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My Fourth Car

My fourth car
The Passat that I bought in 2009 has served me fifteen years so far and it hasn't worked well in the past few years. Sometimes, it suddenly had problems on my way of driving. In addition, it doesn't have the common functions like cars made in the near past. Plus that I am aging, driving this car makes me tired easily.

I thought it might be time to buy a new car and sell this old one. I wanted a medium-sized SUV and the functions of it should be panoramic cameras, steering wheel heating, seat heating and ventilation and driver assistance.

After I made a comparison between the same level of suv, Tigua L stood out. It has a beautiful look, high configurations, a spacious inside space, a low price and the national biggest sales volume.

Aiming at the top model of it, I asked two dealerships in my city about its price and they both offered a little more than 260,000 RMB. I also inquired about a few dealerships in Beijing and Shanghai and they offered more than 240,000 RMB.

I told the local dealerships about the quotation that was given by foreign area dealerships and asked them whether or not they could give me the same price. They didn't agree. I even accepted that the local dealerships' price could be higher 2000 or 3000 RMB than the price given by dealerships in Beijing and Shanghai. They still didn't agree with me.

Therefore, I had to go to Shanghai to buy the Tiguan L. My son and his wife went to Shanghai two days ago to drive the car home. Now the car is already in my home and just waiting for registration.

I don't know if I will buy a fifth car in years. I think it's not likely.

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My Fourth Car

I thought it might be time to buy a new car and sell this old one.

Therefore, I had to go to Shanghai to buy the Tiguan L. My son and his wife went to Shanghai two days ago to drive the car home.

I think it's not likely.

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My Fourth Car


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My fourth car


My fourth car

The Passat that I bought in 2009 has served me fifteen years so far and it hasn't worked well in the past few years.


The Passat that I bought in 2009 has served me fifteen years so far andbut it hasn't worked well in the past few years. The Passat that I bought in 2009 has served me fifteen years so far but it hasn't worked well in the past few years.

The Passat that I bought in 2009 has served me well for fifteen years so far andbut it hasn't worked well in the past few years. The Passat that I bought in 2009 served me well for fifteen years but it hasn't worked well in the past few years.

Sometimes, it suddenly had problems on my way of driving.


Sometimes, it suddenly hads problems on my way ofwhile I am driving. Sometimes, it suddenly has problems while I am driving.

Sometimes, it suddenly hads problems on my way ofwhile I'm driving it. Sometimes, it suddenly has problems while I'm driving it.

In addition, it doesn't have the common functions like cars made in the near past.


In addition, it doesn't have the common functions likesimilar to cars made in the near past. In addition, it doesn't have common functions similar to cars made in the near past.

You might also say “similar to newer cars”.

In addition, it doesn't have the common functions like cars made in the near pastpast few years. In addition, it doesn't have the common functions like cars made in the past few years.

Plus that I am aging, driving this car makes me tired easily.


Plus that, I am aging, and driving this car makes me tired easily. Plus, I am aging and driving this car makes me tired easily.

Plus, now that I am aging, driving this car makes me tired easily. Plus, now that I am aging, driving this car makes me tired easily.

I thought it might be time to buy a new car and sell this old one.


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I wanted a medium-sized SUV and the functions of it should be panoramic cameras, steering wheel heating, seat heating and ventilation and driver assistance.


I wanted a medium-sized SUV and the functions of it should bewith panoramic cameras, steering wheel heating, seat heating and ventilation and driver assistance. I wanted a medium-sized SUV with panoramic cameras, steering wheel heating, seat heating and ventilation and driver assistance.

After I made a comparison between the same level of suv, Tigua L stood out.


After I made a comparison betweenamong SUVs at the same level of suv, Tigua L stood out. After I made a comparison among SUVs at the same level, Tigua L stood out.

Between implies two things. It would sound better if you said, “among similar SUVs”.

After I made a comparison betweens among the same leveltier of suv,'s, the Tigua L stood out. After I made comparisons among the same tier of suv's, the Tigua L stood out.

It has a beautiful look, high configurations, a spacious inside space, a low price and the national biggest sales volume.


It has a beautiful look, high configuragreat options, a spacious inside space, a low price and the national biggest sales volume. It has a beautiful look, great options, a spacious inside space, a low price and the national biggest sales volume.

At least in the US we talk of a car’s options and not it’s configuration.

It has a beautiful look, highmany configurations, a spacious inside space, a low price and the national biglargest sales volume nationally. It has a beautiful look, many configurations, a spacious inside, a low price and the largest sales volume nationally.

Aiming at the top model of it, I asked two dealerships in my city about its price and they both offered a little more than 260,000 RMB.


Aiming at the top model ofor it, I asked two dealerships in my city about its price and they both offered to sell it at a little more than 260,000 RMB. Aiming at the top model for it, I asked two dealerships in my city about its price and they both offered to sell it at a little more than 260,000 RMB.

I also inquired about a few dealerships in Beijing and Shanghai and they offered more than 240,000 RMB.


I also inquired about a few other dealerships in Beijing and Shanghai and they offered to sell it for more than 240,000 RMB. I also inquired at a few other dealerships in Beijing and Shanghai and they offered to sell it for more than 240,000 RMB.

I told the local dealerships about the quotation that was given by foreign area dealerships and asked them whether or not they could give me the same price.


I told the local dealerships about the quotationother quotes that wasere given by foreignoutside area dealerships and asked them whether or not they could give me the same price. I told the local dealerships about the other quotes that were given by outside area dealerships and asked them whether or not they could give me the same price.

or, I told the local dealerships about the other quotes that were given by outside area dealerships and asked them whether or not they could match the price.

They didn't agree.


They didn't agreewouldn't. They wouldn't.

I even accepted that the local dealerships' price could be higher 2000 or 3000 RMB than the price given by dealerships in Beijing and Shanghai.


I even accepted that the local dealerships' price could be higher by 2000 or 3000 RMB than the price given by the dealerships in Beijing and Shanghai. I even accepted that the local dealerships' price could be higher by 2000 or 3000 RMB than the price given by the dealerships in Beijing and Shanghai.

They still didn't agree with me.


They still diwouldn't agree with mbudge. They still wouldn't budge.

Therefore, I had to go to Shanghai to buy the Tiguan L. My son and his wife went to Shanghai two days ago to drive the car home.


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Now the car is already in my home and just waiting for registration.


Now the car is already inat my home and just waiting forto be registrationered. Now the car is already at my home and just waiting to be registered.

I don't know if I will buy a fifth car in years.


I don't know if I will buy a fifth car in a few years. I don't know if I will buy a fifth car in a few years.

I don't know ifwhether I will buy a fifth car in a few years. I don't know whether I will buy a fifth car in a few years.

I think it's not likely.


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