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Kanato

Jan. 16, 2026

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January 16th

I had a salad bowl for lunch today.
This is my favorite on a working day. I can order it through my smartphone before visiting the shop, freely customize the ingredients, and also choose two types of dressings.
The only negative point is the cost. This salad bowl is a little bit too expensive for lunch.
That's why I get this as a small gift for myself on the day when I really work hard or face too many tasks.

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This is my favorite meal on a working day.

Add “meal” for clarity because it sounds incomplete without it.

That's why I get this as a small gift for myself on the days when I really work hard or face too many tasks.

“on days” for natural phrasing.

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The corrections are mostly about small phrasing adjustments. Good job, keep writing! 🤍

January 16th

I had a salad bowl for lunch today.

This is my favorite on a working day.

I can order it through my smartphone before visiting the shop, freely customize the ingredients, and also choose two types of dressings.

The only negative point is the cost.

This salad bowl is a little bit too expensive for lunch.

That's why I get this as a small gift for myself on thely on days when I really worked hard or facehad too many tasks.

January 16th

I had a salad bowl for lunch today.

This is my favorite on a working day.

I can order it through my smarton my phone before visiting the shop, freely customize the ingredients, and also choose two types of dressings.

Your sentence was also grammatically correct. I just wanted to offer a slightly more natural alternative (though, this is subjective).

The only negative point is the cost.

This salad bowl iIt's a little bit too expensive for lunch.

Just an alternative

That's why I get this as a small giftreat for myself on the days when I really work hard or fachave too many tasksuch to do.

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英文書はすごく上手ですね。分かりやすいし自然な英語ですよね。

January 16th

I had a salad bowl for lunch today.

This is my favorite on a working day.

I can order it through my smartphone before visiting the shop, freely customize the ingredients, and also choose two types of dressings.

The only negative point is the cost.

This salad bowl is a little bit too expensive for lunch.

That's why I get this as a small gift for myself on the day when I really work hard or face too many tasks.

January 16th

I had a salad bowl for lunch today.

This is my favorite on a working day.

I can order it through my smartphone before visiting the shop, freely customize the ingredients, and also choose two types of dressings.

The only negative point is the cost.

This salad bowl is a little bit too expensive for lunch.

That's why I get this as a small gift for myself on the days when I really work hard or face too many tasks.

"On the day" implies only one day. Here, you can choose to write either "on the days" or "on a day".

Feedback

Well-written.

January 16th


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I had a salad bowl for lunch today.


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This is my favorite on a working day.


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This is my favorite on a working day.

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This is my favorite meal on a working day.

Add “meal” for clarity because it sounds incomplete without it.

I can order it through my smartphone before visiting the shop, freely customize the ingredients, and also choose two types of dressings.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I can order it through my smarton my phone before visiting the shop, freely customize the ingredients, and also choose two types of dressings.

Your sentence was also grammatically correct. I just wanted to offer a slightly more natural alternative (though, this is subjective).

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The only negative point is the cost.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This salad bowl is a little bit too expensive for lunch.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This salad bowl iIt's a little bit too expensive for lunch.

Just an alternative

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That's why I get this as a small gift for myself on the day when I really work hard or face too many tasks.


That's why I get this as a small gift for myself on the days when I really work hard or face too many tasks.

"On the day" implies only one day. Here, you can choose to write either "on the days" or "on a day".

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That's why I get this as a small giftreat for myself on the days when I really work hard or fachave too many tasksuch to do.

That's why I get this as a small gift for myself on thely on days when I really worked hard or facehad too many tasks.

That's why I get this as a small gift for myself on the days when I really work hard or face too many tasks.

“on days” for natural phrasing.

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