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Ruling hell is better than serving in heaven.
First of all, I want to acknowledge that hell, by all means, sucks. Hell is usually depicted as ultimate 'justice' for sinners who do wrong. Meanwhile heaven is often interperted as eternal paradise who we bless forever. My problem with heaven is I don't trust god or gods at all. They seem to priortise different value. For example Yahweh harden Paroah's heart to show his greatness instead of letting Jews free right there. Moreover, people are already in heaven will probably be happy as they will have rewarded for dedication all their life to religion. So, I would concern more about hell's situation. There will be a lot of confused people there include some of my relatives and friends. I think they will suffer in hell immensely and I don't want that to happen. So, I would rather to be there and perhap try to make hell a better place.
Hell is usually depicted as the ultimate form of 'justice' for sinners who do wrong.
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Meanwhile heaven is often interpereted as eternal paradise whoere we are blessed forever.
They seem to prioritisze different value.
For example Yahweh harden Paroathe Pharaoh's heart to show his greatness instead of letting Jews go free right there.
Moreover, people who are already in heaven will probably be happy as they will have been rewarded for dedication all their life to religion.
So, I wouldam concerned more about hell's situation.
There will be a lot of confused people there includeing some of my relatives and friends.
So, I would rather to be there and perhaps try to make hell a better place.
Ruling in hell is better than serving in heaven.
Hell is usually depicted as ultimate 'justicepunishment' for sinners who do wrong.
Meanwhile heaven is often interperted as eternal paradise who we bless forever.
Eternal paradise for good people.
My problem with heaven is I don't trust gGod or gods at all.
They seem to prioritisze different values.
For example, Yahweh hardened Pharoaoh's heart to show his greatness instead of letting the Jews freego right there.
Moreover, people are already in heaven will probably be happy as they will havere rewarded for dedicationg all their life to religion.
dedicating all their life to God preferably.
So, I would'm more concern mored about hell's situation.
There will be a lot of confused people there include some of my relatives and friends.
I think they will suffer in hell immensely and I don't want that to happen.
So, I would rather to be there and perhaps try to make hell a better place.
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It is understandable but you made some spellings and grammar mistakes.
About Pharaoh's story, Pharaoh didn't believe there is God [in Egypt , Pharaoh is seen as a god], so God had to prove himself to him. If Pharaoh wasn't stubborn, maybe all the miracles that happened then, wouldn't have happened. Another reason is that God respects authority. If he delivered the Israelites from Pharaoh forcefully, that's like disrespecting authority and God doesn't want us (Christians) to disrespect authority, so Pharaoh had to be the one allowing the Israelites to go willingly. It's best to ask for explanation of Bible stories, because they can't be easily understood unless it's explained by the Holy Spirit.
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Hell is usually depicted as ultimate 'justice' for sinners who doid wrong.
Meanwhile heaven is often interpereted as eternal paradise who were we’re blessedly forever.
My problem with heaven is I don't trust gGod or gGods at all.
They seem to priortise different values.
For example Yahweh harden Paroah's heart to show his greatness instead of lsetting the Jews free right there.
Moreover, people are already in heaven will probably be happy, as they will have been rewarded for their dedication all their life to religion.
So, I would be concerned more about hell's situation.
There will be a lot of confused people there includeing some of my relatives and friends.
So, I would rather to be there and perhaps try to make hell a better place.
Ruling hell is better than serving in heaven.
First of all, I want to acknowledge that hell, by all means, sucks.
Hell is usually depicted as ultimate 'justice' for sinners who do wrong.
Meanwhile heaven is often interperted as eternal paradise whofor those we bless forever.
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There will be a lot of confused people there includeing some of my relatives and friends.
So, I would rather to be there and perhaps try to make hell a better place.
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Heaven and Hell are confusing ideas for sure. I am not sure about your religion but since you mentioned the story of the Pharaoh from Exodus I assume you are familiar with the Bible. The Bible can have some confusing stories ... I honestly recommend looking up the meaning of stories, especially this one, to get a better understanding, or even talking to a priest :). Good job with the essay!
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