Today eis the 43thrd day of my daily English challenge. Today is the 43rd day of my daily English challenge.

Today eis the 43th day of my daily English challenge. Today is the 43th day of my daily English challenge.

I felt much better today , and I did many things at home. I felt much better today, and I did many things at home.

one thing -> many things

I felt much better today , and I did many thing at home. I felt much better today and I did many thing at home.

I watered the plants, I cooked, and I baked a cake. I watered the plants, cooked, and baked a cake.

No need to say "I" three times - it's implied after the first use. You don't have to put the comma before the last "and" but I prefer it. It's called the Oxford comma.

I watered the plants, I cooked and I baked a cake. I watered the plants, I cooked and I baked a cake.

WhenBy the time I left t the food over low heat, I had revised about 10 lessons in English and eight lessons in Spanish. By the time I left the food over low heat, I had revised about 10 lessons in English and eight lessons in Spanish.

When I left tile I cooked the food over low heat I had revised about 10 lessons in English and eight lessons in Spanish. While I cooked the food over low heat I revised about 10 lessons in English and eight lessons in Spanish.

In the afternoon, I spoke to a friend in fFrench, then I specifically asked her a bunch of questions. In the afternoon, I spoke to a friend in French, then I specifically asked her a bunch of questions.

In the afternoon, I spoke to a friend in fFrench, then and I specifically asked her a bunch of questions. In the afternoon, I spoke to a friend in French and I specifically asked her a bunch of questions.

She corrected me and helpedshowed me how to pronounce some words. She corrected me and showed me how to pronounce some words.

She corrected me and helped howme to pronounce some words. She corrected me and helped me to pronounce some words.

I was really delighted because she has always d helped me. I was delighted because she had helped me.

In my opinion, I don't think you need the "really" before the delighted because "delighted" already implies "really glad".

Before sleeping, I am going to read and after that I' will prayer. Before sleeping, I am going to read and after that I will pray.

I pray I prayed I will pray

Before sleeping, I am going to read and after that I'll prayer. Before sleeping, I am going to read and after that I'll pray.

(In tThis sentence is in the future simple because at this moment I amhave not stillyet gone to bed. ) (This sentence is in the future simple because at this moment I have not yet gone to bed.)

(In this sentence in the future simple because at this moment I am not still go toin bed. ) (In this sentence in the future simple because at this moment I am not still in bed. )