Nov. 2, 2020
My sleeping schedule still messed up. I don't sleep yesterday. I pass all night on YouTube.
My plans for the day was ruined when a visitor came. I don't expect him, but isn't a problem. We talk all day and play Shadow of Mordor and Assassins Creed. I can't study much today which make a little be sad
After the visitor has gone I feel tired and think that I would not study languages but, after a cup of coffee, my energies back did some activities.
Today I made A2 test and I pass, but I still unhappy with my English. Maybe I have to read and write more, I didn't this before. Always I learned vocab and listen to music and sometimes watch something.
Now I feel energized but I'll go to bed.
Good night.
My sleeping schedule is still messed up. My sleeping schedule is still messed up.
I doidn't sleep yesterday.
I didn't sleep yesterday.
I passstayed up all night onwatching YouTube.
I stayed up all night watching YouTube.
My plans for the day wasere ruined when a visitor came.
My plans for the day were ruined when a visitor came.
I doidn't expect him, but that isn't a problem.
I didn't expect him, but that isn't a problem.
We talked all day and played Shadow of Mordor and Assassins Creed. We talked all day and played Shadow of Mordor and Assassins Creed.
I cadidn't study much today which makes me a little be sad.
I didn't study much today which makes me a little sad.
After the visitor has goneleft, I feelt tired and thinkought that I would not study languages but, after a cup of coffee, my energies backy came back and I did some activities.
After the visitor left, I felt tired and thought that I would not study but, after a cup of coffee, my energy came back and I did some activities.
Today I made A2 test and I passpassed my A2 test, but I am still unhappy with my English.
Today I passed my A2 test, but I am still unhappy with my English.
Maybe I have to read and write more,. I didn't do this before.
Maybe I have to read and write more. I didn't do this before.
Always I learned vocab andby listening to music and sometimes watch something.
I learned vocab by listening to music and sometimes watch something.
Now I feel energized, but I'll go to bed. Now I feel energized, but I'll go to bed.
Feedback
Good job overall -- pretty understandable overall what you want to convey. A couple of tense errors and awkward sentences, but still pretty readable. Keep up the good work and don't get discouraged!
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Good night. |
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My day |
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My sleeping schedule still messed up. My sleeping schedule is still messed up. My sleeping schedule is still messed up. |
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I don't sleep yesterday.
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I pass all night on YouTube.
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My plans for the day was ruined when a visitor came.
My plans for the day w |
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I don't expect him, but isn't a problem.
I d |
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We talk all day and play Shadow of Mordor and Assassins Creed. We talked all day and played Shadow of Mordor and Assassins Creed. We talked all day and played Shadow of Mordor and Assassins Creed. |
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I can't study much today which make a little be sad
I |
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After the visitor has gone I feel tired and think that I would not study languages but, after a cup of coffee, my energies back did some activities.
After the visitor |
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Today I made A2 test and I pass, but I still unhappy with my English.
Today I |
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Maybe I have to read and write more, I didn't this before.
Maybe I have to read and write more |
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Always I learned vocab and listen to music and sometimes watch something.
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Now I feel energized but I'll go to bed. Now I feel energized, but I'll go to bed. Now I feel energized, but I'll go to bed. |
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