July 11, 2025
Diary — July 11 — Day five.
Today I finished a part of my notebook. I started with this project around 2 months ago, and I think that I'm doing it well. Now I understand a lot of things that maybe don't understood before I started with this. I improve with my English a lot, and I am very proud of this, in general, I am a better version of my self.
All of this started when I left my exgirlfriend, like a method to distract my mind, at this moment it feeling still hurting me, but less than before. Today is my fifth day writing on my diary and I'll repeat the routine of every days.
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Diary — July 11 — Day five.
Today I finished a part of my notebook.
I started with this project around 2 months ago, and I think that I'm doing it well.
Now I understand a lot of things that maybe I didon't understooand before I started with this.
Now I understand a lot of things that maybe I didn't understand before I started with this.
"dont understood" mixes present tense and past tense, if you're talking about the past, use "didn't + base verb"
I improve with my English a lot, and I am very proud of this, in general, I am a better version of my self.
All of this started when I left my ex-girlfriend, like a methodway to distract my mind, at this moment it feelingright now it still hurting mes, but less than before.
All of this started when I left my ex-girlfriend, like a way to distract my mind, right now it still hurts, but less than before.
1. use a - for ex-girlfriend because it's a compound noun
2. method is ok to use but "way" sounds more natural
3. "right now" is more natural than "at this moment", "hurting" should be "hurts" bc proper tense and form and "feeling" isn't the right subject
Today is my fifth day writing oin my diary and I'll repeat the routine of every days.
Today is my fifth day writing in my diary and I'll repeat the routine every day.
1. "in my diary" because you're writing INside it
2. "days" is plural, but "every" always goes with a singular form
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you're doing a great job and the meaning of what you want to say is clear ! but it still sounds a bit unnatural
July 14, 2025
Thank you sir, I appreciate it very much!!!!!
Today I finished a part of my notebook.
I started with this project around 2 months ago, and I think that I'm doing it well.
Now I understand a lot of things that maybe I didon't understooand before I started with this.
Now I understand a lot of things that maybe I didn't understand before I started with this.
I am improveing with my English a lot, and I am very proud of this, i. In general, I am a better version of my self.
I am improving with my English a lot, and I am very proud of this. In general, I am a better version of myself.
All of this started when I left my ex-girlfriend, like a method to distract my mind, a. At this moment, it feeling's still hurting me, but less than before.
All of this started when I left my ex-girlfriend, like a method to distract my mind. At this moment, it's still hurting me, but less than before.
Here, it's understood that "it" means the pain from your break-up.
Today is my fifth day writing oin my diary and I'll repeatcontinue theis routine of every days.
Today is my fifth day writing in my diary and I'll continue this routine every day.
We write in books (notebooks, diaries, journals). But anything that is not meant for writing, we would say "on." E.g., "My daughter drew on the walls today."
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Great job! Congratulations on your progress
July 14, 2025
Thank you sir, I appreciate it very much!!!!!
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Today is my fifth day writing on my diary and I'll repeat the routine of every days.
Today is my fifth day writing We write in books (notebooks, diaries, journals). But anything that is not meant for writing, we would say "on." E.g., "My daughter drew on the walls today."
Today is my fifth day writing 1. "in my diary" because you're writing INside it 2. "days" is plural, but "every" always goes with a singular form |
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Today I finished a part of my notebook. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I started with this project around 2 months ago, and I think that I'm doing it well. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Now I understand a lot of things that maybe don't understood before I started with this.
Now I understand a lot of things that maybe I did
Now I understand a lot of things that maybe I did "dont understood" mixes present tense and past tense, if you're talking about the past, use "didn't + base verb" |
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I improve with my English a lot, and I am very proud of this, in general, I am a better version of my self.
I am improv This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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All of this started when I left my exgirlfriend, like a method to distract my mind, at this moment it feeling still hurting me, but less than before.
All of this started when I left my ex-girlfriend, like a method to distract my mind Here, it's understood that "it" means the pain from your break-up.
All of this started when I left my ex-girlfriend, like a 1. use a - for ex-girlfriend because it's a compound noun 2. method is ok to use but "way" sounds more natural 3. "right now" is more natural than "at this moment", "hurting" should be "hurts" bc proper tense and form and "feeling" isn't the right subject |
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