It's my one of the few parts of myself that I'm proud of myself. It's my one of the few parts of myself that I'm proud of.

It's my one of the few parts of myself that I'm proud of myself. It's my one of the few parts of myself that I'm proud of.

It's my one of the few partsthings about my body that I'm proud of myself. It's one of the few things about my body that I'm proud of.

"It's one of the few (body )parts I'm proud of" is TECHNICALLY correct but doesn't sound quite right in English. I think it's because it's unusual for people to talk emotively about their "parts"/"body parts" -- it's more of a scientific term. E.g. "The body parts of males are different to those of females" Also, "parts" is often used as shorthand for someone's "private parts" haha - so I would generally avoid using "parts" on its own.

It's my one of the few parts of myself I'm proud of myself. It's my one of the few parts of myself I'm proud of.

It's my one of the few parts of my body that I'm proud of myself. It's one of the few parts of my body that I'm proud of.

I hope you're proud of parts of yourself that aren't physical, too! Assuming this to be the case, I changed this sentence to refer to body parts, specifically.

Do you like thae shape of your hands? Do you like the shape of your hands?

Do you like thae shape of your hands? Do you like the shape of your hands?

Do you like thae shape of your hands? Do you like the shape of your hands?

Do you like thae shape of your hands? Do you like the shape of your hands?

Overall I think my hands arelook great. Overall I think my hands look great.

Overall, I think my hands are great. Overall, I think my hands are great.

Overall, I think my hands are great. Overall, I think my hands are great.

I was goinghad gone to piano school for ten years when I was young, so my fingers got to be long, thin, and muscular. I had gone to piano school for ten years when I was young, so my fingers got to be long, thin, and muscular.

I was goingent to piano school for ten years when I was younger, so my fingers got to bbecame long, thin, and muscular. I went to piano school for ten years when I was younger, so my fingers became long, thin and muscular.

I was goingent to piano school for ten years when I was young, and so my fingers got to be long, thin, and muscular. I went to piano school for ten years when I was young, and so my fingers got to be long, thin, and muscular.

Mostly good here. I've just made some changes to make it sound more natural.

I was goingent to piano school for ten years when I was young, so my fingers got to be long, thin, and muscular. I went to piano school for ten years when I was young, so my fingers got to be long, thin, and muscular.

"I was going" sort of implies you're going to be telling a story in the past, but since you're talking about the current state of your fingers, it's better to just talk about the event in simple past tense.

I was goingent to piano school for ten years when I was young, so my fingers got to be long, thin, and muscular. I went to piano school for ten years when I was young, so my fingers got to be long, thin, and muscular.

People often praisadmire my fingers. People often admire my fingers.

Both work, I just feel like "admire" sounds more natural