my biography my biography

We usually capitalize titles: My Biography

mMy bBiography My Biography

my biographyAbout me About me

biography = like a book about yourself

iI am iIsmail from sSomalia, currently living in Mogadishu, working as self -employed, and i caI’ve come me here to improve my English writing skills. I am Ismail from Somalia, currently living in Mogadishu, self-employed, and I’ve come me here to improve my English writing skills.

iI am iIsmail from sSomalia, currently living in Mogadishu, working as self -employed, and iI came here to improve my English writing skills. I am Ismail from Somalia, currently living in Mogadishu, self-employed, and I came here to improve my English writing skills.

i am iIsmail from sSomalia, c. Currently, I'm living in Mogadishu, working and asm self -employed, and i. I came here to improve my English writing skills. i am Ismail from Somalia. Currently, I'm living in Mogadishu and am self-employed. I came here to improve my English writing skills.

iI am iIsmail from sSomalia, currently living in Mogadishu, working as. I'm self employed, and iI came here to improve my English writing skills. I am Ismail from Somalia, currently living in Mogadishu. I'm self employed and I came here to improve my English writing skills.

how do you have internet? im curious lol

i My name is Ismail and I'm from sSomalia,. I'm currently living in Mogadishu, working. I asm self -employed, and iI came here to improve my English writing skills. My name is Ismail and I'm from Somalia. I'm currently living in Mogadishu. I am self-employed, and I came here to improve my English writing skills.

So, therefore, if any one can check my (or: the) construction of these small sentences and give me a feedback it would be so appreciated. So, therefore, if any one can check my (or: the) construction of these small sentences and give me feedback it would be so appreciated.

So, therefore, if any one can check my construction of these small sentences and give me a feedback, it would be so appreciated. So, therefore, if any one can check my construction of these small sentences and give me feedback, it would be so appreciated.

"So" or "therefore" can also be omitted for less redundancy

So therefore iIf any one can check my construction of these small sentences and give me a feedback it, I would be sogreatly appreciated it. If anyone can check my sentences and give me feedback, I would greatly appreciate it.

I shortened this sentence to make it more concise while maintaining its original meaning.

So therefore iIf any one can check my constructionthe grammar of these smallhort sentences and give me a feedback itI would be sogreatly appreciated it. If anyone can check the grammar of these short sentences and give me feedback I would greatly appreciate it.

therefore = formal construction = this is technically correct but its more natural to say grammar a feedback = 1 feedback? no its multiple (just feedback) "it would be so appreciated"? youre not a robot so it would be "I"

So thereforeIt would be (much) appreciated if any one can check mythe construction of these smallhort sentences and give me a feedback it would be so appreciated. It would be (much) appreciated if anyone can check the construction of these short sentences and give me a feedback

much appreciated isn't really proper English, but its very common for expressing appreciation.

Best regardsRegards, Ismail. Regards, Ismail.

or Best regards, Ismail. also this is more common in letters, but this isnt a letter so