in other moment... maybe wit so much alcohol in my head... ok see you later good night.

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Hi, and welcome back. It is great that you are ambitious and that you take the time to write so much. I can understand 80-90% of what you write, so that is great too. However, I don't have the time to correct this text. Have you noticed that some people write short texts every day? These people often receive corrections from several native speakers. If you divide your time each day between writing a text, studying the corrections to your text, and correcting a Spanish text for someone else, you will experience the full benefits of the platform.

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Hey, Liag! I feel like nobody really wants to correct my English texts, so I wonder if I should also divide them into several short parts? Or is it about the semi-formal style that scares natives off? Maybe they find the topics boring?
Do you have any ideas? Danke im Voraus!

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Hi.


I am come back.


Do you know?


I am the kind of person that when started something tried to keep last all it can.


This applies to everything in my life, meats, series, coffee, relationships, projects.


But to begin with I have to admitted that it could be a course, let´ see.


The most clearly example is the bad habit that if I started a series I had to finished it.


what do you think is bad in that moment?...


well I´ll tell you... the another person don´t know the perfection of coffee and that horrible demon with a smile


add it suggar...


what the hell?


suggar in a coffee?...


that have to be a capital sin...


and here is where I can show all you the maldition...


I have to continue gulping until the last drop and then all of you only could ask why if don´t you like it?


the reason is simple...


because I started so I finish it.


But it is not so bad in that topic I learn another automatic reply...


Yes, please but without nothing ( usable in many ways of my life), an example of resilience hahaha.


Fiuuu... I have to stopped here... the relationship is a history that I will tell you in other moment... maybe wit so much alcohol in my head...


ok see you later good night.


In this point, all you will ask me, why is this so bad?, and I answer don't you see it?


Is a compulsive think and behaviour.


I put in this way:


Will you see until the end a series that you don´t like?


because is bored, slow, without context, but actors, so much CGI?.


Well that happen to me many times, I started a serie, I spend all the time to see it until the end an many times I only turn off the app and said:


Wow let me back my precious time that I dedicated you ST of the...


sorry I let myself go.


However, now let see it from another way, coffee, cursed?


it's bad to finish a cup o coffee?


the answer is in a way, yes.


Could you imagine that you go to visit a friend, crush, family...


o are you in a interview for a job?.


The other person smiles you, and being kindness said:


Do you like a cup of coffee?...


You don´t think about it even I can say that you have a automatic reply... that yes go out of your soul.


And then, you look that cup of coffee, the smoke, is hot, the smell...


you take the first taste and keeping your smile for culture


return the cup to the table...


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