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Music class

I had doble music today.I like music class because I like playing the instruments and , my music teacher is kind.I am going to cover a famous music as a group in front of people in April so, I practiced drum with my grop but I was abusent 2 class and I am a biginer so I was struggling to play the drum and I have to practice of taking rhythm and know about role of each stuff more at home . However, I found a amazing video to play drum in break time so that, I gained a confident a little .
I am going to sleep well today because I am so tired and I have a Japanese school tomorrow.

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Music class

Titles should generally be capitalised

I had double music today.

I like music class because I like playing the instruments , and , my music teacher is kind.

I am going to cover a famous musicsong as a group in front of people in April , so, I practiced drum with my group but I was abusent from 2 classes and I am still a bieginner so I was struggling to play the drum and I have to practice of taking rhythm and know about role of each stuff a lot. I have to practice following the rhythm and other skills more at home .

"knowing about role of each stuff" --> I don't know what you mean by this

This sentence was too long, so I split it into 2 sentences to make the paragraph easier to read. Beware run-on sentences!

However, I found a n amazing video to play drum in to in my break time, so that, II have gained a confident a little little bit of confidence.

Use "an" before words that start with a vowel, and "a" before words that start with a consonant.

To play drum to --> this means to play along with the video, to practice your skills.

I am going to sleep well today because I am so tired and I have a Japanese school tomorrow.

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Excellent work! Good luck playing the drums :)

Music class


Music class

Titles should generally be capitalised

I had doble music today.


I had double music today.

I like music class because I like playing instrument and , my music teacher is kind.


I am going to cover a famous music as a group in front of people in April so, I practiced drum with my grop but I was abusenr 2 class and I am a biginer so I was struggling to play the drum .


And I have to practice of taking rhythm and know about role of each stuff more at home .


However, I found a amazing video to play drum in break time so That, I gained a confident a little .


I am going to sleep well today because I am so tired and I have a Japanese school tomorrow.


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I like music class because I like playing the instruments and , my music teacher is kind.


I like music class because I like playing the instruments , and , my music teacher is kind.

I am going to cover a famous music as a group in front of people in April so, I practiced drum with my grop but I was abusent 2 class and I am a biginer so I was struggling to play the drum and I have to practice of taking rhythm and know about role of each stuff more at home .


I am going to cover a famous musicsong as a group in front of people in April , so, I practiced drum with my group but I was abusent from 2 classes and I am still a bieginner so I was struggling to play the drum and I have to practice of taking rhythm and know about role of each stuff a lot. I have to practice following the rhythm and other skills more at home .

"knowing about role of each stuff" --> I don't know what you mean by this This sentence was too long, so I split it into 2 sentences to make the paragraph easier to read. Beware run-on sentences!

However, I found a amazing video to play drum in break time so that, I gained a confident a little .


However, I found a n amazing video to play drum in to in my break time, so that, II have gained a confident a little little bit of confidence.

Use "an" before words that start with a vowel, and "a" before words that start with a consonant. To play drum to --> this means to play along with the video, to practice your skills.

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