Feb. 2, 2023
On the second day when I arrived at download SZ. Diana rented a 25 square meters for us as male dormitory where adjacent to the highest building in SZ, so it was a continent and expensive place, which would be charged 1500 yuan per month.
Sister Wang has trained us we must show how professional before customers and must keep speaking or chattering without a pause. Therefore, I bought a book to learn some knowledge about porcelain ware and traditional paintings. I even learned the process from the extraction of natural resources to end with a final product, as for me, it was not only for the future sales but actually I indeed enjoy it.
There were another two family on the same floor, we shared a same corridor. I read the book loudly at my room. My neighbors could hear my voice, however, they didn’t care it and once said to me that they enjoy listening to. At that time, people in this young city appreciated any energized and positive life style.
A about 25 year-olds beautiful girl stayed next to our room, her boyfriend was much older than her. I highly suspected that the man was her sugar daddy in Hong Kong. She often invited me to have a meal together and asked me buy clothes with her, I felt comfortable when walking with her on the street. She told me that she wanted to open a clothes store at her hometown, I hope she succeeded. Frankly speaking, I am regret why I haven’t developed an intimate relationship with her. A month later, when her Hong Kong old boyfriend saw me eye to eye, they quickly moved. If I were back into the time, when I saw they were moving, I would ask her to give a phone number to me. I was shy young man in 1996.
On the second day when I arrived at downloadtown SZ.
On the second day when I arrived at downtown SZ.
Diana rented us a 25 square meters for us as male dormitory whereroom, which was adjacent to the highest building in SZ, so it was a continvenient and expensive place, which would be chargedcost 1500 yuan pera month.
Diana rented us a 25 square meter male dormitory room, which was adjacent to the highest building in SZ, so it was a convenient and expensive place, which would cost 1500 yuan a month.
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Sister Wang has trained us we must show howhow to be professional beforewith customers and mustshould keep speaking or chattering without a pauseing.
Sister Wang trained us how to be professional with customers and should keep speaking or chattering without pausing.
Therefore, I bought a book to learn some knowledge about porcelain ware and traditional paintings.
Therefore, I bought a book to learn some about porcelain ware and traditional paintings.
I even learned the process from the extraction of natural resources to end with a final product, as f. For me, it was not only for the future sales but actually I indeed enjoyenjoy learning about it.
I even learned the process from the extraction of natural resources to a final product. For me it was not only for future sales but actually I enjoy learning about it.
There were another two familyies on the same floor, w. We shared a same corridor.
There were another two families on the same floor. We shared a corridor.
I read the book loudly atin my room.
I read the book loudly in my room.
My neighbors could hear my voice, however, they didn’t care it and once said to me that they enjoyed listening to.
My neighbors could hear my voice, however, they didn’t care it and once said to me that they enjoyed listening.
At that time, people in this young city appreciated any energized and positive life style.
An about 25 year-olds beautiful girl stayed next to our room, h. Her boyfriend was much older than her.
An about 25 year-old beautiful girl stayed next to our room. Her boyfriend was much older than her.
She often invited me to have a meal together and asked me buy clothes with her,. I felt comfortable when walking with her on the street.
She often invited me to have a meal together and asked me buy clothes with her. I felt comfortable when walking with her on the street.
She told me that she wanted to open a clothesing store atin her hometown,. I hope she succeeded.
She told me that she wanted to open a clothing store in her hometown. I hope she succeeded.
Frankly speaking, I am regret why I haven’not developeding an intimate relationship with her.
Frankly speaking, I regret not developing an intimate relationship with her.
If I werent back into the time, when I saw they were moving, I would ask her to give ame her phone number to me.
If I went back in time, when I saw they were moving, I would ask her to give me her phone number.
I was shy young man in 1996.
My Life in SZ (11) - My Rented Room My Life in SZ (11) - My Rented Room
On the second day when I arrived at download SZ.
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On the second day after I arrived in downtown SZ, Diana rented a 25 square meters room for us as a male dormitory whereand it was adjacent to the highest building in SZ, so it was a continental and expensive place, which would bhave charged 1500 yuan per month.
On the second day after I arrived in downtown SZ, Diana rented a 25 square meter room for us as a male dormitory and it was adjacent to the highest building in SZ, so it was a continental and expensive place, which would have charged 1500 yuan per month.
Sister Wang has trained us we musto show how professional we were before the customers and musto keep speaking or chattering without a pause.
Sister Wang trained us to show how professional we were before the customers and to keep speaking or chattering without pause.
Therefore, I bought a book to learn somacquire knowledge about porcelain ware and traditional paintings.
Therefore, I bought a book to acquire knowledge about porcelain ware and traditional paintings.
I even learned the process from the extraction of natural resources to the end with a final product, as f. For me, it was not only for the future sales but also I actually I indeed enjoyed it.
I even learned the process from the extraction of natural resources to the end with a final product. For me, it was not only for future sales but also I actually enjoyed it.
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There were antwo other two familyies on the same floor, so we shared athe same corridor.
There were two other families on the same floor so we shared the same corridor.
I read the book loudly atin my room.
I read the book loudly in my room.
My neighbors could hear my voice, however, they didn’t care it and once said to me that they enjoyed listening to me.
My neighbors could hear my voice, however, they didn’t care and once said that they enjoyed listening to me.
At that time, people in this young city appreciated any energizeding and positive life style.
At that time, people in this young city appreciated any energizing and positive life style.
A about 25 year-olds beautiful girl stayedbeautiful girl who was about 25 years old stayed in a room next to our room, hs. Her boyfriend was much older than sher was.
A beautiful girl who was about 25 years old stayed in a room next to ours. Her boyfriend was much older than she was.
I highly suspected that the man was her sugar daddy in Hong Kong.
She often invited me to have a meal togetwith her and asked me to buy clothes with her,. I felt comfortable when walking with her on the street.
She often invited me to have a meal with her and asked me to buy clothes with her. I felt comfortable when walking with her on the street.
She told me that she wanted to open a clothes store atin her hometown,. I hope she succeeded.
She told me that she wanted to open a clothes store in her hometown. I hope she succeeded.
Frankly speaking, I am regret why I havethat I didn’t developed an intimate relationship with her.
Frankly speaking, I regret that I didn’t develop an intimate relationship with her.
A month later, when her old Hong Kong old boyfriend saw me eye to eye, they quickly moved away.
A month later, when her old Hong Kong boyfriend saw me eye to eye, they quickly moved away.
If I werecould go back into the time, when I saw they were moving, I would have asked her to give aher phone number to me when I saw them moving away.
If I could go back in time, I would have asked her to give her phone number to me when I saw them moving away.
This is subjunctive case.
I was a shy young man in 1996. I was a shy young man in 1996.
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On the second day when I arrived at download SZ.
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Diana rented a 25 square meters for us as male dormitory where adjacent to the highest building in SZ, so it was a continent and expensive place, which would be charged 1500 yuan per month.
On the second day after I arrived in downtown SZ, Diana rented a 25 square meter
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Sister Wang has trained us we must show how professional before customers and must keep speaking or chattering without a pause.
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Therefore, I bought a book to learn some knowledge about porcelain ware and traditional paintings.
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I even learned the process from the extraction of natural resources to end with a final product, as for me, it was not only for the future sales but actually I indeed enjoy it.
I even learned the process from the extraction of natural resources to the end with a final product 頭がいいですよね。
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There were another two family on the same floor, we shared a same corridor.
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I read the book loudly at my room.
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My neighbors could hear my voice, however, they didn’t care it and once said to me that they enjoy listening to.
My neighbors could hear my voice, however, they didn’t care
My neighbors could hear my voice, however, they didn’t care it and once said to me that they enjoyed listening |
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At that time, people in this young city appreciated any energized and positive life style.
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A about 25 year-olds beautiful girl stayed next to our room, her boyfriend was much older than her.
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She often invited me to have a meal together and asked me buy clothes with her, I felt comfortable when walking with her on the street.
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She told me that she wanted to open a clothes store at her hometown, I hope she succeeded.
She told me that she wanted to open a clothes store
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Frankly speaking, I am regret why I haven’t developed an intimate relationship with her.
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A month later, when her Hong Kong old boyfriend saw me eye to eye, they quickly moved.
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If I were back into the time, when I saw they were moving, I would ask her to give a phone number to me.
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I was shy young man in 1996. I was a shy young man in 1996. I was a shy young man in 1996. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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