January 16th
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I had a salad bowl for lunch today. This is my favorite on a working day. I can order it through my smartphone before visiting the shop, freely customize the ingredients, and also choose two types of dressings. The only negative point is the cost. This salad bowl is a little bit too expensive for lunch. That's why I get this as a small gift for myself on the day when I really work hard or face too many tasks.
That's why I get this as a small gift for myself only on the daydays when I really workworked hard or facehad too many tasks.
I can order it throughon my smartphonephone before visiting the shop, freely customize the ingredients, and also choose two types of dressingsdressing.
Your sentence was also grammatically correct. I just wanted to offer a slightly more natural alternative (though, this is subjective).
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Just an alternative
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Overall feedback
英文書はすごく上手ですね。分かりやすいし自然な英語ですよね。
This is my favorite on a workingwork day.
That's why I get this as a small gift for myself on the daydays when I really work hard or face too many tasks.
"On the day" implies only one day. Here, you can choose to write either "on the days" or "on a day".
Overall feedback
Well-written.
This is my favorite meal on a working day.
Add “meal” for clarity because it sounds incomplete without it.
That's why I get this as a small gift for myself on the daydays when I really work hard or face too many tasks.
“on days” for natural phrasing.
Overall feedback
The corrections are mostly about small phrasing adjustments. Good job, keep writing! 🤍
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