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fureturejo

Jan. 8, 2020

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I am eager to improve my English skill

Hello,friends

I am Futurejo in China with more 10 years exprience in English study. And also I took BEC higher test this year ,only to get Level B2. The test result manifests that my reading and listensing ability is in very bad. please would you like to give some sugguestions to improve my english skills.

I am eager to watch naitive english film without caption,but it is very difficult for me ,and also I want to write good passage,but the result always make me frustrated.

I plan to post my my writen passanges on langcorreect platform and I hope friends in Langcorrect can help correct my writting.

Appreciate it.

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I am eager to improve my English skill


I am eager to improve my English skills I am eager to improve my English skills

I am eager to improve my English skills I am eager to improve my English skills

We tend to say "skills" more often than skill, especially with languages because you have writing, listening, etc.

I am eager to improve my English skills I am eager to improve my English skills

Hello,friendsI am Futurejo in China with more 10 years exprience in English study.


Hello,friendsI am Futurejo in China with. My name is Futurejo, and I am from China. I have more than 10 years experience studying English study. Hello,friends. My name is Futurejo, and I am from China. I have more than 10 years experience studying English.

Hello, friends. I am Futurejo in China with more 10 years exprience . I am from China and I have been studying English studyfor 10 years. Hello, friends. I am Futurejo. I am from China and I have been studying English for 10 years.

Having experience in a field of study is a little weird. You have X years experience in a certain field or you have been studying something for X years.

Hello,friendsI! am Futurejo in China with more than 10 years of exprience in English study. Hello,friends! am Futurejo in China with more than 10 years of exprience in English

"than" is used to compare things. Including amounts: (ex, "more than; less than). "of" is used to

And also I took BEC higher test this year ,only to get Level B2.


AndI also I took the BEC higher test this year , only to get Level B2. I also took the BEC higher test this year, only to get Level B2.

AndI also I took the BEC higher test this year , only to get Level B2. I also took the BEC higher test this year, only to get Level B2.

The test result manifests that my reading and listensing ability is in very bad.


The test result manifestshows that my reading and listensing ability is inies are very bad. The test result shows that my reading and listening abilities are very bad.

The test result manifestsindicated that my reading and listensing ability is inies are very bad. The test result indicated that my reading and listening abilities are very bad.

you may have wanted to say "are in very bad condition". That would make more sense, but isn't a perfect fit for this sentence. Manifest doesn't fit and is also a word that isn't popularly used. Past tense and present tense both work; I just used past to show a different way of saying the same thing.

The test result manifests that my reading and listensing ability is in very bad.are poor The test result manifests that my reading and listensing ability are poor

"very bad" DOES work here, but "poor" works better

please would you like to give some sugguestions to improve my english skills.


please wWould you like to givplease give me some sugguestions on how to improve my eEnglish skills.? Would you please give me some suggestions on how to improve my English skills?

please wWould you like toplease give me some sugguestions tofor improveing my eEnglish skills.? Would you please give me some suggestions for improving my English?

please would you like to give some sugguestions to improve my english skills. please would you like to give some suggestions to improve my english skills.

I am eager to watch naitive english film without caption,but it is very difficult for me ,and also I want to write good passage,but the result always make me frustrated.


I am eager to watch naitive eEnglish films without caption,s, but it is very difficult for me ,and. I also I want to write good passage,s, but the results always make me frustrated. I am eager to watch native English films without captions, but it is very difficult for me. I also want to write good passages, but the results always make me frustrated.

I am eager to watch naitive eEnglish films/movies without caption,s/subtitles, but it is very difficult for me ,and. I also I want to write good passage,s, but the results always make me frustrated. I am eager to watch native English films/movies without captions/subtitles, but it is very difficult for me. I also want to write good passages, but the results always make me frustrated.

Where I am from, although we understand "film" and "captions" in the context you provided, we generally prefer to use "movie" and "subtitles".

I plan to post my my writen passanges on langcorreect platform and I hope friends in Langcorrect can help correct my writting.


I plan to post my my written passanges on lLangcCorreect platform , and I hope to make friends in LangcCorrect that can help correct my writting. I plan to post my written passages on LangCorrect, and I hope to make friends in LangCorrect that can help correct my writing.

I plan to post my my written passanges on lLangcCorreect platform and I hope my friends ion LangcCorrect can help correct my writting. I plan to post my written passages on LangCorrect and I hope my friends on LangCorrect can correct my writing.

I didn't change it, but calling people you don't know "friends" isn't a popular way of addressing people. I would say "the people/users/members".

I plan to post my my written passanges on the langcorreect platform and I hope my friends ion Langcorrect can help correct my writting. I plan to post my my written passages on the langcorrect platform and I hope my friends on Langcorrect can help correct my writing.

Appreciate it.


AI appreciate it. I appreciate it.

AI appreciate it. I appreciate it.

In writing we always use pronouns, but if you said this in conversation you would get away with it (but only for very short sentences!)

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